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Posted: 8 years ago
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hi. For the first time i'm commenting on someone's writing. Well, this is sooo good. And i can't explain how much i loved this. Continue soon.
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Posted: 8 years ago
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So Anika has started her mission to take up on the oberois. Great move that she is planning to teach them after finishing their task as they will be eager to hear her condition and will surely slip with their task to be given to her.

Will wait for your next part soon. (Mission home search)
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Posted: 8 years ago
#33
Oh Dear 😳
Thank you so much for dedicating me this chapter..

Though I need not to say this but still just to let you know the chapter was amazing!! ❤️
I am reading it second time but still it's not giving me any boring types feeling.
Because your way of writing is just awesome. 👍🏼

Waiting for the next. Update soon.

Ps- Do you have an account at wattpad? I think we should comment on her profile who stole your story so that everybody would know. ☯️
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Posted: 8 years ago
#34
Aasmaan se gire Khajur me latke!!!!😛

Having doubts naa why am I saying this?😆 Go ahead u all will know... Naughty me!! Bachke rehna re baba...😊😃



CHAPTER-04

Exposed: The SEXIEST Thief ever seen!!!

Its twelve o' clock and till now I could collect only some of the information I need.

The Devils:

A group of friends and brothers. They are together from childhood. The most talented band of STAR and best at torturing also. Plays with people...I felt disgusting here. Every student of STAR has a fear of them but they are biggest fan also.

RIDDHIMA:

Riddhima a girl who loves to be the fantasy of every man. Before she was like a typical girl but her ex-boyfriend had cheated her. Don't know how? Reason not given. But they had a breakup and Riddhima needs every night a new guy in her bed but she is girl friend of Omkara. I like seriously? Omkara really don't mind his GF sleeping with other guy? What an odd guy?

OMKARA:

The philosophical guy in the group, kind and liberal. He is always supported by Shivaay, and everyone in the group listens to him. Shivaay always guided and protected him. He is good with poems. He writes the lyrics of the song which the band composes. Seems like he is very important for this SSO! And also very mysterious being, elder son of Tej Singh Oberoi. He is an artist also extremely good with sculptures. Multi talented! And total opposite to his father. Damn interesting personality!

TIA:

Tia an orphan but a rich one. Had a family business from which she and her brother Robin gets money every month. Tia is also the girlfriend of Shivaay.

They are in a relationship from last four years. Their every news becomes a gossip material for fans. Tia is not close to her brother much. Shivaay and she is known as Star Couple.

Here I found nothing interesting except the Robin fact. So Riddhima's ex was Tia's brother.

RUDRA:

Rudra the most funny boy of the group. Had a great sense of humor, best at playing pranks. Loves to make videos and also making other people a laughing material. He is conscious of his health and loves to spend most of his time in gym. He is the younger son of Tej Singh Oberoi and is pampered by both the brothers. He believes Shivaay his elder brother to be his super hero. For Shivaay he is like his baby. Though all the three brothers don't have much age difference. Well! For this Stone Singh Oberoi I got two weaknesses of his. My personal trump cards Omkara and Rudra.

SHIVAAY:

Shivaay the head of this group. And their lead singer even. He is the protector of the group. He always take care of them and is a best friend to have coz he solves all the problems of The Devils. Any member of The Devils having any kind of problem will rush to Shivaay. But this is just limited to them, for other people he is a monster. He loves to hurt others. His life is devoted to only to his brothers. What the hell? I thought the devotion word will go for Tia!

Well here ends my thesis on The Devils. Seems like every member of The Devils is depended on Shivaay Singh Oberoi and he is there for them. But he loves Omkara and Rudra the most and can do anything for them. Their band information as I got long back, Tia and Omkara electric guitar, Riddhima has keyboard, Rudra plays drums and Shivaay plays guitar.

I stood straight and made myself determined to execute my next plan. Yes! To invade Bagar Billa's house well like a thief. Well to shove my pity on myself being a thief from a star I tagged myself as female version of Sherlock Holmes! Now it's really sad to think that I had to steal...no not his belongings but my watch. Though I said too much on conditions but seriously I don't want drama tomorrow. But these idiots love to create scenes and I even consoled myself with the thought I will be there to gather more information of him.

Time, time the biggest monster. I, the STAR of the Music Industry will barge to a house like a thief! I saw myself in the mirror. I was wearing a frock looks like a top rather was exposing my back till my waist and top of that it was lacy in nature. I was wearing it with shorts exposing my thighs! Well I am the sexiest thief ever seen thought I. So I wore a jacket with a hood on top of that which at least covered my body so that no one praise my unwanted seducing look which could be felt by anyone if he or she would see me in that attire. It was my night dress; I was quite lethargic in nature and tired to change my clothes again and again so I decided to land his home with this...! And I left my room with my car keys.

Here goes the best part. I never have to face any kind of questions from my guardians. They believe that my status and reputation allows this. And knowing what kind of girl I am, well it puts a full stop on every question they have.

