AnShi SS- TOIL (Epilogue (Part-2.1)-IshKara, Pg.26) - Page 11

sorry for late comments

chap 5-i:
superb upt
omru are the best brothers shivaay could get
tej's self loathig was perfectly pictured
jhanvi stood up against tej was perfect
pinkyyy...i hate her
seriously pinky loves money more than shivaay.
om shoudnt have done that bargain...it would break shivaay's heart
overall superb upt

chap 5-ii:
awesome upt
the book scene was so hilarious
i couldnt stop laughing out loud
rudra is the only one who can come up with these kind of crazy ideas
om's advice of dont cry & shivaay's reaction would be a treat to watch onscreen- wish they would show something like this
anshi's convo was bang on...typical anshi
i loved shivaay in this chap very much
u have portrayed them correctly no over dramatization just plain...thats so perfect
overall lovely upt


P.S: plz write shivaay's emotion when he gets to know about the bargain. it will be really emotional & i would like to read it in your writing style.

Sorry for long comments...

waiting for nxt upt
eager to know what happens nxt
cont soon plz

Originally posted by: Aquamarine03

I registered just to say you r a awesome writer! Loved the chapters. I read them in one go last night. I was bored and I came across ur writings. It was so hard for me to stop myself from laughing out loud in the middle of the night. Hehe

U should definitely look into career in literature. U have very special way of expressing ur stories with your words.

I could honestly imagine the scenes in my head while reading ur story.

Great job.

Pls.update soon

Good luck.

Hello!

I am so sorry to have missed replying to your comment. It's only now that I have got chapter 5 out of the way, that I can sit back and reply to reviews.

So, I'm super glad that someone found my work worthy enough to register and let me know their appreciation. I am truly humbled by this. I have always strived to make my writings multi-dimensional even though the main focus remains around the protagonists. But the side characters are just as important, so I go about expressing their POVs too. Humour really isn't my forte, but things seem to have improved with time. I had planned equal doses of angst, drama and humour while writing this SS so that readers do not get too bored too soon. Happy to know that I made you laugh. That's the best compliment ever.

Career in literature? Let's just say that the dream sequence in the first chapter is actually a part of the original novel manuscript that I have been writing on the side. Maybe within the next ten years, I'll be able to get that published. 😛

Thank you for taking the time to read my story and letting me know that you've enjoyed it. Hope you liked the later updates too.

Regards,
Anju

Originally posted by: -Sarcy-

*I'm going to be gushing today, consider yourself warned.*

OH. MY. GOD! 🤣 🤣 🤣

This was one hell of a comedy piece, Anju. And the craziest part was that I could imagine Rudr doing every single one of those things! 😆

What amazing descriptions does Rudr come up with for Omkara:

-Devilish mind with overgrown hair 🤣

-Wolf in sheep's clothing 🤣

I was actually reading this update when surrounded by people but the moment I read 'Yahooo', 😆 I took it as my cue to go to a private place, and boy, was I glad I did! Because after this point, I just couldn't stop laughing out loud at everything that followed - the most hilarious being when Rudr accidentally changed the song to 'Haila haila hua hua'! 🤣 🤣 🤣

An alternate reality where Rudr Singh Oberoi was fat! 😆

Seeing the way Rudr and O tease Shivaay in the show, I have always wanted them to catch Shivaay-Anika during one of their moments. During the pool scene, I was literally waiting for Rudr and Omkara to walk in on them, but na-uh! Didn't happen! So I was extremely overjoyed to read this update. 😳

I loved the way you transitioned from comic to serious. The way you balanced the hilarity of Rudr's actions and the seriousness of Shivaay and Anika's situation was very impressive.

Rudr is such a goofball! He thought to give O a demonstration of what he saw just because actions speak louder than words. Oh, man! Omkara's disgust was 🤣 🤣.

But the side of Rudr that you brought out in this update was so heartwarming. There's so much that he hides behind his goofy antics. His concern for Shivaay was heartbreaking. His pain at the thought of Shivaay's possible heartbreak was so palpable. 😔 He can read his Shivaay bhaiyya so well that he knows why Shivaay hides his pain from him. The way he made a resolution to end his bhaiyya's pain made me fall in love with Rudr all over again. I'm excited to see what he plans to get rid of Lady Baba. 😆

That little touch that you added with the subconscious gestures on part of Shivaay were so full of love. The ObBros give us major sibling goals! Loved it to the core! ❤️

Sarcy!

Thanks for the warning. All the 🤣 had me smiling throughout your review. I am so happy that people actually laughed after reading this update. All your ROFL emoticons are the best compliments for this chapter.

I have often felt that Rudra has a serious side which he chooses to show only to the select few he considers close. The only situation that could compel him to act maturely would surely involve a crisis concerning his brothers. The hospital scene in the show provided a good insight in that regard. I wanted to portray both dimensions of his personality in this chapter and I am glad that you've spotted the difference and enjoyed reading about him in both avatars.

He can plan all he wants to get rid of Lady Baba, but the one who will take the necessary action will be Om, as I have written in the fifth chapter. There are multiple layers to all the ObBros and fanfiction provides us the chance to explore these facets to our heart's content.

