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Posted: 8 years ago
#81
Nice
I think it's Sameer who heard this
Update soonish
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Posted: 8 years ago
#82
Love it a lot Anya di...
The person was Sameer I think...
Oh How much she loves Shivay... But she s scared ...Rudra knows that his bhabi is lying... Sahil s consoling his Anika didi... Can't wait for Shivika reunion...
Will wait for next part..
Tnx aot for the PM...
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Posted: 8 years ago
#83
Amazing Anu
You proved that my faith in you is always right
I love you sooo much and i know you love me tooo😉😆
Coming to the story
Awesome
Anika's inner turmoil was very well written
I just loved it
I think the person who has listened the talks was either Sameer or Rudra coz Shivay and that dialogue are nt going that suitable here
Continue soon
Thanks for the pm😊

ps- my tissue box is always ready😉
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Posted: 8 years ago
#84

Originally posted by: EnasZ

hello Hey Darling! ❤️ 🤗

u know i was reading the previous chapter (yes again) when i refreshed the page by mistake to read chapter 3 ... and then my eyes turned to hearts😆😆 hehehehhe glad that it made you dlighted.😆

Annika is making me feel sad ...i understand her not wanting to return to shivaay due to fear of pain and break At last I was able to make you feel annika's pain as you were telling that I was only showing shivaay in pain,But I told you that both of them are in same pain.
i don't like sameer😆😆 he's too sweet that he's making shivaay look bad (sorry but for some reason i just have this soft spot for shivaay and i can't help it)😆 😆I totally understand baby! But I love sameer and I hope in the coming chapter I would make you too fall for him.😉 Arre but shivaay ki kuch aur hi baat hai par tabh bhi,I'm sure you are going to love sameer.😳

annika made the safest decision Well yes!😆
sameer will always be a good choice to her while shivaay will either be the best or the worst thing that happens to her once again you are totally right, i'm glad that I was able to sho you all this.😳

ok now i really want to know how will shivaay react to this ... i think he'll be in so much pain (again😆😆😆) but i'm eagerly waiting to read it ... the way u describe shivaay's pain is very very 😭😭😭 I think the next update will be a little less of his inner turmoil.i think I'n not at all sure.😉

please update soon don't leave me hanging for too long ... i really want a long long long update😆😆😆 hahahaha.. mere sath bhi aisa hota hai but I think long update may at times become boring so I will try to keep it the way I'm writting but if mere dimaag ghur gaya toh long updates aa sakte hain 😆😆

i know ...i'm being childish but can't help it 😭 No problem baby! 😆

love
Enas


Replied in bold above dear.

Love you laways,
-Anya 😳
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Posted: 8 years ago
#85

Originally posted by: moon99

Haven't read it yet, but will come back soon 😛 ❤️
unres

What do I say of you capability to write? anything 😆
You know that I know that you know you write really well! 😳 👏 👏 So no matter how much I say Anya, it will always be less. Thank you my dearest!❤️



Anika is going through tremendous pain. She is scared and broken. She needs love that will heal and support. Anybody can do that, even Sameer. But no one can love her enough to make her love them back, except Shivaay. You are absolutely right Sims,how much anyone love her she will only love shivaay and no one else. ❤️

Rudra and his ways 😳 , what more can I say of him? He got his answer; she still loves him, in fact she never stopped. Yes,Rudra had his own ways to deal with this,I really felt bad writing it.

Sahil supporting Anika was so cute. He really is very mature for his age. ❤️ He indeed is! My chotu packet!😆

I don't who was standing outside and listening to their conversation, but I feel like it is either Sameer or Rudra. Shivaay does say that 'he'll fix everything, but I don't think its was him this time. Well your doubt will be cleared in the next update.😃

EAGERLY WAITING FOR THE NEXT PART!!!!!!!!!!!! 😃 Will update it soonish as possible.😳

Loads of Love,
- Sims 🤗

P.S. Thanks for the P.M. 😛


Sims🤗
Thank you very much for this feedback as well as your kind words my darling ❤️
replied in bold above.

Love you always,
-Anya ❤️
Edited by itzanya32 - 8 years ago
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Posted: 8 years ago
#86

Originally posted by: AYUSHIVISHU

awesome update anya... Thankooo Aparna🤗

you well portrayed Shivaay's emotions... I'm gald that you like it dear 😳
I completely understand Annika's situation...
Annika is pure at heart...she just can't hurt anyone yes you are right and I'm more than delighted that you all were able to understand this update or more precisely you all were able to understand Annika.
I really felt angry towards sameer because why should he has to be this much nice...even though I hate shivaay for letting go Annika and made her heartbroken...I still can't see him in pain...we can be angry with him but we can't hate shivaay ever... Hmmm..So I fear you will be angry towards sameer more in the coming updates as He is going to be playing a main role in this story but I don't know if you will be fallen for him😆 regarding Shivaay I too will never hate him, Despite his beastly bahaviour,I'm nt gonna hate him.😳
you know wat when ever I saw shivaay is suffering my heart breaks but again I will make my heart understand that he deserves it...I experienced the same thing while reading your mpbtc...that i really wanted Annika not to forgive him and I was happy with that sad ending but I really don't know why this story was there in my mind and I wished that he deserved a second chance...
I was really surprised when you started a sequel to that... Once again I will tell that I too had the same feeling. And I'm glad that you like my decision of continuing it nad giving shivaay a next chance.😃
wat ever shivaay do...at the end of the day we want to see shivika together...and even the thought of someone other than shivaay proposing Annika makes me feel michmichi...I understand Annika is hurt but marrying sameer is not a solution because it will giveher more pain...by doing that she will be cheating sameer... Hmmm..Yes it's like she is cheating him but I really don't want this to feel her.It is all because she doesn't wanted to brek his heart and more precisely she is scared of another heartbreak and so she choosed sameer but deep down she know that she will be never happy with this dicicsion.I really think that sameer is the one who heard wat Annika had said...I am not sure...its a guess You will come to know about it soon dear.


Rplied in bold above dear.

Love you always,
-Anya 😳
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Posted: 8 years ago
#87

Originally posted by: water9786

Loved it.

Anika...
I guess the person was Sameer.. just a random guess.😳
Rudra😭
Sahil and Anika...👏
Awesome update.
Waiting for next...
Please update soon...


thank you Chhaya🤗
You will come to know about the person soon.😃

Love,
-Anya ❤️
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Posted: 8 years ago
#88

Originally posted by: KashiTessa

Feeling sorry for Anika.

Anika ' s pain 😭
Loved the update
waiting for next


thank you dear! 😳
Will update it soon 😉
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Posted: 8 years ago
#89

Thank you dear❤️
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Posted: 8 years ago
#90

Originally posted by: heenagupta

c i cry again n as u suggested i kept my tissue box beside me n i bet in upcoming part we would need them badly ...so emotional... anika has to choose b/w shivaay n sameer ... she is right at her place as she is scared 2 to broke again... lovely part...
bt i must say rather then seeing a broken anika i would love 2 c a broken shivaay... may be coz we hadnt see a broken shivaay in show till now... reason can b any but i like ur broken shivaay sooo much...
wating 4 nxt
thanks 4 PM


hahaah! You are totally right seing a broken shiovaay is much more entertaining then seeing a broken nannika as I'm literallyfed up witht hsi As only annika is in pain but seeign shivaay like thisis heart wrenching 😭
I'm really glad that my warning helped you 😆
Thankoo very much for this🤗

Love yaa,
-Anya 😳

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