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Posted: 8 years ago
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Originally posted by: ISensedYou

This is sooo interesting

Shivaay and anika are sooo against each other🤪
The devils would be so shocked when they realise who anika is🤣
I wonder how will shivika react when they come to know that they were the ones they met as a teenager
This is going to be fun 🤪
Update soon


dnt knw how they will react ...not thought till now😆
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Originally posted by: -Aarfa-

Oh God!! 😃

Like finally!!

You know what.. I started following this story of yours at KYY forum.. And I was so hooked up to this story but you stopped updating!
And then I found this story on Wattpad.. I got so elated.. But you didn't updated there also..
And now I have again come to read it here on Ishqbaaz forum.. 🤗
I really hope this time you won't ditch me!

So by now you have got to know that am fan of this story.. 😆
So, eagerly waiting for next update.. Make it soonish!


I found an old fan...yaayyy...Hey I never wrote in wattpad some Vishani Singhania copy pasted it their taking all the credits to herself!!!😡
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Originally posted by: an_k

nice one dear do update sooon

sure ji😊
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Originally posted by: varala

It's interesting

Somu found anika's real identity 👏good abserver
Mission Devils 😆😆😆
Continue soon 😛



Aakhe acchi hai😆...Soumya ki😆
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Originally posted by: lucky_princess

Mimi...u killed me wid this one!!!

I am in love wid this one...what a plot!!
Your stories r always soo damn different...such innovative ideas..
Pehle Anika as a princess..nd now this...
I loved it! Loved it!...and loved it sooo much!!
Now i am carzy for this one...u noe like totally..
So Anika's lyf is kinda mystrey...nd is adopted by saahil's parents...nd bua nd fuffa r good ppl...i wanted that change..
So The Oberois nd their girlfriends r ruling the college... they r best band...nd i guess they r nothing compared to A.R.
2 chapters nd i am like wen will u update next one??? This is sooo good yaaar...awesome...amazing..superb!!!
Beautifully written..nd Anika is only recognized by soumya..
The way Anika answered back to The Devils were awesome..
Ek dum khidiki thod jawab tha. Nd there is something fishy abt Omkara..thinks Anika.
Nd "Tej Oberoi" is someone Anika is thinking abt...well she is here on a mission.
Lets see what her past reveals...nd i guess oberois r definitely connected wid her in the past..
Continue sooonmimi otherwise i willkill u..or i will make drink that same drink Devils gave that guy..but a bit special for..it will be chilli wid pepper...nd ur mouth..throat nd ur tummy will be on fire...cuz if u dont update i will be on fire..
Well this was pure bakwaas...that was just a threat..
Love Sharmi..



Oh my mata Sharmi tune dara diya... I will update soonish and I really dnt want to have dat horrible drink..Believe me dear
mimi(SCARED to THREATENING)


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Well after so many positive reply here I set the sail of 3rd chappy and this is dedicated to two ppl...
Sharmi and Aarfaa this is 4 u two...

CHAPTER-03

Which is more DANGEROUS?: Burned by boiled water or steam?

We both came out of the washroom. I was looking horrible in wet hair and terrible in these clothes which were not left worth wearing. I just kept hoping that I return home soon and get into my shorts.

I turned and saw Soumya was smiling continuously. Maybe she was feeling quite lucky of herself but this was irritating me a lot.

"Stop smiling", barked I.

"Sorry! Just was feeling proud of myself walking with a star".

Seriously?? Proud to walk with me. These people are purely insane. Actually I feel that way.

"Stop being a jerk for god's sake. Am also a mere human being like you."

"Sorry. Seems like you have a good temper."

"Yup. Sometime I really get angry. Take care that you just don't piss me off!"

"Okay"

We reached the canteen. It was big and luxurious. Well quite of my choice.

"Stuffed cheese sandwich with coke. Soumya order your food." Said I standing in the counter.

"Simple sandwich and sprite."

We both sat on the chairs of table number seven.

"Tell me about yourself." Said I.

"I am from Pune. My dream to be a good singer like you."

"That's good."

"About you?"

"Am an open book. You must had gone through the interviews"

"Yup!"

"Hey once you said you are single. Are you?"

"No personal questions please. I even avoid these questions in interviews."

If I say in raw language I would say... Girl I am not at all interested to answer your silly questions!

"Okay. What helped you through your life to stand up at your darkest moments? When you felt yourself shattered?" asked she.

Well am not an emotional fool like the typical girls. But the people and their belongings that were very close to me for them am very protective in nature. I really don't know how to be sweet and show my concern to the world. But I'm a caring person though I don't want to show this side of mine to everyone as I hate cheesy people. And most of the people I knew are cheesy in nature. Only my family sees my best side but for others I'm tagged as the Cold Hearted!'

"Well it's a watch," said I and shown her a golden pocket watch.

