Shivika Ts_Pal Bhar_ Sequel to MPBTC [Completed]

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Anya

@elysianights

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Posted: 8 years ago

#71

Originally posted by: Shaina744
Emotional one... Love it a lot...
Now Rudra s wd him...can't wait for Shivika meeting...
Update soon...
Tnx for PM Di...

Thank you dear❤️

Will update it in a jiffy!😉

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Anya

@elysianights

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Posted: 8 years ago

#72

Originally posted by: hijabEfajr
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thank you dear❤️

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Anya

@elysianights

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Posted: 8 years ago

#73

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EnasZ

@EnasZ

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Posted: 8 years ago

#74

hello

u know i was reading the previous chapter (yes again) when i refreshed the page by mistake to read chapter 3 ... and then my eyes turned to hearts😆😆

Annika is making me feel sad ...i understand her not wanting to return to shivaay due to fear of pain and break

i don't like sameer😆😆 he's too sweet that he's making shivaay look bad (sorry but for some reason i just have this soft spot for shivaay and i can't help it)😆😆

annika made the safest decision

sameer will always be a good choice to her while shivaay will either be the best or the worst thing that happens to her

ok now i really want to know how will shivaay react to this ... i think he'll be in so much pain (again😆😆😆) but i'm eagerly waiting to read it ... the way u describe shivaay's pain is very very 😭😭😭

please update soon don't leave me hanging for too long ... i really want a long long long update😆😆😆

i know ...i'm being childish but can't help it 😭

love

Enas

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moon99

@moon99

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Posted: 8 years ago

#75

Haven't read it yet, but will come back soon 😛 ❤️
unres

What do I say of you capability to write?
You know that I know that you know you write really well! 😳 👏 👏 So no matter how much I say Anya, it will always be less.

Anika is going through tremendous pain. She is scared and broken. She needs love that will heal and support. Anybody can do that, even Sameer. But no one can love her enough to make her love them back, except Shivaay.

Rudra and his ways 😳 , what more can I say of him? He got his answer; she still loves him, in fact she never stopped.

Sahil supporting Anika was so cute. He really is very mature for his age. ❤️

I don't who was standing outside and listening to their conversation, but I feel like it is either Sameer or Rudra. Shivaay does say that 'he'll fix everything, but I don't think its was him this time.

EAGERLY WAITING FOR THE NEXT PART!!!!!!!!!!!! 😃

Loads of Love,
- Sims 🤗

P.S. Thanks for the P.M. 😛

Edited by moon99 - 8 years ago

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AparnaChinnu

@AparnaChinnu

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Posted: 8 years ago

#76

awesome update anya...

you well portrayed Shivaay's emotions...

I completely understand Annika's situation...

Annika is pure at heart...she just can't hurt anyone

I really felt angry towards sameer because why should he has to be this much nice...even though I hate shivaay for letting go Annika and made her heartbroken...I still can't see him in pain...we can be angry with him but we can't hate shivaay ever...

you know wat when ever I saw shivaay is suffering my heart breaks but again I will make my heart understand that he deserves it...I experienced the same thing while reading your mpbtc...that i really wanted Annika not to forgive him and I was happy with that sad ending but I really don't know why this story was there in my mind and I wished that he deserved a second chance...

I was really surprised when you started a sequel to that...

wat ever shivaay do...at the end of the day we want to see shivika together...and even the thought of someone other than shivaay proposing Annika makes me feel michmichi...I understand Annika is hurt but marrying sameer is not a solution because it will giveher more pain...by doing that she will be cheating sameer...I really think that sameer is the one who heard wat Annika had said...I am not sure...its a guess

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1070625

Hibernated

Posted: 8 years ago

#77

Loved it.

Anika...

I guess the person was Sameer.. just a random guess.😳

Rudra😭

Sahil and Anika...👏

Awesome update.

Waiting for next...

Please update soon...

Edited by water9786 - 8 years ago

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KashiTessa

@KashiTessa

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Posted: 8 years ago

#78

Feeling sorry for Anika.

Anika ' s pain 😭
Loved the update
waiting for next

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Himanshi

@Blink_Cat

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Posted: 8 years ago

#79

c i cry again n as u suggested i kept my tissue box beside me n i bet in upcoming part we would need them badly ...so emotional... anika has to choose b/w shivaay n sameer ... she is right at her place as she is scared 2 to broke again... lovely part...
bt i must say rather then seeing a broken anika i would love 2 c a broken shivaay... may be coz we hadnt see a broken shivaay in show till now... reason can b any but i like ur broken shivaay sooo much...
wating 4 nxt
thanks 4 PM

Edited by heenagupta - 8 years ago