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Posted: 18 years ago
#31
gr8 srishti ur doing an amazing job.keep it up. šŸ‘
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Posted: 18 years ago
#32
PART-8
aditya-chandni toghther celebrate this moment at marine drive!chandni is walking through the wild waves of water and she is very happy!aditya is just standing and is happy to see chandni so happy!u can say he is admiring her beauty and liveliness!chandni calls aditya......
C=aditya aao na dekho kitna maza aa raha hai
A=nahi its ok......u enjoy!
chandni goes to aditya and forces him to come with her.....
C=aditya chalo na ab natak mat karo!
A=are main koi natak nahi kar raha mera sach mein mann nahi hai!
C=oh oh
just then she sees a panipuri wala.....
C=!!!!panipuri!!!!!!
A=panipuri!
C=ab aditya ismein nakhrein mat dikhana chalo!
she drags him to the panipuri wala!!!
C=bhaiya do plate panipuri jaldi se!
B=khatta ya meetha!
C=hmmmm khatta-meetha!aditya tum kya loge!
A=khatta!
C=bhaiya inke liye khatta!
panipuri wala prepares panipuris for them and serves to them!
C=hmm amazing
aditya is just amazed to see chandni he is looking at her as if he is looking at her for the first time!
C=kya huya khao na!
A=haan
he just takes a bite of the panipuri
C=are ise kaise kha rahe ho!oh oh ab tumhe ye bhi batana hoga ki panipuri kaise khai jati hai!
she takes the panipuri and puts it into his mouth!
C=aise khai jati hai panipuri mr aditya khanna!
and aditya just smiles!both of them exchange smiles and spend the golden moments of their life!

its a new day!aditya-chandni both head towards the studio"FILMCITY" where their first film has to be shot and meet Rohit!
A=hello sir!
R=oh hi aditya!aao main tum dono ko tumhe script sunata hun!
rohit takes them with him!
R=plz have a seat!
A=thx!
R=ok humari film ka naam hai"DIL KUCH KEHTA HAI"!its about two strugglers in bollywood and how they fall in love with each other and what problems they face in confessing this love!
aditya is amazed to hear the script he finds sumthing special about the script or sumthing related to him!
R=so kaisi lagi kahani1
C=bahut acchi hai sir!i mean to say maine love stories to bahut suni aur dekhi hai par ye its sumthing special!
R=great and what about u aditya!
aditya doesn't reply!chandni shakes him!
C=aditya bolo na!
R=kya huya aditya tumhe kahani pasand nahi aai kya!
A=nahi sir aisi koi baat nahi hai infact its amazing!
R=great then yeh lo tum dono ke dialogues and ise acchi tarah se rehearse kar lo!i want the best performance!all the best!
AC=thank u sir!


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Posted: 18 years ago
#33
Grrrrrr8.Its getting really intresting.Well dun babes. šŸ‘
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Posted: 18 years ago
#34
tumhari film ka naamkaran bhi hogaya.....good.... šŸ‘
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Posted: 18 years ago
#35
PART-9
........that's cool welcome to aamchi mumbai!hi i m karan!nice to meet u!hi i m anjali!same here!................cut it................perfect shot.............!
there is a glow on aditya-chandni's face after hearing this!rohit comes and congratulates them on their excellent performance!
R=excellent shot!
AC=thanx!
R=welll shot bilkul vaise hi aaya hai jaisa main chahta tha!just upto the mark!aur baki ke scenes main bhi aisi hi perfection lani hai tum dono ko!
A=sure sir!
R=well aaj isi film ke shuru hone ki khushi mein ek party hai and u both have to come!
C=par sir ye party kahan par hai!
R=party aaj shaam ko hai 8p.m. hotel sun'n'sand!
A=we will surily cum sir!
R=ok then done!and abhi tum dono break le lo!aur ye next scene ke dialogues hai!
A=ok sir!
aditya-chandni give shot after shot and therefore the shooting continuous for hours and hours!and finally
.....................PACK UP............................
aditya-chandni are standing in the bus-stand!they miss their bus!
C=are bus to choot gayi!
A=taxi to hain na!
C=nahi nahi faltu ka money-wastage!dusri bus aati hi hogi!
A=chandni ab hum strugglers nahi rahe ab hum actors ban gaye hai and most probably bahut jald stars bhi ban jayenge!
A(seeing a taxi)=!!!!!!!!!TAXI!!!!!!!!!!!
a taxi stops in front of them!aditya opens the door for chandni and says.....
A=ladies first!
chandni just smiles and gets in!aditya also gets in through the other side!and they both reach their respective places!