The watch really matters for me. When I was found by the cops after the accident, I was senseless but was holding this watch tightly. This watch must be of my parents. So I just love it more than myself. It's quite precious for me.

"A watch?"

"Yes!"

This girl doesn't seem to believe me.

"So in your life you are connected with this watch the most?" asked she.

"Yes! It's really precious for me."

We both had our food. Well I do keep a track of my surroundings. And it didn't go away from my eyes that The Devils were sitting in a corner of this room. Five of them talked for a while and put their glances on me. Maybe they are talking about the last thing I did to them. Tia seems distressed, but Shivaay, he was looking at me intently. From my side no reaction as no interest!

We were about to leave when a boy suddenly bumped against us and my watch fell down.

"Hey can't you see and walk? You will fall on anyone or what?" barked I.

Today seriously my mood is just a gone case now.

"Sorry" said the guy and left.

These students are manner less, the real jerks. When I bent to pick it up I could see it nowhere. I searched it in a panic mode.

"Are you searching this, Miss Rathor ?" a known voice came over me.

This voice, exactly what I was fearing! Whole The Devils didn't care to notice this, but this Shivaay Singh Oberoi, has his eyes and ears on everything.

"My watch," I tried to grab it but this swift machine swinged the watch from here and there in front of me making me doubtful of my fast actions! So he moved the watch from one hand to other.

"Seems like this watch is quite important for you."

"Yeah! Just return it to me."

Here comes the rest of The Devils. How could they miss so much fun?

Rudra, "Wow! Bhaiyya you got her weak chord."

Tia, "Now let's show her what happens when someone mess with The Devils."

"Give my watch back to me."

Now, I must say I was controlling myself. I don't want my anger to cross my patience's limit. I really want my watch back in my hands safe and sound.

"No sweetheart. You will not get it so soon. You have to give some The Devils exams and get this watch from us," said Riddhima.

These guys are really pissing me off! Wouldn't was I instructed to hide my identity here, I would have shown them my real monster side.

"What I have to do?" asked I.

No argument! Just no argument. I want this watch immediately from these fellows who really don't understand the value of this watch for me. This must be a normal watch for them but for me it is the last memory of my unknown parents.

"That's like a good girl. But not so fast! Don't you know patience bears the sweetest fruit? We will give you three tasks tomorrow. Prove yourself and take it from us."

Said Shivaay.

I am hating these guys with every passing second! Just hate them. They are playing with the most precious thing of my life. These jerks! Specially that SSO, the ruler here. I just hate this guy, hate him.

"But I have one condition!" said I with patience.

"Who are you to give us conditions?" barked Tia.

"Look! You guys will give me three tasks. Can't I have only one condition? After all you will be having one of my most precious thing or are you guys scared of the type of condition I might keep in front of you all?" said I sarcastically.

"Scared of your conditions! We won't give a damn to it." Said Riddhima.

"So what's wrong in hearing the condition? I assure you I will give easiest one." Said I in a mocking tone. It had its effect.

"So what's your condition?" asked Shivaay.

"I will tell it after finishing the tasks you all will give." Said I.

"Don't go between rafts and say it soon we don't have time to waste." Said Shivaay making an annoying face.

"Patience bears the sweetest fruit, Mr. Shivaay Singh Oberoi," said I.

"You are forgetting that this time we have the cards in our hands," said he showing me my watch.

"No I am not forgetting anything. Unfortunately now you guys also know that this watch means a lot for me," said I.

" Okay will wait for your easy condition. Let's go guys." Said he.

And five of them left the place. Soumya was looking at me helplessly.

"I am sorry. If I hadn't let that watch fall from my hands when that boy bumped against us than you would definitely have that watch with you. It all took place because of my loose grip," said Soumya.

"You are sorry Soumya for my watch? You should be. For you now it is with The Devils," barked I.

I left that place with a grumpy face and my mood, I feel like killing someone at that very moment.

Now I decided to play safe. I will take care that The Devils don't come around me. As I will not be able to control myself. I sat on the edge of the campus fountain.

"Now you understood why was he looking you intently? He was observing your weak points. He want to hurt you just like me. I would love to see you dead sweet heart. Dead!" said the man whom I hallucinate from last ten years.

"Oh Boy! You came again.. Yes I know you want to see me dead. But why?" asked I.

"Coz I killed your mom and dad." Said he.

My face tightened.

"Why? Why you killed my parents? You always say you killed my parents but never told why. People say they died in accident. Who are my parents? How they used to look? Why you want to kill me? Tell me." Screamed I.

With that I came out of my day dream and saw everyone was staring at me from far.

To get myself out of the student's gaze I went and sat under a tree.

"If you exist in reality, someday I will definitely kill you," murmured I and picked my face to see my surrounding.

