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Posted: 8 years ago
Where are you its been long time when you last update please update next part and you did this too in kyy fourm and i specially join this fourm because of your story so if you stop this one too then i am not going to leave you so update soon and regularly .
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Posted: 8 years ago
Oh my god...I read all d 24 chppys in one go...so hard
...bt njyd a lottt...lvly...fire is burning inside both of them...loved it...& r u a bngali????cz othrws U cnt knw Adi(dnt knw hs real nm)...& he's one of my fvrts...& yeah plz pm me...I'm sndng a buddy request 2 u...
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Posted: 8 years ago

Originally posted by: D_mi_cheeky_me.

Hey dears as I got two cmmnts nd that too in a positive way that means a 100% vote to start my old work back😛

https://www.indiaforums.com/forum/ishqbaaaz/4722853/pls-share-ur-views

Here I am back to sail my New Ship WHO AM I? in the Ishaqbaaz way. So I bring one of my master piece for u all. Old acquainted ppl of this piece pls enjoy it once again😆


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"Who am I?? Who are my parents ? How they used to look like ? I don't remember anything!! Where do I belong?"

These are the questions which haunted Anika from last 10 years...

She would hallucinate.. people say she is some kind of mental patient.. What happens when she joins STAR-Academy of Performing Arts. When she found 5 Devils torturing everyone.. She is no common... she is a celebrity hiding herself in the sheet of a common girl. Will she be able to solve her own mystery? Will everyone know who actually she is?

WHO AM I?



PROLOGUE...

"Are you fine?" asked he.

Duffer.. How will I be fine? We are kidnapped by some kidnappers and this stupid guy of fourteen asks me whether I am fine.

"Do you think I am?" said I sarcastically.

"No"

Wow! If he already understood it before, why was he asking me?

"Are you not scared?" asked I.

"I am" said he.

We both were locked in the same room. I was kidnapped as I was famous and he was kidnapped as he was a son of a family who had a big business industry. And me , I am a recent winner of a singing reality show.

No I was never a soft hearted even at this young age. But this sudden kidnapping had quite shaken me off.

"May be this is the last night of our life" said he in a depressed tone.

"We both cannot look at each other. It was so dark here. But I love darkness. It gives me peace. But something was telling me that the guy with me scares it.

"It's too dark here" said I. Actually I tried to know whether darkness really matter for him or not.

"I hate darkness" said he "It scares me"

Exactly the way I thought. I think this one year older guy really needs me now. I went a little close to him and hold his hands.

He looked at me through this semi dark room. And I noticed that he is quite relieved now.

"I am there with you." said I assuring him.

He looked at me smilingly. When they brought me here he was already present. Maybe they kidnapped him before me.

"Thank you" said he.

"You can be comfortable with me" said I and we sat together near a box.

"I am missing my brothers and friends"

"Friends and brothers?"

"Don't know how they are feeling now"

"Why ? They are also kidnapped or what?" asked I.

"No, but they love me a lot. By now they must have come t know that I am kidnapped and they must be crying. I am not even there to stop their tears"

"I am sorry to say that you are talking with the wrong person now." Said I.

"Why?"

"I don't believe in friendship but coming to brothers. Yes I quite understand that as I have a sweet brother."

I could see his shocked face clearly.

"Then the students in your class what are they to you?"

" Class mates!"

"The boys and girls with whom you play?"

"I don't play."

"Then what you do?"

"Hmm!! I just sit with instruments. I love exploring all kinds of music instruments and other than that I love gadgets and machines"

"I play guitar. Had you played it"

"Regularly.."

We both smiled.

"How old is your brother?"

"Five"

"Well that's good but I still can't believe my ears- A girl of thirteen don't believe in friendship."

"No. For me friendship is a mess. It only exist for selfish means"

"That's sad! For me friendship is life. My two best friends and two brothers are the reason to be happy in my life"

I could judge from his face, he really loves his friends and his brothers. I thought it's not good to hurt his feelings telling all my theories on the faked bonding called friendship.

"Well do you have a girl friend?" asked I.

"No, I never have been in a relationship."

"Strange, you are fourteen right? And still don't have a girl friend."

"Do you have a boy friend?" asked he.

"No. Like friendship love also does not exist for me"

"Seriously? You are the first girl whom I saw who don't believe in these two emotions"

"Coz I think everything comes with demands and motives"

He smiled, " Well I think you are the single piece of the female sex that I am liking so much rather than my two female best friends."

"Well you are the first guy who sitting so close to me"

He looked my face again and next moment he just kissed my forehead.

"You are a sweet heart" said he.

It was unexpected but my heart was beating in an unknown tone.

I took two deep breaths and said " Thank you".

He smiled maybe he understood what was I feeling with that unexpected kiss.

Suddenly the door flung open and I could see police. We were rescued. First we went to police station and from there to our respected houses. But before he left he came to me. And for the first time I noticed him in brightness. He was tall, white like chalk and handsome. His beauty cannot be defined but there was serenity in him. And his eyes were the cherry on cake. They were cat eyes.

"Thank you for being there with me and protecting me from my fear."

"Yours welcome"

He bent and kissed my forehead again. It seriously gave me an electric shock.

But that made me determined to kiss him so I stood straight on my toes and kissed his cheeks. He was smiling.

"That made you more close to me." Smirked he and left.

After he went away I remembered neither he know my name nor I know his.

"Bullshit!" I exclaimed.

Hey everybody hope u will love this story also like my other stories
Love u all!❤️
Mimi😎

Is this the same story that
you wrote for manan
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Posted: 8 years ago
Your story is sooo different from others and so amazingly beautiful... u know my mother scold me bcz inwas reading ur story for like 2 hours continually and just couldn't stop myself...i don't know if u will read this but if yea then please continue ur story and don't stop in the middle...and if u update please pm me if possible
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Posted: 8 years ago
missing this story... update asap
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Posted: 8 years ago
This so my type of ff. It's so so so awesome...totally in love with the character of Annika urf AR...❤️
Pls update soon, eagerly waiting for it. And ya i really appreciate your imagination and for posting sucha kind of ff.👏

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Posted: 8 years ago
Please update it's been long time now
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Posted: 8 years ago
Yesterday I got this ff n started reading it n trust me I loved it to d core !!!! So it's a request please continue the story n give it a proper end it's really amazing please update soon...
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Posted: 8 years ago
Read all the chaps in one go
Loved all the chaos...intrsting...intriguing... Different... Marvellous... Magical..mesmerizing... Enchanting.. Fantastic... Fabuloues...sensuous.. Hot...intense ...chummeshwari
U r a perfect nd gid gifted writer
Plz continue soon
I've snd u buddy rqst so plz pm me if possible whenever u update

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