SS: If YoU KNeW Me Now || Updated CH 9 23/07/2017

First Previous

Page

Next Last

Frequent Posters

1070625

Hibernated

Posted: 8 years ago

#191

Loved it totally...

Totally Bliss..

But twist is awesome dear...

Update soon..

Quote

shamina

@Sakkiyah

Dazzler

+ 2

Posted: 8 years ago

#192

From the second update something about shivaay was fishy.

The way he expressed his feelings...i had a doubt about this shivaay.

Eagerly waiting for your next update

Quote

Looks like you are new here. Register for free, learn and contribute.

zeherili

@zeherili

Beginner

Posted: 8 years ago

#193

I kind of knew with the whole A and M tree marking but I am shocked and shook and omg WHY

Quote

--Nargis--

@--Nargis--

Sparkler

+ 5

Posted: 8 years ago

#194

Originally posted by: Illuminati07

Hi Rivs
Thank you for your comment
Normally as a writer, I dont ask people to comment mainly because I believe comments shouldnt be forced. Readers should respond only of they feel like responding and if they prefer to read in silence, it is not less than any like or comment.
Yes there are certain chapters like this one where there is a childlike excitement to see the response and when we get comments like yours, there is nothing like it.

So let me address some of the things that you mentioned in this comment
Here Annika doesnt know its Maahi and not Shivaay because she hasnt been that close to Shivaay.. Shivika had a sparkle, had electricity but it was Shivaay who was more attuned to her presence than Annika. Annika, even after being so close to Shivaay, took time to realize that it was Maahi and not Shivaay/
Secondly when someone gives you a dream that is too good to be true, you start seeing only what you want to see. So Annika here couldnt recognize the differences or she brushed them off because she saw genuine love and didnt want to question it.. Yes the revelation will have a major impact on Annika

As far as Shivaay is concerned, the thought of Daksh sleeping with Annika made him feel that Annika betrayed him because the thought of her with another man hurt him. Think about what will happen to him when he will realize that Annika is a victim and an imposter not only took his place but stole her heart

But the major question is whom does Annika love
Shivaay or Maahi
Does her love for one exist without her love for another?

This is going to be the biggest battle that Annika will have to have within herself! At first there will be resentment...and PAIN...oh so much pain!! She will feel betrayed...and rightfully so! How she processes what happened...and really how she feels about Shivvay is going to drive her reaction...and if she loves Shivvay...then this dhoka is going to devastate her...I think.

I also want to know what did Shivvay do for 2 weeks that she went missing...he didn't even go to her house to try to look for her and find Soumya and Sahil? Even SSO at his worst still cares for Annika...no matter how much he doesn't want to!

Quote

travelholic

@travelholic

Rocker

Posted: 8 years ago

#195

Originally posted by: Illuminati07

Firstly thank you for the honest reply..
The intimacy scenario was deliberate. Mainly because i always had a problem with Gul showing heroes having more than one ex and heroine not having any love story.. love can happen twice, and can live and die depending upon how it is nurtured. But I guessed it would give many people michmichis😆😆 So see you on the last page ..😳❤️
Loads of love..
Aashti

I see ur point! The intimacy with a look alike is major no no for me. If it was someone she loved before I would understand it more- I get what u mean - showing women as having exs is such a tabbu on Indian tv & is so backward but it is the audience's fault as well

But the way u have shown it, I frankly feel cheated a bit as a reader 😆 and I am being honest as u asked for an honest opinion. Being a woman I would never be ok with someone lying to me for so many days but I am sure u will redeem it eventually

Quote

Aashti

@Illuminati07

Dazzler

+ 6

Posted: 8 years ago

#196

Originally posted by: NYCForever

I see ur point! The intimacy with a look alike is major no no for me. If it was someone she loved before I would understand it more- I get what u mean - showing women as having exs is such a tabbu on Indian tv & is so backward but it is the audience's fault as well

But the way u have shown it, I frankly feel cheated a bit as a reader 😆 and I am being honest as u asked for an honest opinion. Being a woman I would never be ok with someone lying to me for so many days but I am sure u will redeem it eventually

I understand your point and I'm happy that you voiced it out because I knew someone would have this issue and you are not the only one,, Many got major michmichi's..

But honestly the concept revolves around this part- his deception and Shivaay's redemption..

How and why will be answered in the next update.

