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Aashti

@Illuminati07

Dazzler

+ 6

Posted: 8 years ago

#211

Originally posted by: preity_d
When u r going to update next? Request, don't change ur story line or any track as per viewers suggestion, finish it the way you have imagined ! Eagerly waiting for next n I know from ur spoilers Mahi already stole her heart, She loves Mahi 😉 😆
Update soon ! It's the most beautiful and intriguing piece of work, after sop many days excited for a ff !

No I cant change my storyline because the story will lose its essence and if you've seen, I already have the plots ready and so the titled index is also up.

I'm in the middle of writing the update. This one will be a long one and I think it will go past the word limit so might have to break it up in two parts but both the parts will be up at once..😆😆😆

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Aashti

@Illuminati07

Dazzler

+ 6

Posted: 8 years ago

#212

Originally posted by: Manisha.
This was a MAHA (I) Twist...
I actually went back and read al the chapters and found the clues that were cleverly planted...

1. Khanna not being with them

2. He watching an action movie on the flight'

3. He having tea

4. He playing the mouth organ and A ❤️M was the final give away...
This literally gave me goosebumps...
Never imagined this one...how is he going to confess to her...how will he explain the physical proximity...and whats the god damn truth now...😲
Girl...you have pulled it off so well...

I was hoping someone would go back and connect the dots and you did that..

Thank you 😳

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Manisha.

@Manisha.

Dazzler

Posted: 8 years ago

#213

Originally posted by: Illuminati07

I was hoping someone would go back and connect the dots and you did that..
Thank you 😳

when will you update...waiting eagerly...more than the episode...😛

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vivacious_gurl

@vivacious_gurl

Sparkler

+ 5

Posted: 8 years ago

#214

Originally posted by: pritzz

Gaouri Di Don't u think Books and Fictions are those that Are fantasies , different thoughts expressed which may not go with this state, country, world, universe, galaxy.. but just thoughts that are FICTION and nothing else.

Romance is Romance, love is love, your heart go to anyone, any person, anything, any alien.

I am just writing it in simple possible way here to make it sound less puke worthy..
Here Annika doesn't know Hez Mahi , she just fell in love! Both Shivaay and Mahi are dark but both are positive. If Shivaay can do nasty things and get away easily with a girl why is Annika NOT allowed to Like someone else.

Also Annika did Not know
Shivaay Did
Mahi Did

Moreover "In This Fiction" it is Shivaay who should be concerned about What Annika went through and what he should do about it and redeem himself to reduce the quilt of his deeds.

Whereas Annika she should not be in Any guilt because She did not get attracted to Mahi on purpose. Also "In this Fiction" Annika just enveloped the soft and nurturing love she received unexpectedly for the very first time and to her hearts desires it came to her in the Name of Shivaay but little did she know it wasn't he.

Also anika and Mahi did not make out, they did not even Kiss. As mahi said ... she will be as pure as she is. 😳

Snuggling, hugging, sharing a blanket in cold winters is what even friends do. There is nothing vulgur or nothing that Annika lost to mahi.. except maybe the heart. Well Mahi earned it, though cheated but he earned it.

Situations and Circumstances and Unexpected twists and Turns are to be read and Imagined only in Fictional works like THIS. Because we all know There won't be a Duplicate Mr. In real life to make us suffer the pain of loving and being loved like Annika will.
Purely work of fiction 😊

Gouri Di I hope I did not offend u in any way 😊 I just thought of giving my views here to you.

But nonetheless You are absolutely free to Drop in your views the way u want. It's a free Forum 😊

Pritz whatever u say u say in simple words or not what is puke worthy to me will remain puke worthy... It is puke worthy coz when u hv liked someone n then hated for what they hv done even then u hv vibes... Snuggling, hugging etc also gives michmichi essential if it is with someone not known to u... Hving A Same face doesn't mean same vibes r felt... Also neither Shivaay nor Mahi deserve Annika... One forcefully married her... The other cheated her into being her husband... Annika Can surely hv relationship with another r male... Even physical intimacy if she wants... But With a look alike who is faking to be her husband all she can hv is michmichi coz vibes speak volumes... If Despite knowing he isn't her husband she feels love for that imposter then it's a totally diff ball game n it's justified coz knowing well that person is just a look alike she fell in love with him... That's Is fine... But not feeling weird that this person who looks like her husband who I'll treated her so much but had some feelings for her initially n suddenly is very diff now... Shud Give some diff feel coz touch is always diff with diff Ppl...we all feel it...

Annika not realizing that it isn't Shivaay despite hugging snuggling getting cozy is totally weird n hence puke worthy...