I could see the friendship sagas in front of me. One advised; other listens. I could even see couples in front of me. How irritating? These two emotions are those feelings which I want to keep far away from me. The emotions which will let an unknown person to know everything about me.

"I am sorry. I pissed you off!" I heard a voice from my back.

"No I am sorry I over reacted. You don't even know why that watch is so important for me." Said I without even looking towards the owner of the voice as I know whose voice this was.

She came and sat with me.

"I don't want to know even." Said Soumya.

I picked my face and saw her.

"You hate answering personal questions." Said she.

Somehow I liked this girl. She is quite good and understood what I don't like.

I smiled at her.

"Thank you." Said she.

"Why?"

"For smiling and forgiving me."

"Well no problem."

"Had you thought how will you face those devils?" asked she.

"Not yet.. But will think about it. I can't let those jerks to get over my head."

"Well that's like a word girl. Rip them off!" said she.

"I will if they cross their limits," I also understood that my face hardened. Well am not joking. Seriously I will teach them a lesson if they do anything to my watch.

Well after this my day went in a rapid flow. Not got to see The Devils anymore for the whole day. And am seriously happy for that. Coz The Devils means a bunch of tension for me.

I rang the bell of my house. Well after such a day I returned home thinking about The Devils. The girl who is not even interested other than herself was thinking about those silly jerks who took her most precious thing of her life from her. Bua greeted me and after gossiping with her about the day skipping The devils parts I had my lunch.

I came inside my room after lunch and looked at myself in front of my mirror. I look so real now wearing my old time favorite blue halter top and shorts. In morning I could not recognize myself only, I was looking so common but now the Star Look' returned.

Well now here starts my work. To know more about The Devils. I have to get their all information.

I took my tab and checked their Face Book accounts. I went through their type of comments. I checked their Twitter, What's App, Instagram and every social account they can have, their every status and also went through Rudra's Youtube channel too where I got to see all kind of their tortures including Soumya and Rithvik's incidents of dustbin and swimming pool.

I took my cell and dialed my most favorite person for now anyways who can give me more details of those five idiots to me.

"Hello Rajeev...yes! Started the mission.. Well I want to know more about The Devils, everything! Please e-mail me their each and every information. Yes! In details."

Now I was quite relaxed. I did everything to know about them. But I am planning more for now. Why not to invade that Billa Singh Oberoi's house?Billa...perfect name for him! Smiled I and with this I made my mind to invade his house at night and sat to study.



Hope everybody will njoy this chap also like the others

Love u all!

Mimi😳

Edited by D_mi_cheeky_me. - 8 years ago
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OMG Mimi!!..u r too sweeet..meri baat maan li..ab aisi hi update karthe raho..frm Aarfa's post munhe pata chala that u have left this imcomplete three times...par iss baar aisa nahi hoga..u have yo frequently update...because i am helplessly in love wid this one...
I am addicted to few stories in this forum nd now this at the 2nd most place in the list...
Well coming to the update...it was awesome...Anika is really short tempered..
Soumya is really awesome nd i am liking her too much..the way she behaves towards Anika was beautiful..
Anika hallucinating once again...nd her past is really creepy..
Coming to "The Devils"..Shivaay looking at her intently.. nd the devils snatched away her precious thing...her watch.
I just hope nothing happens to it. Am eagerly waiting to noe what would be the tasks...
Nd who is this Rajeev..so "Mission Started"...
Its crazily intresting..i am hooked to this now..
Anyways love u Mimi for this fast update...
Continue soon
Love Sharmi
Edited by lucky_princess - 8 years ago
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Originally posted by: lucky_princess

OMG Mimi!!..u r too sweeet..meri baat maan li..ab aisi hi update karthe raho..frm Aarfa's post munhe pata chala that u have left this imcomplete three times...par iss baar aisa nahi hoga..u have yo frequently update...because i am helplessly in love wid this one...

I am addicted to few stories in this forum nd now this at the 2nd most place in the list...
Well coming to the update...it was awesome...Anika is really short tempered..
Soumya is really awesome nd i am liking her too much..the way she behaves towards Anika was beautiful..
Anika hallucinating once again...nd her past is really creepy..
Coming to "The Devils"..Shivaay looking at her intently.. nd the devils snatched away her precious thing...her watch.
I just hope nothing happens to it. Am eagerly waiting to noe what would be the tasks...
Nd who is this Rajeev..so "Mission Started"...
Its crazily intresting..i am hooked to this now..
Anyways love u Mimi for this fast update...
Continue soon
Love Sharmi


I left it incomplete only 1 time Sharmi... Someone copy pasted my thing in other forum. I am glad that you loved this update ... She surely is short tempered and a badass...Ge ready to cling coz today I am in a roll and may update the nxt part also😉
Edited by D_mi_cheeky_me. - 8 years ago
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thnk u dear😃

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