Shivika Ts_Pal Bhar_ Sequel to MPBTC [Completed]

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Anya

@elysianights

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Posted: 8 years ago

Author's Note~

Hello my lovely Forum vassiyon.🤗

I know you all will be confused because of the title😆

Here I'm with the sequel of my TS - Main Phir Bhi Tumko Chahunga. This Idea came to my mind when I listened the reprise version of this song Pal Bhar (this is also a soulful song) Well there will be also a sequel of this One also! But it wil come after I'll finish this.Maybe both of them will end in 2 to 3 shots,Maybe I'm not sure! So I hope you all will like it! As I don't know what will be your reaction after reading it.

As Iv'e seen few of you to give a happy ending to it then It willl a treat for them or maybe not!(This Ts is a litle sad one but the sequl to it will be good!) But before reading this you need to read the previous one as it will be easy to understand this one.So do have a look on it and if you have already read it than please continue to read the below Post.

I know I'm looking like a fool while updating this as I have told you all that I won't be able to give a haoppy ending to it but I'm also a person who doesn't go well with sad ending and I was thinking about this story for a long time to give it a khappy ending but was refraininf myself to do it but 2 day before I listen to this reprise one and thougth to give a try to my out of the blue thought.

So Do give your review about it!

Edited by itzanya32 - 8 years ago

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@elysianights

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Posted: 8 years ago

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Posted: 8 years ago

What was this dear?? Totally loved it.

You must continue it. I am waiting. Please update as soon as possible.

Update was superb. Shivaay is totally broken. I really don't know why but I am not liking Anika after reading this. I know Shivaay was wrong but I love Shivaay more than Anika so biased towards him😳

Anika and Sameer engagement😭

Rudra not picking up his call, have not seen him even once since three months, Dadi ignored him, Om and Prinku are also not there,where are Shakti, Jahanvi and Tej? And Saumya and Gauri?????😭😭

About Pinky I just hate her 😡

Waiting for next update do continue soon Anya Di.

Since I have read MPBTC I want that story to continue and have a happy ending but did not tell you. But here you itself came up with sequel. Totally loved it. Please update soon.

You always nailed your stories dear. Hats off to you.

Update soon...

With Love

-Chhaya

Edited by water9786 - 8 years ago

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Nohsin10

@Nohsin10

Voyager

Posted: 8 years ago

Emotional update

I can't see Shivaay like that.

Plzz make everything fine.

Poor Shivaay he is suffering so much

Omru should take care of Shivaay.

Plzz do continue

Can't wait to read more

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Anika_VR

@Anika_PreRish

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Posted: 8 years ago

God!!! Shivaay is suffering a lot..
OmRu shud be helping him..
kya disease hai Shivaay ko?
Haeh!!! Sameer n Annika getting engaged!?!?!?!?!
FTW!!! continue sooonish..

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PenguinBaby

@PenguinBaby

Stunner

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Posted: 8 years ago

I feel bad when I say this but I am enjoying Shivaay's pain!

But why is Annika marrying Sameer? Or is it some other Annika? Can't wait to know!

Do PM me the link when you update next! Good going ; )

-Sanu

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moon99

@moon99

Explorer

Posted: 8 years ago

ANYA!!!!!!!!!!!! THAT WAS SO GOOOD! WHAT DO I SAY?

I am feeling so bad for Shivaay 😭 😭 😭 I know he picked this decision himself, but still Whenever you write, I can, for some reason, always connect to the characters despite never ever been in the same situation. 👏 ⭐️

But I have a feeling that very soon he get his life back, in one way or another... I mean he's got Rudra back, sort of 😕 , but very soon, I know he'll get his life back 😳 (Omg, I laugh if were to be completely wrong [=))

SAMEER AND ANIKA'S ENGAGEMENT !?! 😲 OH NO! 🤢 , BUT I WONDER, WHAT IF IT DOESN'THAPPEN AT ALL 😉

Anyways, I loved MPBTC ❤️, and I ❤️ this too!

LOOKING FORWARD TO THE NEXT PART! 😛

Loads of Love,
- Sims 🤗

P.S Thanks for the P.M!

Edited by moon99 - 8 years ago

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AparnaChinnu

@AparnaChinnu

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Posted: 8 years ago

you know wat when I read mpbtc I was really angry at shivaay for choosing Nkk over Annika and I really don't want Annika to forgive him...I said that the 3yrs seperation was nothing and he should suffer more

when you ended the story in a sad mode i was happy because I wanted him to suffer but after some days also this story was in my mind and somewhere i felt that he deserved a second chance...I never thought that you will write a sequel to it but now I am so happy and I really wanted a happy ending this time