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preity_d

@preity_d

Sparkler

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Posted: 8 years ago

#215

Originally posted by: Illuminati07

No I cant change my storyline because the story will lose its essence and if you've seen, I already have the plots ready and so the titled index is also up.
I'm in the middle of writing the update. This one will be a long one and I think it will go past the word limit so might have to break it up in two parts but both the parts will be up at once..😆😆😆

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Aashti

@Illuminati07

Dazzler

+ 6

Posted: 8 years ago

#216

Originally posted by: vivacious_gurl

Pritz whatever u say u say in simple words or not what is puke worthy to me will remain puke worthy... It is puke worthy coz when u hv liked someone n then hated for what they hv done even then u hv vibes... Snuggling, hugging etc also gives michmichi essential if it is with someone not known to u... Hving A Same face doesn't mean same vibes r felt... Also neither Shivaay nor Mahi deserve Annika... One forcefully married her... The other cheated her into being her husband... Annika Can surely hv relationship with another r male... Even physical intimacy if she wants... But With a look alike who is faking to be her husband all she can hv is michmichi coz vibes speak volumes... If Despite knowing he isn't her husband she feels love for that imposter then it's a totally diff ball game n it's justified coz knowing well that person is just a look alike she fell in love with him... That's Is fine... But not feeling weird that this person who looks like her husband who I'll treated her so much but had some feelings for her initially n suddenly is very diff now... Shud Give some diff feel coz touch is always diff with diff Ppl...we all feel it...

Annika not realizing that it isn't Shivaay despite hugging snuggling getting cozy is totally weird n hence puke worthy...

Di,

With all due respect, i want to put forth a simple point

A concept, a plot and a storyline is close a writers heart and demeaning it by using derogatory language (calling it puke worthy) is just not right. You might have found it Puke worthy, but was it extremely necessary to point the fact out? And in those terms? Wouldnt silently ignoring the update worked? If you have read through the comments, there have been two or three others who had the same views as you but they worded it so differently, that I requested them to read just one update before they took the decision and I told them if they wanted to stop reading it was fine by me and believe me, I was not one bit offended by them. I was happy to read a honest comment.

We are not paid to write and nor do we write to achieve a sense of self accomplishment through comments. We write because it makes us happy and it makes the readers happy.

Constructive criticism is welcome and a properly worded displeasure is welcome as well. But mudslinging on someone's work of fiction because the writers work is unacceptable to you, is by no means justifiable.

You always have an option to avoid the work (without putting up a disclaimer that you are avoiding the work coupled with the derogatory remarks) and go to something that suits your taste. Such an exit would be more graceful than name calling because the later reflects badly upon your character. If you don't have warm words, you can leave without commenting but please do not use harsh words. Because harsh words remain and no matter how indifferent you try to be, they prick.

I'm sorry di, if my comment offended you but believe me, it couldnt have offended you any more than yours offended me.

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Aashti

@Illuminati07

Dazzler

+ 6

Posted: 8 years ago

#217

Originally posted by: moon99
ALRIGHT!!! WHAT'S GOING ON!?! 😲

I actually stared doubting 'Shivaay" when I read that he plays the mouth organ. I automatically imagined Mahi, but then I was like no, it's not possible, I'm just overthinking it. But as I continued to read, I was like NO NO NOOO!!!!! 😭

Now I really really want to know what's going on? Like why is she there with Mahi? Where is Shivaay? How is Mahi positive when he gets extra close with Anika !??! 😡 Who was with Anika in the very beginning when he confessed his love?

But very well written!

I am very excited to read the next chapter!

Loads of Love,
- Sims 🤗

P.S Thanks for the P.M!

Thank you... well all your questions will be answered in the next update

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Aashti

@Illuminati07

Dazzler

+ 6

Posted: 8 years ago

#218

Originally posted by: bworm
What a curveball.
*sigh* am not sure I like this twist.
You are an incredible writer and hats off to your creativity. But anika and mahi do give me the michimichi.
So, I'll hang around and read it all in one go.
My curiosity will probably get the better of me and will pop in before that.

Thank you for hanging around.. I hope the next chapter gives you a reason to remain.. If not I will see you towards the end😆😆

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Aashti

@Illuminati07

Dazzler

+ 6

Posted: 8 years ago

#219

Originally posted by: jarir2010
read chap 3&4 in one go.honestly im a little bit confused now about my reaction😕.
in one hand im happy for annika tht she feel loved,also feel sorry tht when she will know about the deception,how she will react?😲
does she feel more pain(after what she experienced in shivaay's hand)or she will able to identify among all deception and betrayal,Mahi truly loved her.his love was pure.i dont know,i'll wait for ur next update eagerly.plz continue soon.👏

Updating soon

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