I love reading your reviews. If I haven't said that before, I am saying it now. Thank you once again for reading and reviewing. Hope you enjoy the later chapters too.

Regards,
Anju

Originally posted by: pikychu

brilliant update love the TejVi convo and Om too his character is very mature and i can see him doing this in the future when he realizes that Shivaay too in the shows loves Anika.. liked how u put the heir business into this but i think Shivaay money can't buy everything love the update looking forward to the nxt ..

Hi pikychu,

I am glad that you liked the update. Thank you for reading and taking the time to review. I am a TejVi shipper and want to see this older jodi reconcile in the show. Their scenes have this strong undercurrent of intensity, which led me to interpret Tej's mindset in the way I did. I think their morals and ideals are points of conflict between these two, but in fiction, love conquers all. So, all hope is not lost yet.

Omkara is really mature and I have a surprise planned for the epilogue. 😉 What Shivaay thinks about Om's sacrifice will also be dealt with. There are lose ends in the story that will be addressed in the final update. Do let me know how you like the later updates.

Thanks again!

Regards,
Anju

Originally posted by: jarir2010

it is supeeerrrbbb.thaks dear.i liked ur tejvi version very much,coz in my mind i thought them like this(their history/chmistry).plz plz plz update next part soon.fantastic 👏👏👏

Hello!

We both seem to have a mutual love for Tejvi (their history and chemistry is intriguing). Thank you for reading and letting me know of your appreciation. 😊 The next part is already up and the epilogue will be updated within a few days.

Regards,
Anju

Originally posted by: coolove

That was amazing, I think you looked into tej and Jhanvi's relationship perfectly. I love how you characterised Om in this chapter, I enjoy when he takes a stand for what he believes is right. Please keep writing.

Hey!

I have just given my interpretation of Tej and Jhanvi's relationship. Glad that you enjoyed reading it. Thank you so much for taking the time to review. 😊 And yes, I have always had a passion for writing and will continue to do so. Reviews such as yours are motivation enough! 😃

Cheers
Anju

Originally posted by: mistofshadows

And this time...you answered my wishes!

First of all, Tej's pov was very articulately portrayed. His thoughts on Jhanvi, his subsequent actions and the resultant decisions...they clicked to each other so well, That I could almost see a new and different Tej. Well done!

Now I will come to my favourite part.

Omkara mortgaging his own inheritance to ensure Shivika is something I often felt will come true and even dreamt of such a sequence. You managed to make this a reality by penning this and I am really thankful to you.

Pinky is a manipulative woman and for some reason I cannot agree to her goody-shoes image and every time I imagine, she becomes the quintessential Kaikeyi in the Oberoi-Ramayana who is capable to send Omkara to exile.

Thanks a lot for the PM and bigger thanks for penning this.

Niki

Niki dear!

You ain't seen nothing yet! 😉 I do fulfill wishes of wonderful reviewers like you in my spare time. 😎 So, there.

Tej and Jhanvi is a pair that I've wanted to explore right from the beginning of this SS. Even though the story is essential AnShi, I have this weird problem of stuffing other seemingly simple details of the lives of side characters into the narrative. My updates go on for pages, because I cannot shake that habit. 🤓

Omkara is a wonderful self-sacrificing soul and you'll see more of him when I put up the epilogue. Though I have wanted everyone to appreciate Om for his goody-goody nature in the chapters updated till date, there is a darker or maybe a greyer shade of his character that needs to be shown too. He's calm and composed now, but he's not always been that way, or has he? You'll see that and more closure on various fronts in the final chapter. I can only pray that the Omkara deewanis on the forum do not kill me.

I agree with the Pinky-Kaykeyi analogy. She's selfish when it concerns her son and plans her moves to secure his life (not necessarily happiness). Om sees through her designs and she knows this too. If I contrast the dynamics between these two against that of Jhanvi and Shivaay, we'll see just how dysfunctional this family is.

As always, it is a pleasure to read your reviews. Hope you enjoy the later updates just as much as you did this one.

Regards,
Anju

Originally posted by: KRITII

Such an amazing part 🤗

Omie loves Shivay a lot , if there would've been someone else in his place...no one would do soo much 😳

Waiting for ShivIka ❤️

Update soon and keep giving Lambe Updates 😆

Kritii! Here you go 🤗

Thank you for reading and reviewing. Omie is ❤️ ShivIka is up and running in part 2. Tell me if you liked it. Was it up to your expectations? Last chapter will be updated in a few days. Stay tuned!

Regards
Anju

Originally posted by: SanyaEterna

AMAZING!

Thank you! 😊

Originally posted by: Anjum.

An excellent update! I'm pretty sure Om is the wisest person in room! I'm glad Tej was show his place. Thanks for fleshing out the story and showing it from all sides! A very unique and nuanced look at the life of the Oberoi's. Great work! 👏

Hi Anjum!

Yes, Om really is the wisest one in the room, maybe second to Dadi. If anyone could show Tej his place, it was Jhanvi (you go woman!)! Thank you so much for your kind words and I'm happy that you've enjoyed reading the story from the perspective of multiple characters. My job as an author is done! Feeling accomplished. 😎

Regards,
Anju