I drove my most favorite black shiny Audi R8 to the back of Oberoi Mansion. I have a craze for automobiles, Audi be my favorite company and other than Audi R8 I have a red Audi AG , Lamborghini and a white Verna! Now my eyes are on Hyundai Elantra, I will make sure I have that in my parking garage by next month. I parked my car with other public cars near the back wall of Oberoi Mansion. Thanks to my Reebok sports shoes I easily climbed the wall. Well here experience worked I love hiking which led me to many mountain expeditions also.

But here comes the real problem. How will I understand which room belongs to that idiot? The Mansion was quite large. Then I saw the most wanted thing at that very moment the open door at first floor balcony.

I smiled looking at the pipes near the balcony.

"A way so easy!" exclaimed I.

I climbed the pipes and stepped on the balcony. The room was quite dark. I stepped in. God knows! This room belongs to whom? Suddenly a picture above the king size bed caught my attention. Five donkeys were laughing aloud... showing their precious thirty two teeth. Now I am convinced that this room belongs to none other than The Great Shivaay Singh Oberoi.

Great! No Oberoi means I am free to be the great legend of Sir Arthur Conan Doyle, well its female version! Miss Sherlock Holmes...the things which I am lacking at this right moment is the magnifying glass, cap and the smoking pipe.

I started searching. The watch will not matter him much thought I. Coz he might had tortured many students and forgot about it so I searched the common parts of his room. I searched the top of the tables, shelf, etc but could not locate my watch or gather any kind of information of his.

I put my eyes on the cupboard.

No... Why will he put it in the cupboard? The watch should not matter for him much. It's not that important for him. But curiosity took over me. May be its there...

He may keep it there. May be...

I started approaching towards the cupboard when suddenly the door of the room flung open and the next moment I can capture is that the lights went on!

The whole room brightened and I was there standing as a statue.

"Who are you?" I heard that sharp voice. It heard just like the morning comment. I know I cannot run away. So I took the most dangerous and the option that was left for me-to face him.

I turned towards him. He was still at the door holding a bottle of Chene Grand Reserve. Well it's one of my chosen Red Wine produced by the brand Grover Vineyards that I consume in parties. He was in black shirt and black denim jeans. Two buttons from top were open which was exposing his broad chest.

In this whole expanse of twenty four hours meet, for the first time I felt that this chalk like white structure is quite handsome.

I had met many guys due to my popularity and ninety per cent of them had gone gaga over me which let me avoiding their handsome faces. But this guy who entered in my life like a storm with a comment, whom I hated from past twelve hours, given him so many names like bagar billa, jerk, idiot, donkey, Stone Singh Oberoi and Billa Singh Oberoi... now I found him quite handsome when he will catch me and may be shocked to see me in this kind of dress or may insult me. Eureka...! I found this guy handsome. Yes! This white cat with green eyes! No am not this insane but I am thinking insane issues now.

To the worst he can even get the police and my real identity may get exposed, coz no cops will be intent to arrest one of their person of trust. Miss A.R. who helped them many times to get dangerous culprits! Well my curiosity for mysteries had also led me to fight with real life villains and for that I have a license for a gun also. This is my reputation of indulging in these all from the age of sixteen. Well am proud of it being one hand detective with gun coz no one knows where I may be attacked and I need something for my safety. Even D.I.G also believes me a lot and I worked with the branch of police in civil dresses though am not a cop!

But his face without that intentional smirk was looking so cute, so innocent. No! This is not the first time I found a guy handsome; rather it is the second time. The first one was five years back when I was thirteen. I don't know his name but that one night locked together put his thought in mine for last five years.

I do say, I don't believe in love but there was an attraction at that young age of adolescence. Now, when I am quite mature and firm standing at this unwanted situation I found or discovered that I find that Shivaay Singh Oberoi quite "handsome!"

He was still looking at me shocked. I understand what happens when you see an unwanted visitor in your house that too in your bedroom.

"You?" he exclaimed being shocked or rather yelled at me.

Hang on!!! Well thanks to all my silent readers and my lovely readers who takes the pain of reading this story and comment on it. It feels great when there is good response.

Thank you...

Love u all!

Mimi😲😊

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Posted: 8 years ago
#35
Amazing chappy! 🤗
Though I know age kya hone wala hai still am excited for the next part
😆😆 Let's how you will shape it up in Ishqbaaz version..

Update soon dear.
You are a beautiful writer! ⭐️
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Posted: 8 years ago
#36
awww. ..u got me there. ..lol
but y the abrupt stop. ...loved it. ..continue soon
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Posted: 8 years ago
#37
Well this update was aweeesssoommeee!!!!
Loved it!!
She felt that he is handsome nd cute too..but does she realize that he is the same person she met years ago nd fell for him..
Felt that he was quite good looking..
Again a cliff hanger...
Well i loved the way u dressed her up...female sherlock holmes..intresting..
What will Shivaay do when he sees her nd that too in that attire???
This is thrilling..hell thrilling
Love Sharmi
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Posted: 8 years ago
#38
Omg...thnx for continuing this one..missed this story...
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Posted: 8 years ago
#39
aah...finally you updated...i missed this story sooo much...i was impatiently waiting for you to continue...truly dear,this story is incredible...pls try to update next chapter soon...i will be waiting...
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Posted: 8 years ago
#40
shall say juicy update. pleased update your next part as this has ended with their meeting in his own bed room.

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