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Posted: 18 years ago
#36
hmm do i see love blossoming ???
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Posted: 18 years ago
#37
šŸ‘ .Really well dun.Its toooo gud. šŸ‘
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Posted: 18 years ago
#38
PART-10
aditya-chandni reach their respective homes!when chandni reaches home she find that ami is already sitting on bed and watching television!
A=hey hi chandni!
C=hi ami!
A=kaisi rahi shooting!
C=bahut acchi tu bata itni jaldi kaise aa gayi!
A=bas aa gayi!yahan aa na baith!
ami switches off the tv and chandni goes and sit with her on the bed!
A=hey aaj hum dono shopping ke liye chalange ok!bahut mazaa aayega!
C=actually vo ami....
A=kya huya!
C=actually aaj humari i mean aditya aur meri film ki launch party hai!aur jana zaroori bhi hai!
A=oh to ab aditya mujhse zyada important ho gaya!
C=shut up yaar aisi baat nahi hai accha thike to main nahi jati koi bahana kar dungi!
A=are stupid main to mazaak kar rahi thi are heroine ke beger to vahan mehfil suni ho jayegi!nahi!!!
C=ami tu bhi na thank God tune bura nahi mana!
A=are main to tere liye bahut khush hun main ulta kyun bura manungi!are ab teri bhi photo page 3 par aayegi main isi baat se bahut khush hun!chal main kuch bana ke lati hun kya khayegi!
C=hmmmmm aumlate!!
A=ok fine!main abhi banake lati hun!
she cooks the aumlate one for herself and one for chandni and brings the food!
A=here's ur order ma'am!chal dekhte hain tv mein kuch interesting aa raha hai kya!
the moment she switches on the tv cable power cuts off!
A=kya yaar cable ki light ko bhi abhi jana tha!ruk main music system par koi gaane laga ti hun!
the moment she goes near the music system electricity also cuts off!
A=yaar apna to bad luck hi kharaab hai!
C=tu chod na yahan aaja!
A=accha ek minute candle lati hun!
she brings the candle and lightens it!
A=chal aaj candle-light dinner karte hai!accha kuch baat karte hai!aditya ke baaare mein kuch bata!
C=kya batau he is very sweet,innocent,sensitive,humorous!vo jab bhi aata hai na pata nahi kyun mere chehre par hasi aa jati hai!gussa to use bahut kam aata hai par jab aaata hai na to baap re baap!aur vo na.......
A=bas bas maine to sirf intro pucha tha tu to puri biography sunane lagi !kya baat hai itna janti hai tu usko!
C=aisi koi baat nahi hai he is just a friend!
A(in mind)=kuch to hai jiska pata lagan hi hoga!
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Posted: 18 years ago
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šŸ‘ seriously shrishti........damn intrestin......mor dan d org ic šŸ‘ šŸ‘
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Posted: 18 years ago
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PART-11
its exactly 7:30 p.m. and chandni-ami are sleeping on their respective beds!just then alarm clock rings !ami wakes up and tries to awaken chandni by shaking her!
A=chandni uth na!
C=sone de yaar!
A=shaam ke saade sath (7:30pm)baj rahe hai tere ko party mein nahi jana kya!
chandni sudenly awakens
C=kya saade sath baj rahe hai
A=haan ab chal uth aur haath muh dhokar aa!
she goes to the bathroom and freshens up and comes out wipening her face with a towel!she then puts the towel on the chair and takes out a simple dress from the almirah and goes to bathroom to change!after a few minutes she comes out and ami is shocked!
A=are ye kya pehen liya tune!
C=kyun accha nahi hai!
A=chandni tu ek page 3 party mein ja rahi hai!!!!!!
page 3!!!!!!!!vahan itni simple dress!
C=par mere pas to saari aisi hi dresses hai!
A=to mujh se kaha hota na ek second!
she takes out a beautiful dress-a bright red colour maxie!
A=now tell me how's this!
C=ye to bahut sunder hai!
A=acchi hai na to ab ja aur fatafat change karke aa vahan tujhe logo ka interview nahi lena balki logo ne tera interview lena hai samjhi!chal chal time nahi hai!she goes to change!
after a few seconds....
A=chandniji jaldi karo aath bajne wale hai!
C=haan bas ek minute!
just then there is a door bell!ami goes to open the door!
!!!!!its aditya!!!!!he is wearing a black suit
Ami=yes!
Aditya=hi chandni hai!
Ami=aap kaun!
Aditya=main aditya hun!

just then chandni cums from the bathroom!and aditya is stunned to see her!
C=are aditya tum!ami ye hi hai aditya!
Ami=oh hi nice to meet u!
Aditya=hello!
Ami=andar aao na!
Aditya=nahi vo actually der ho rahi hai to maine socha ki chandni ko pick up karta chalu!fir kabhie!
Ami=oh that's ok!
aditya-chandni both leave from there and ami wishes them best of luck for there first page 3 party!



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