AnShi SS- TOIL (Epilogue (Part-2.1)-IshKara, Pg.26) - Page 14

Hey Anju! 😊

I have been following this story for quite some time but haven't managed to comment. Apologies for the same. This is one beautiful AnShi story you have managed to pen down. Your writing is absolutely exquisite! As a frequent and avid reader, your writing style just drew me in. YOur style itself captivated me as a reader more than the story. The story was also so very sweet and romantic. It was filled with the right amounts of romance, angst and humor. I am officially a fan of your writing and am hooked to this story! Hats off for writing it so very brilliantly. 👏

The whole story from Shivaay's turmoil, suicide attempts, ObBros bonding, AnShi scene, Tej monologue and thoughts, the AnShi confession was sheer brilliance.

The AnShi scenes that you have penned... My god!.❤️.. my heart was in bliss. The beauty in the kitchen scene. It was so freaking romantic. I loved it. And that confession. It was so realistic so, so poignantly and elegantly written. It was so very AnShi-ish. I could literally feel ki 'yep this is exactly how these two are going to communicate'.

Om and Rudra - I was in splits with how Rudy boy was trying to explain what he saw. 🤣🤣I was literally ROFL!! It was such a fantastic scene. 😆😆😆Give your self a pat on the back for this! 👏

Tej ka POV and his interactions with Om, and all the ObBros in fact, is something I am really looking forward to. I loved the fact that you explored this character, the backgrounds and scenes so very well.

Pinky is truly devious. She knows to what extents these brothers can go for each other and also that Shivaay had fallen for Anika. This was like a game of chess where she was waiting for the scarifice of one of the pieces patiently. I loved this display of deviousness from her end. Fantastic.!👏

Your story has these tiny minuscule details in them, small description that make it so very strong and brilliant to read.

Keep writing! 😊

Will there be one more chapter before the epilogue?

Awaiting for your update.

Love,
V 😊

Hello dear,

this was AMAAAZINNNG! please continue soon 👏

Originally posted by: srividhya68

sorry for late comments

chap 5-i:
superb upt
omru are the best brothers shivaay could get
tej's self loathig was perfectly pictured
jhanvi stood up against tej was perfect
pinkyyy...i hate her
seriously pinky loves money more than shivaay.
om shoudnt have done that bargain...it would break shivaay's heart
overall superb upt

chap 5-ii:
awesome upt
the book scene was so hilarious
i couldnt stop laughing out loud
rudra is the only one who can come up with these kind of crazy ideas
om's advice of dont cry & shivaay's reaction would be a treat to watch onscreen- wish they would show something like this
anshi's convo was bang on...typical anshi
i loved shivaay in this chap very much
u have portrayed them correctly no over dramatization just plain...thats so perfect
overall lovely upt


P.S: plz write shivaay's emotion when he gets to know about the bargain. it will be really emotional & i would like to read it in your writing style.

Sorry for long comments...

waiting for nxt upt
eager to know what happens nxt
cont soon plz

Thank you, Srividhya! 😃 I had hoped to get the confession scene done with minimal fuss, while keeping AnShi in character. I am glad that you've liked my take and enjoyed reading about the other characters and their feelings as well. There is a lot more I wanted to incorporate in this fic, but have decided to do so in another story. The epilogue is going to be really long and I have a framework in mind, but can't find the time to write it down now. It will be up most probably by next week. Your request for Shivaay's reaction to the bargain will be addressed in the epilogue, though I don't think it will be delved into in-depth. Maybe I'll write a spin-off series covering some undisclosed parts of this story. 🤔

This SS is not complete and I think half the story has been kept aside for the epilogue (the story will come full circle then).😆 Thanks again for reading and taking the time to review.😊

Love
Anju

Hey aren't you continuing this..please give us a note when you will be updating this...

Originally posted by: curiousmuse

Thank you so much! 😊 I hope you like the epilogue too when it's updated.

AN: Since many are eagerly anticipating the next update, I would like to inform all my dear readers that I've already begun writing the epilogue which will also be the final chapter of this story. But I am tied up with exam preps this week and will be able to update only after Monday. Please do not fret as this story is far from abandoned. If it's any consolation, the epilogue will be super long (even by my standards) and provide a glimpse into another major romantic jodi of the show which I have deliberately kept under wraps for too long. Their story will form a major chunk of the next update and maybe even the beginning of a completely new FF. Let's see how you like my take on them.😊

Stay tuned!

Regards,
Anju

Awesome. Looking forward to it!

Awesome now looking forward to it

Superlike your note! Looking forward to whatever you may have in store for us!😃😃😃