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softy

@softy

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Posted: 8 years ago

#201

What a khidakitod twist to brought in ghetto story👏

I must say amazing , mind blowing

Your this chapter has something to make this comment 1st time in this story,

But liking all part very much. . . .

When I read the letter A&M written on the tree, I doughty something fishy ,

But can't imagine this kind of twist

Not I eagerly waiting correct next chapter, can't wait to read shivay POV

Update soon

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veens_11

@veens_11

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Posted: 8 years ago

#202

Dear oh dear!! Just read the last 2 updates... What a googly you have bowled...the readers are cleaned bowled...!!

My first clue was the tea. Shivaay switching from black coffee to tea...hmmm..interesting.

Then the mouth organ and Anni Soumya conversation...and I knew he was Mahi... cause I have been wondering since chapter 1 on what the big twist will be? Having read all your other works, (3 months later is an absolute favourite) I know your stories have a lot of depth and somehow the initial chapters were too (for lack of a better word) simple...too straightforward ( i hope you get what i mean...they were great, but something was off) ... there had to be BIG reason for this change in Shivaay.

A ❤️M sealed it for me. I didnt need the song! 😆

My reaction to this... I say bring it on!! Lets see want Shivaay does now... & poor Annika. She is gonna feel so cheated.

I could (could...i am not sure) have rooted for Mahika if Mahi had maintained more of a physical distance. The cuddling and tight hugs while pretending to be Shivaay just leaves a bad taste in my mouth. completely ruined his chances I feel.

Please don't make Annika feel guilty. She had no clue. She should hit him with her Chameli and walk out with her head held high. Will she be conflicted? I hope not. I would be more accepting of a conflict if Mahi had respected Annika's personal space a bit more. Maybe you will surprise me again!!?

Amazing storytelling. You have a great knack for it. 👏

PS: I am all for female leads with more experience in the romance department. But this doesn't really count. Annika thinks its Shivaay.

Please write another SS where Annika falls for another guy but shivaay woos her back or one of Annikas ex'es comes back for Annika... pretty please * imagine Billuji's puppy face here*

Edited by veens_11 - 8 years ago

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moon99

@moon99

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Posted: 8 years ago

#203

ALRIGHT!!! WHAT'S GOING ON!?! 😲

I actually stared doubting 'Shivaay" when I read that he plays the mouth organ. I automatically imagined Mahi, but then I was like no, it's not possible, I'm just overthinking it. But as I continued to read, I was like NO NO NOOO!!!!! 😭

Now I really really want to know what's going on? Like why is she there with Mahi? Where is Shivaay? How is Mahi positive when he gets extra close with Anika !??! 😡 Who was with Anika in the very beginning when he confessed his love?

But very well written!

I am very excited to read the next chapter!

Loads of Love,
- Sims 🤗

P.S Thanks for the P.M!

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bworm

@bworm

Dazzler

Posted: 8 years ago

#204

What a curveball.

*sigh* am not sure I like this twist.

You are an incredible writer and hats off to your creativity. But anika and mahi do give me the michimichi.

So, I'll hang around and read it all in one go.

My curiosity will probably get the better of me and will pop in before that.

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mina

@minamma

Voyager

+ 2

Posted: 8 years ago

#205

Dont u now tell us that the man she is in love is actually mahi

Like seriouly u have planted a atom bomb on our heads

Tik tok

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simmi

@-simmi-

Voyager

+ 2

Posted: 8 years ago

#206

Originally posted by: veens_11
PS: I am all for female leads with more experience in the romance department. But this doesn't really count. Annika thinks its Shivaay.
Please write another SS where Annika falls for another guy but shivaay woos her back or one of Annikas ex'es comes back for Annika... pretty please * imagine Billuji's puppy face here*

Ditto! 😳

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jarir2010

@jarir2010

Inactive

Posted: 8 years ago

#207

read chap 3&4 in one go.honestly im a little bit confused now about my reaction😕.

in one hand im happy for annika tht she feel loved,also feel sorry tht when she will know about the deception,how she will react?😲

does she feel more pain(after what she experienced in shivaay's hand)or she will able to identify among all deception and betrayal,Mahi truly loved her.his love was pure.i dont know,i'll wait for ur next update eagerly.plz continue soon.👏

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Dola Bhadra

@crazy-pri

Explorer

Posted: 8 years ago

#208

I read all the parts together... & it's great... Maahi it is... Now it's fun. & ssly it's irritating that Gul's heroines don't have ex... But Annika'll in the your story. Lovely. But I wonder what would be her reaction knowing that person she spent the most beautiful ten days with thinking as her husband is not him but his look alike.. Eager

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preity_d

@preity_d

Sparkler

+ 4

Posted: 8 years ago

#209

When u r going to update next? Request, don't change ur story line or any track as per viewers suggestion, finish it the way you have imagined ! Eagerly waiting for next n I know from ur spoilers Mahi already stole her heart, She loves Mahi 😉 😆

Update soon ! It's the most beautiful and intriguing piece of work, after sop many days excited for a ff !