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Anya

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Posted: 8 years ago

#91

Originally posted by: farinaks
Awesome update Anya
Full of pain nd emotional too
Tq fr pm

Thank you very much dear❤️

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Anya

@elysianights

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Posted: 8 years ago

#92

Originally posted by: Gurveen
Nice
I think it's Sameer who heard this
Update soonish

Thank you 🤗

You will come oto know about it soon.😃

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Anya

@elysianights

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Posted: 8 years ago

#93

Originally posted by: jarir2010
its awesome.brilliant.continue soon,plz.

thank you dear❤️

Will continue soon 😃

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Anya

@elysianights

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Posted: 8 years ago

#94

Originally posted by: MysticRiver
hard hitting update...

😃 Thankoo dear❤️

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Anya

@elysianights

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Posted: 8 years ago

#95

Originally posted by: Shaina744
Love it a lot Anya di...
The person was Sameer I think...
Oh How much she loves Shivay... But she s scared ...Rudra knows that his bhabi is lying... Sahil s consoling his Anika didi... Can't wait for Shivika reunion...
Will wait for next part..
Tnx aot for the PM...

Thank you dear❤️

Yo will come to know about ti soon dear that who was that person.😳

Will try to update it soon.😊

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Anya

@elysianights

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Posted: 8 years ago

#96

Originally posted by: Mystery1234
Amazing Anu
You proved that my faith in you is always right
I love you sooo much and i know you love me tooo😉😆
Coming to the story
Awesome
Anika's inner turmoil was very well written
I just loved it
I think the person who has listened the talks was either Sameer or Rudra coz Shivay and that dialogue are nt going that suitable here
Continue soon
Thanks for the pm😊

ps- my tissue box is always ready😉

Thankoo Harshi 🤗

Yeah how will I just broke my dearest frnd's faith?😆

Yes you will come to know about it soon.😃

Love you always,

-Anya ❤️

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Anya

@elysianights

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Posted: 8 years ago

#97

Originally posted by: hijabEfajr
emotional update awsm

Thank you dear❤️

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Anya

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Posted: 8 years ago

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EnasZ

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Posted: 8 years ago

#99

i offiially hate sameer (because he's so likeable that's y)

stop making him so good...i felt like slapping him 😆

so Shivaay is in so much pain 😭😭😭 and he believes he deserves it😭😭😭

Rudra is soo like me right now ... even i can't take sides... but it's ur fault u know that right??

u know leaving this update like this makes u devilish😈 now i will spend all the time imagining shivaay and annika's reactions when they see each other in the engagement😭

maybe his heart will finally break beyond repair once he sees her ... maybe her fears will go away for a minute once she sees him& maybe i will go insane thinking of what will happen

just a reminder ... u promised to end it happily , u remember that right?? pretty please😆😆

a great update i must say ...👏👏

u need to promise to make the next part filled more with pain (yeah yeah i know i hate pain ... but i am hoping the saying no pain no gain applies here😆😆😆... so give as much pain as u want as long as will get happy results)

sorry for long comment but had to talk it out😆😆 ... do update soon, u have no idea how much i am loving this story

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i am the first comment ... yupeee🥳

Edited by EnasZ - 8 years ago

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AparnaChinnu

@AparnaChinnu

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Posted: 8 years ago

#100

you know wat anya...you are an awesome writer ❤️❤️...sometimes my feelings fluctuates like whose side should I take...exactly like Rudra...shivaay or annika...after seeing Shivaay's pain for once I forget completely about Annika's sufferings...you not only showed Rudra the mirror but me also in the form of the little girl...Ya Annika is fearing of heart break again...she suffered so much...

If it was some other situation i would have head over heals for sameer but here seeing his goodness I am feeling angry towards him...man please don't be this much nice...😡

I really don't think shivaay can take this...its not easy...

he should leave because he will die if he see her getting engaged to another man...shivaay is not only giving him pain but to Annika also...I am sure shivaay is playing a dangerous game...it will not end good...

maybe he can live with out her but seeing her becoming someone else will take his life out of him and Annika will be one who will be suffering at the end... ...I am so curious to know that wat will happen next...you said that it will be more pain in next update...so I am ready for another heartbreak...

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