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Posted: 8 years ago
Wat the wuck 😡
It was mahi...oh God why didn't I get it when on the last update you said about drinking tea and coffee...
playing cards and Annika's feelings changed from low to friendship more...I was so much into it and thought that it's Shivaay's changing because of the guilt...
I never expected this coming...when you mentioned above mouth organ the first thought lingered in my mind was mahi but I brushed it off...but when I saw
A❤️M...my breath really stopped...so it was all mahi along...the hugs,kisses, confession everything was with mahi...seriously I am getting michmichi...
How will Annika react to this...she loved shivaay...
How will shivaay react to this...plz update the next update fast otherwise I will get panic attacks
Anyway you are a terrible writter...you blowed our minds...superb
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Posted: 8 years ago

Originally posted by: preity_d

The first few chapters were a bit odd... The sudden change of heart didn't go well with me ! I thought what's new, another one of those stories after forced marriage showing Shivay's redemption and good start but Girl ❤️ the recent chapter got me all hooked ! 🤗 I love you for this ! When they introduced Mahi, I always wanted him to fall for Anika, there was something in his character that made me dream a possibility of him with Anika, (though I am a shivika shipper)... I so love you for bringing up this concept ! As well I know they are not gonna have a happy ending, buy my heart wished they do ! Yes, what Mahi is doing is wrong and deceitful but I always wanted someone to do this pagalpan for Anika what Tadibaz SSO can't and won't do ! And the love Anika had for Shivay dies and tell me does people love a name? no. Now, Anika loves the person she is with and he is Mahi. Anika loves Mahi. Eagerly waiting to see how Shivay's redemption will be placed in between and I am sure a part of Anika keep loving Mahi till her last breath. ❤️

About Gul and her idea of FL having no love history or a mere infatuation is always irritated me. In my stories too there are more than one love interests of my FL 😉😆


You know I kept saying that my real story would start from the fourth chapter bcz I realized that till this point, it would sound like a normal story where Shivaay does sweet things to gain her favour and she goes with open arms to him.
That is a no way situation for me because of the cruelty that is shown during the forced marriage track.
Love is pagalpan and his love as you said is beyhadh...
😆
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Posted: 8 years ago

Originally posted by: Illuminati07


You know I kept saying that my real story would start from the fourth chapter bcz I realized that till this point, it would sound like a normal story where Shivaay does sweet things to gain her favour and she goes with open arms to him.
That is a no way situation for me because of the cruelty that is shown during the forced marriage track.
Love is pagalpan and his love as you said is beyhadh...
😆

@ Bold. exactly ! I get michmichies when she goes with open arms to him when he is all guilty and sorry ! Come on, give him a hard time ! 😉😆
@Italic : Ahhh ! So excited,,,,, literally squealing in joy ! Mahi on loop 🤪
Can't wait for the next ! 🤪
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Posted: 8 years ago
omg!!! frankly I really like this ff and even this update too bt I was kind of shocked after reading it... and specially that song wala part that gave me goosebumps yaar I mean it felt little scary like the way he was driving.. the atmosphere.. the song... oh God!!! seriously shocking bt it's amazing too... I really love this story and this update was nice too...eagerly waiting for another one.. update soon.. please pm me if u can
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Posted: 8 years ago
My God, this is probably the most unexpected twist I've EVER come across.But I absolutely love it, and I'm glad that you plan on making it a Shivika story. Can't wait to read and find out how things progress!
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Posted: 8 years ago
Oh my, whattt Mahi, unbelievable wheres Shivaay Please get him back. But this was good
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Posted: 8 years ago

Originally posted by: Illuminati07


Hi Rivs
Thank you for your comment
Normally as a writer, I dont ask people to comment mainly because I believe comments shouldnt be forced. Readers should respond only of they feel like responding and if they prefer to read in silence, it is not less than any like or comment.

Yes there are certain chapters like this one where there is a childlike excitement to see the response and when we get comments like yours, there is nothing like it.
Totally get you. I used to write once upon a time ...so totally get what you mean about excitement for special chapters.

So let me address some of the things that you mentioned in this comment
Here Annika doesnt know its Maahi and not Shivaay because she hasnt been that close to Shivaay.. Shivika had a sparkle, had electricity but it was Shivaay who was more attuned to her presence than Annika. Annika, even after being so close to Shivaay, took time to realize that it was Maahi and not Shivaay/
Secondly when someone gives you a dream that is too good to be true, you start seeing only what you want to see. So Annika here couldnt recognize the differences or she brushed them off because she saw genuine love and didnt want to question it.. Yes the revelation will have a major impact on Annika
Absolutely agree with you...when I first replied, it was almost me rambling my thoughts in an incoherent way. So after a reread or two of all the chapters, I see where you are coming from. I guess I just felt she should have felt something...and if hasn't it is going to be very very rough on her. There are two scenarios in front of her: 1. Accept that she fell in love with Mahi, and somehow get over his deceit of using another mans name and resources. 2. Completely give up on love, given how she failed twice.

Hoping Shivaay can do major repairs and soon.


As far as Shivaay is concerned, the thought of Daksh sleeping with Annika made him feel that Annika betrayed him because the thought of her with another man hurt him. Think about what will happen to him when he will realize that Annika is a victim and an imposter not only took his place but stole her heart
I had not got there yet, mainly because if Shivaay has to regret and redeem himself he would need a big jolt. And yes nothing can shake him like the situation you have created.
But the major question is whom does Annika love
Shivaay or Maahi
Does her love for one exist without her love for another? Deep...😆
If I put myself in her shoes I would just go become a nun...love shove jaaye bhaad mein. Being hurt in love twice is one time too much😉

Bring it on...whatever it is that you have planned. Thanks for the response
Rivs

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Posted: 8 years ago
Dil roye aay rahi tu aaja mere Mahi

It's impossible for Anika to forget Mahi. She loves him. A part of her will always love him till the last breath...


The song is so intense, I understand after hearing on loop !

Jurke bhi tu mujhse juda sa !

Mere mahi mere mahi tu aaja mere Mahi

Dhadkano me Mahi, Sansaon me hain Mahi !

🤪 ❤️
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Posted: 8 years ago
Omggg...intetesting twist...go for it ...i want to c where this goes...
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Posted: 8 years ago
woow.. you left me speachless. after reading the mouth organ part then the name initial. the the tea.. i just knew it it was mahi. but still hoped it wasn't.. very well written.. cant wait for the next part ..

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