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Hey Anju! 😊
I have been following this story for quite some time but haven't managed to comment. Apologies for the same. This is one beautiful AnShi story you have managed to pen down. Your writing is absolutely exquisite! As a frequent and avid reader, your writing style just drew me in. YOur style itself captivated me as a reader more than the story. The story was also so very sweet and romantic. It was filled with the right amounts of romance, angst and humor. I am officially a fan of your writing and am hooked to this story! Hats off for writing it so very brilliantly. 👏
The whole story from Shivaay's turmoil, suicide attempts, ObBros bonding, AnShi scene, Tej monologue and thoughts, the AnShi confession was sheer brilliance.
The AnShi scenes that you have penned... My god!.❤️.. my heart was in bliss. The beauty in the kitchen scene. It was so freaking romantic. I loved it. And that confession. It was so realistic so, so poignantly and elegantly written. It was so very AnShi-ish. I could literally feel ki 'yep this is exactly how these two are going to communicate'.
Om and Rudra - I was in splits with how Rudy boy was trying to explain what he saw. 🤣🤣I was literally ROFL!! It was such a fantastic scene. 😆😆😆Give your self a pat on the back for this! 👏
Tej ka POV and his interactions with Om, and all the ObBros in fact, is something I am really looking forward to. I loved the fact that you explored this character, the backgrounds and scenes so very well.
Pinky is truly devious. She knows to what extents these brothers can go for each other and also that Shivaay had fallen for Anika. This was like a game of chess where she was waiting for the scarifice of one of the pieces patiently. I loved this display of deviousness from her end. Fantastic.!👏
Your story has these tiny minuscule details in them, small description that make it so very strong and brilliant to read.
Keep writing! 😊
Will there be one more chapter before the epilogue?
Awaiting for your update.
Love,
V 😊
I have been following this story for quite some time but haven't managed to comment. Apologies for the same. This is one beautiful AnShi story you have managed to pen down. Your writing is absolutely exquisite! As a frequent and avid reader, your writing style just drew me in. YOur style itself captivated me as a reader more than the story. The story was also so very sweet and romantic. It was filled with the right amounts of romance, angst and humor. I am officially a fan of your writing and am hooked to this story! Hats off for writing it so very brilliantly. 👏
The whole story from Shivaay's turmoil, suicide attempts, ObBros bonding, AnShi scene, Tej monologue and thoughts, the AnShi confession was sheer brilliance.
The AnShi scenes that you have penned... My god!.❤️.. my heart was in bliss. The beauty in the kitchen scene. It was so freaking romantic. I loved it. And that confession. It was so realistic so, so poignantly and elegantly written. It was so very AnShi-ish. I could literally feel ki 'yep this is exactly how these two are going to communicate'.
Om and Rudra - I was in splits with how Rudy boy was trying to explain what he saw. 🤣🤣I was literally ROFL!! It was such a fantastic scene. 😆😆😆Give your self a pat on the back for this! 👏
Tej ka POV and his interactions with Om, and all the ObBros in fact, is something I am really looking forward to. I loved the fact that you explored this character, the backgrounds and scenes so very well.
Pinky is truly devious. She knows to what extents these brothers can go for each other and also that Shivaay had fallen for Anika. This was like a game of chess where she was waiting for the scarifice of one of the pieces patiently. I loved this display of deviousness from her end. Fantastic.!👏
Your story has these tiny minuscule details in them, small description that make it so very strong and brilliant to read.
Keep writing! 😊
Will there be one more chapter before the epilogue?
Awaiting for your update.
Love,
V 😊
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