AnShi SS- TOIL (Epilogue (Part-2.1)-IshKara, Pg.26) - Page 12

Originally posted by: MysticRiver

brilliant update..

Thank you. 😃

Originally posted by: iamred

I have to wake up in the next four hours, given the fact that I'll sleep!

But here I am, reading this fascinating book, yes book, not chapter, over and over!

I swear to Gods, Anju, if you were here right now, I would've hugged the life out of you darling!

I mean where do I begin to explain?

From Tej's turmoil of unfeeling emotions to Omkara's ace out in the open for Pinky to admire, every bit of it was perfect.

Where the previous chapter was a blend of hilarity and bromance, this was chaos, love and cunning tact all together!

To be very honest, Tej and Jhanvi somehow always felt like a grown up version of Shivaay and Anika gone terribly wrong! And the way you portrayed them, especially Tej's turmoil was addicting.

Ah, I am so sure that I'll be loitering around like a sleepless zombie during college hours tomorrow, but this was so worth it!

Rudra is always trying to build up those castles of happiness, yet somehow, the broken Oberoi souls crush it back to harsh sands!

Poor guy!

And Shivaay, the man literally suffers the most, trying to put up the indifferent, strong facade. He is always trying to weld the pieces of his family together. He lives more for others than for himself!

Omkara is sure to drill some sense into his thick skull even though it means sacrificing all that he is left with!

Ah, you are too good!

Please update soon!

Much love!

Blessed be!

XOXO

~Red

My dear Red,

This is just to let you know that you and Jessi are the reason for the quick update of the second part of chapter 5. So, here are all the hugs you've reserved for me. 🤗

I think each brother has a pain of his own which he's hidden from the world and chooses to act a certain way to hold onto some semblance of peace. I have tried to explore this aspect with regard to Shivaay and Rudra with some depth. Om's character is special and I have kept him under wraps for the epilogue. His love for his brothers is beyond doubt, but his complex character is a heady temptation for souls like me, with a fertile imagination. You'll see more of him in the final update. 😉

@bold: This! I have often felt the same way. While Shivaay has his brothers to keep him grounded, Tej, I feel, never had a kindered spirit around to share his woes. So he's become a far more jaded version of what Shivaay is at present. Maybe all is not lost yet, let's hope for the best for this older couple.

I hope you've come out of zombie land and have had a good night's rest.😆 The second part of the fifth chapter should cheer you up, since you enjoyed the last AnShi confrontation. Drop in here to tell me what you think. 😛

Thank you for all your kind and encouraging words. They've served as motivation to churn out the next chapter super quick.

Regards,
Anju

Originally posted by: sunshinesamuef

I loved it. Tej is very interestingly portrayed here. He too is a man with deep emotions. Pinky is one vicious lady but more than that I loved Omkara. He is ready to give up everything for his brother's sake & Shivaay does not even know about it. Too good. This part touched Rudra's feelings too. He & Omkara think in a very similar fashion when it comes to their much messed up family. The only difference is Omkara voices out his opinions openly & Rudra feigns ignorance & indifference. You are a great writer. Please do update super soon. Waiting eagerly.

Hello!

Yes, Tej is a man of deeper emotions and his present disregard for Jhanvi, I feel, stems from her lackadaisical attitude (according to him) with regard to their relationship. Rudra and Omkara are like twin peas in a pod. Even though all three brothers have a strong bond with each other, I think Rudra shares something special with Omkara. He can be his usual silly self in his presence and can even reveal his vulnerabilities before him. Pinky is the manipulative mother who just loves her son too much, but the love manifests in strange ways that might ultimately hurt Shivaay.

Thank you so much for reading and reviewing. I am glad that you enjoyed reading this SS.

Regards,
Anju

That was awesome couldn't but laugh at the book scene Rudra can only do that.. as for AnShi loved it but loved ur take on their confession simple yet beautiful

Originally posted by: --Nargis--

This is a brilliant story!!! Love the dynamics that you have created between the family members...especially the brothers, and most certainly between AnShi! I love the kitchen scene, his acquiescence, his pushing for her to admit the feelings she has for him...simply brilliant. You penned the scene so well, I felt like I was watching it rather than reading it... Simply phenomenal!

Hello Nargis!

I am so happy that you've enjoyed reading about the family dynamics and the love-hate relationship between AnShi as I have chosen to portray it.😊 In my head both Shivaay and Annika are too stubborn to acknowledge their feelings and reveal the same before the other. The emotional tug of war is exactly how I imagine their confession scene to be. 😳

Thank you for letting me know how much you've liked this SS. Hopefully you'll enjoy the final update too. Stay tuned!

Regards,
Anju

Originally posted by: arhi10

Read all the parts in a go...loved every bit of it...

Omkara is such mind reader...

Loved the part with shivaay and anika..especially the liar part...

Can't wait for the next update!

Hello!

Thank you so much for reading and reviewing. 😊 Omkara sure is a mind reader. He's like the silent observer who can sense the feelings of those around him. AnShi are ❤️. Hope you liked their confession scene too. Epilogue will be up in a few days.

Regards,
Anju

Originally posted by: SanyaEterna

I'm bawling. That so damn perfect!!

First, the book! OmRu ko nazar na lage😆

Then AnShi's as usual fight.

Her crying made me cry so much. Her thoughts regarding why he was here, to mock her feelings, to enjoy his victory😭

Their silent confession!

I can't get over it, gonna read it again!

Plz PM me the next part if possible! Pretty please?😳

Hello!

You are bawling? Chalo yeh tissue le lo aur aansu pocho...🤗
Thank you so much for reading and taking the time to review. 😃 It's cool that you've enjoyed the humorous and serious bits equally. OmRu are ❤️. Stay tuned for the epilogue!

Regards
Anju

Originally posted by: coolove

That was brilliant and like so amazing. I can't even, it was exhilarating to read. You write so so well, keep on writing please.

Thank you! I feel humbled by all that praise. Will try to write more and better. Thanks for reviewing. 😊

Originally posted by: MysticRiver

loved the update..too good..👏

Thank you! 😊

Originally posted by: Anjum.

Siiigh! that was beautiful!

It was heartbreaking and funny and dramatic and adorable and overall PERFECT! I have no more words. ❤️

Hi Anjum,

The little that you've said is more than enough. I am one happy author. Epilogue to be up in a few days. 😃 Thank you so much for reading and reviewing.

Stay tuned!
Anju