Shivika Ts_Pal Bhar_ Sequel to MPBTC [Completed] - Page 16

Originally posted by: -Mrinalini-

Brilliant... Going on to the sequel now.

Originally posted by: Sam98

I had told you that I was going to go on a binging spree of everything I have missed 😆 So here I am! And can I say you have fleshed out their version of this unfulfilled love so tastefully 😭 I still absolutely love the fact that Shivaay is being punished, his character is very deserving of the pained picture you have painted of Sameer and Anika! I didn't realise that the time span was 3 YEARS! For it had been misconstrued as I thought this was the happenings post-3 months BUT I think that's exactly what made ShiRu's mending of their relationship so heartfelt! My heart was honestly in my throat! You have aced this one completely and I cannot tell you how happy I am to see that there is another sequel to this 😆 I would've almost been mad for leaving it at such a crucial point, though the cliffhanger was still amazing! 👏 And I CANNOT WAIT to read it If there is anything I would say (and it is by no means criticism :P) is that run your docs through spell check/ grammarly, it's something I like personally doing solely for myself as it just means that your collection of writings will always be preserved and presented very aesthetically 😳 I honestly have no qualms whatsoever, the concept and writing was beautiful as always, kudos to you for making so many Shivika shippers hearts BLEED 😆 Completely adored this story so THANK YOU for giving us such entertaining reads 🥳 Now excuse me while I run off to read the next chapter 😆

Lots of love
Sam 🤗

Originally posted by: coolhi1988

Superb Sequel...
Anika getting engaged to sameer..
sameer loves anika trully..
as she was just like anaya, his late fiancee...
anika loves sameer too but in friendly way...
rudra comes to know abt shivaay being miserable.. & feels guilty for leaving him alone..
he supports shivaay & asks him to not loose hope..
rudra gets shocked on knowing anika is getting engaged
but bigger shock was when anika confirms she wil never be back with shivaay
& she is getting engaged...
anika blabbers & breakdown abt how much she loves shivaay but is afraid of heartbreak from him again & sameer has always supported him so she cant cheat or betray him...
sameer overhears & tells anika to back off from engagement...
anika refuses to do d same...
shivaay cant bear d engagement but to punish himself he stands there...

very well written