So I request you to read the next update and then take a call if you want to read it once its complete than that too is fine with me😳😳😳

Quote

vivacious_gurl

@vivacious_gurl

Sparkler

+ 5

Posted: 8 years ago

#197

Sorry aasthi.. Was reading ur FF with lot of expectations but dint expect it to be puke worthy... Intimacy With a look alike is totally puke worthy... Annika having relationship with some other guy is totally OK... But romance with a look alike thinking it to be her husband is isn't just michmichi it is totally puke worthy... First FF or yrs that I will stop reading... Whatever The redemption and justification this storyline is something I can't digest... Sorry... Adios... Will. Be waiting for updates of ur others stories..

Quote

Mystery1234

@Mystery1234

Voyager

Posted: 8 years ago

#198

Originally posted by: Mystery1234
Res
The last part just messed up my thoughts😆
Will need to read again😆
Mahi...W*F ...I cant seem to say anything

Amazing chapte yrr

I cant just still believe and make myself agree to the fact that it was Mahi all the way

I got a little suspicious when i read Shivay Singh Oberoi playing mouthorgan

The first thought that came into my little brain was MAHI...but i shrugged it of

But when i saw A❤️M ...My eyes were literally ready to come out of the sockets..and i was like yes here i was correct .i was sure of it 80% and at the end it is all clear now

WAS IT MAHI ALL THE WAY???? I still cant seem to believe this fact

The song is just awesome it has been playing ever since i have read it over here...

THIS IS THE BIGGEST AND THE UNEXPECTED TWIST I HAVE EVER WITNESSESED

Amazing

Continue soon

Thanks for the pm😊

Quote

Docshradha

@Docshradha

Voyager

Posted: 8 years ago

#199

Oh nooo! DHOKA DHOKA DHOKA ! Now how will i hate mahi ? Now i am confused . After seeing his romantic and caring side how can i hate him !! There is surely gonna be a heartbreak please update soon 😭

Quote

Pritha Roy

@pritzz

Dazzler

+ 3

Posted: 8 years ago

#200

Originally posted by: vivacious_gurl
Sorry aasthi.. Was reading ur FF with lot of expectations but dint expect it to be puke worthy... Intimacy With a look alike is totally puke worthy... Annika having relationship with some other guy is totally OK... But romance with a look alike thinking it to be her husband is isn't just michmichi it is totally puke worthy... First FF or yrs that I will stop reading... Whatever The redemption and justification this storyline is something I can't digest... Sorry... Adios... Will. Be waiting for updates of ur others stories..

Gaouri Di Don't u think Books and Fictions are those that Are fantasies , different thoughts expressed which may not go with this state, country, world, universe, galaxy.. but just thoughts that are FICTION and nothing else.

Romance is Romance, love is love, your heart go to anyone, any person, anything, any alien.

I am just writing it in simple possible way here to make it sound less puke worthy..

Here Annika doesn't know Hez Mahi , she just fell in love! Both Shivaay and Mahi are dark but both are positive. If Shivaay can do nasty things and get away easily with a girl why is Annika NOT allowed to Like someone else.

Also Annika did Not know

Shivaay Did

Mahi Did

Moreover "In This Fiction" it is Shivaay who should be concerned about What Annika went through and what he should do about it and redeem himself to reduce the quilt of his deeds.

Whereas Annika she should not be in Any guilt because She did not get attracted to Mahi on purpose. Also "In this Fiction" Annika just enveloped the soft and nurturing love she received unexpectedly for the very first time and to her hearts desires it came to her in the Name of Shivaay but little did she know it wasn't he.

Also anika and Mahi did not make out, they did not even Kiss. As mahi said ... she will be as pure as she is. 😳

Snuggling, hugging, sharing a blanket in cold winters is what even friends do. There is nothing vulgur or nothing that Annika lost to mahi.. except maybe the heart. Well Mahi earned it, though cheated but he earned it.

Situations and Circumstances and Unexpected twists and Turns are to be read and Imagined only in Fictional works like THIS. Because we all know There won't be a Duplicate Mr. In real life to make us suffer the pain of loving and being loved like Annika will.

Purely work of fiction 😊

Gouri Di I hope I did not offend u in any way 😊 I just thought of giving my views here to you.

But nonetheless You are absolutely free to Drop in your views the way u want. It's a free Forum 😊

Edited by pritzz - 8 years ago