Special Collaboration - NavRasas - The Powerful Nine-SHOT4 p7 & 5-

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Posted: 7 years ago

Originally posted by: Radiant_Eyes_
1. fear : The msg was conveyed beautifully though i dont read shivika i loved this one.
2 Peace. It was really a treat to read. I could imagine the scene foldig in fornt of my eyes. Well done.

3. Joy Haha! My most fav till date. The banter was cute. Do write such os more.

4. Rudra : Completely agree with the last lines. Awesome piece of work

Update others soon !!!!

thank you so much hun.. so glad u liked it so much and enjoyed their banter... will try to write like these😛

Originally posted by: YasmiNaaz
Lazy, this was amazing.❤️

thank you so much hun😃😃😃

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Posted: 7 years ago

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Wow shot 1 fear is written very well

Fear not letting Anika befrnd Shivaay & not letting him come near her...

Loved it

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Wow shot 2 peace was so lovely

Lovely confession by omkie...

Well written

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Shot 3 very nice...

Well written

Anika.left Shivaay wen he put a blame on her character...

She promised to never return though she missed him.but dint return with him even wen he came to get her...

Nice...

I hope if u can write a story on this concept...

Like Anika's resolve of putting her self.respect above all

& Shivaay asking for her forgiveness...

Plz it's a request

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Posted: 7 years ago

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Wow

Shot 4 surprisingly hilarious...

But d joy killed at last at least for me...

Coz I imagined Anika in.place of gauri... Then I again reread imagining it to be Gauri...

Then too it was hilarious..

Poor Shivaay I would say😆

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Shot 5 nice one...

Omkie hurting Gauri by pointing at her character...

Too bad...

Well written

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Originally posted by: annikaa
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First of all Is should be the one thanking you for this beautiful piece. It was treat to read.😳 Thank you so much, Annikaa. 😆😆

I loved how you brought out the chaos within her. She was biased when it came to him. It hurt so much and yet she stayed in love. But also held on to herself. Yehhh... I wanted to show that love is biased with all its beauty. Sometime we ignore, sometimes we reason and sometimes we embrace the flaws of the one we love.😳😳

And love those lines up there😳 Thank you once again. 🤗🤗

Thank You🤗.I should be the one saying this.❤️❤️

Yes aaj humaara naya rang hai.
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