Shivika Ts_Pal Bhar_ Sequel to MPBTC [Completed] - Page 12

It is amazingly beautiful update

awesome update anya...

u know this is not right

res ❤️ will be back soon to read this
unres

You know Anya, I 've become just like you... we both don't like angst filled stories yet you write them and I read them! 😆

But I must say that this series is your best by far according to me because there are so many emotion that every time I read a chapter I feel different, almost gloomy maybe, but it makes me feel good... I don't even know what I'm saying a this point! 😆

Seriously though, I was actually hoping for a happy ending, but this was anything but that! I should be angry 😡, but I'm actually just mind blown with the way you wrote part 5 and of course, heartbroken 🥺 !

The moment I read the first line of the song, my lips started trembling, but I kept it together! But as it continued I was slowly dying inside, and for some reason, I felt as if I was Shivaay through out this entire series. Like that is how well you write that you made me feel for someone to the extent that I never thought I could feel!

Then slowly my eyes stared to moisten, but I thought I could control it, but the moment I read, " Shivaay knew this was the end!...and live his life like hell again," I broke down litereally to the point that I couldn't tell the difference between my saliva and my salty tears. Not only that, but you made me cry to the point that my bottoms were wet from where my tears were continuously landing!!!!!!!
Thank god I was alone, or else had anyone seen me cry, it would have been really hard to explain why I was bawling my eyes out! 😆

ANYA, YOU WERE JUST FABULOUS WITH THIS PART!!!!! One of my favourites series out there!!!!! 😃 😃

Both Shivaay and Anika are in so much pain that I can't even imagine it! I like the fact that Sameer is supporting Anika and keeping her strong, but for how long? One day or another, Anika is going to have to face herself and her fears.
I really got the feels by the way Rudra congratulated Anika... that bhabhi was killer!

Since you seem to be basing these off songs from HALF GIRLFRIEND, why don't you try for bearish? It's a lovely song. 😳

I AM EAGERLY WATING FOR THE NEXT SEQUEL TO THIS!!

Loads of Love,
- Sims 🤗

P.S Thanks for the P.M! 😛

I am loving your Sameer though he is coming between Shivika, he is now acting as a big support system for Anika.

Rudra. ..He is so mature and is trying to understand how both of them are feeling.

Anika she know she won't be happy with Sameer nor be disappointed as he is a great friend.
Her heart is bleeding by seeing Shivaay like this but just as once she was afraid of darkness now she is afraid of another heartbreak.

Shivaay is punishing himself badly and he just wants to leave this world where his Anika is now someone else's.
He knew still some where in his heart that she is also going through this hell.

From the time Anika has made an entry into Shivaay's life she has been with him through everything and this time too they are facing the same problem , the difference is that unlike old times they are not facing this side by side but both are fighting same battle from different frontiers.

And the last part don't do this...
After all I want Shivika at the end.
Waiting for next one

aap na bahut bahut gande ho... aap ne bola tha that its a happing ending... bt u made this sad one... again...
u know i cry too much that my tissue box got over bt in b/w i was pacifying myself that it will b happing ending till rudra say bhaiya i have hopes bt after that they r dead as shivaay... bt c what have u done... devil.
i dnt kown when u r gng to start nxt thread... bt till then my mind would definetly b around by the story... n 2 satisfy myself i will made a happy ending in my brain...
we really dnt hate sameer... he is nice man... bt shivaay n anika i have ntng 2 cmt abt them... what u have done... i m short of words abt hw u describe their emotions...
such a emotinal update...
plz update sequal soon

u cannot be so cruel ending it here right?
so when we should expect the next part?
have read it last night but was not able to comment

this piece of work was amazing
loved every single bit of it

Sooo heartbReaking