AnShi SS- TOIL (Epilogue (Part-2.1)-IshKara, Pg.26)

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curiousmuse

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Posted: 9 years ago

#121

Originally posted by: Asyalover
awesome that was just so cute and unique

Thank you! 😊

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ISensedYou

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Posted: 9 years ago

#122

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Jeezz i have never seen such a manipulative and cunning mother like pinky...all she cares about is that her son should be the heir even if his happiness is at stake...and she did know that shivaay like anika and she still waited almost till the last moment for someone to bring this topic up which makes me dislike her more now🤢

Jhanvi🤗she is my favourite. I was so happy to that she stood up for shivaay and supported him. Tejs view about his relationship does makes me like him a bit but also dislike him for the route he took to bring back his jhanvi back...

Om and rudra❤️... i just love om in this... he loves his brother soo much that he ready to do anything for his happiness. I like the fact that he actually argued for his brother. Seriously tej is shivaays happiness more important than your business😕?

I was suprised that shakti actually spoke up for his sons happiness... .

Loved this chapter... you have beautifully described everyones emotions❤️

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ISensedYou

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Posted: 9 years ago

#123

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This was freaking perfect

Trust rudra to give advices on how to propose girl🤣

The book that rudra gave to shivaay was hillarious...i was like rudra you r tooo cute...that book was hillarious😆 im sure rudra ki band bajega courtesy to shivaay

Shivaay and anika r sooo

Im glad shivaay and anika expressed their feelings...i was wondering that if anika hadnt held his collar in the kitchen then how would shivaay had gone about this matter eating a carrot?😆

Just loved it❤️

Edited by kamalapushpa - 9 years ago

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curiousmuse

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Posted: 9 years ago

#124

Originally posted by: twerping
Loved it! Read all the parts at a go! Love the way you've made the characters behave...the way they respond to situations! Loved every twist and turn of the plot and the funny parts were just so good! Looking forward to reading more from you!
And the romance was just amazing! So grounded and yet so giddy and true-love-ish. Perfect combination..

Thank you so much! 😊 I hope you like the epilogue too when it's updated.

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IntrovertedDame

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Posted: 9 years ago

#125

Loving the way you've charted their whole journey till their realization- is there more to come? I hope so:)

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curiousmuse

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Posted: 9 years ago

#126

Originally posted by: sunshinesamuef
I loved it. AnShi confession finally. Please continue soon.

Thank you. 😊

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nissi or jesi

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Posted: 9 years ago

#127

Okay I really gotta unres but now my posts are playing hide and seek with me not finding them...

woahhh again a masterpiece so Om wanna leave for shivaay and he used it as a bait knowing well d mind of pinky ...I know Shivu will never accept dis...

Rudra baby Hayee following everyone like a lost puppy and even a tiny amount of affection is given hr gets happy...how cute can u be baby

coming to d next anshi part

man I so lobe d way u write anshi its best than gul showing in d epi although I love them there too

ROFLMAO dat book and shiv expressions chick magnet ohh gawdd...

Anshi: these two always for each others throats dis is again wat I want even if love happens dis streak shouldn't die

Dat wordless confession by shivaay... fida re...as am not good with words I love d gestures more

their convo had me in splits...when's d epilogue

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Sara

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Posted: 9 years ago

#128

Fab... ur story flows so amazingly well. ... the love seeps like a spring of warm water in a cold winter into the readers heart... thank u

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curiousmuse

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Posted: 9 years ago

#129

Originally posted by: jarir2010
oh what an update.thanks👏👏👏 really enjoyed while reading.confession was superb.i was laughing hard when reading about rudra,s book suggestion.😆😆.the story is coming out beautifully. plz update soon.

Thank you so much! 😊 Will try to put up the epilogue soonish...

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curiousmuse

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Posted: 9 years ago

#130

Originally posted by: --Nargis--
You penned it beautifully...totally consistent with their characters. Going back to re read...can't seem to get enough!!!😳👏

Thank you so much, Nargis!!! 😃 I wanted everyone to be in-character and am glad that consistency has been possible. Will update the epilogue soon.😳