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Posted: 18 years ago
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PART-3
aditya and chandni both are walking in different directions!they don't know where they have to go but still they are walking through the dirty streets of mumbai!aditya on his way sees a shooting going on!he goes to that place and meets the director whose film's shooting was going on!aditya thinks that it will be wrong if he will interupt the director in between film's shooting so he waits for a while and for the time being sees that shooting with company of lots n lots of people standing around him!aditya sees that how the so called star son actors are acting so badly!they are not even getting their lines correctly!but still the director is praising them by saying mindblowing acting perfect shot!!!but still he doesn't give up and straight away meets the director and then their conversation begins!

A=hello sir!
D=hello!
A=sir mera naam aditya hai!main ek struggler hun!actor banna chahta hu!
D=to thike tum apna portfolio aur photographs mere office mein chod do!
A=sir main yahan pichle mahine se aaya hua hu aur har director ne yahi kaha portfolio chod do hum dekhenge lekin kara kisi ne kuch bhi nahi!
D=tum mere office mein abhi aao tum se kuch baat karni hai!

after hearing this aditya's face gets brightened and he agrees to cum!

he head towards his office!

A=may i cum in sir!
D=yes!
A=gud morning sir!
D=gud morning!baitho!
A=thnk u sir!
D=kya naam bataya tha tumne apna!
A=ji aditya!aditya khanna!
D=haan aditya!tumhe pata hai tum jaise croro aditya mumbai aate hai!lekin vo mauka vo break sirf kisi kisi ko hi milta hai!meri baat mano apne shahar laut jao!bollywood mein struggle karna tumhare bas ki baat nahi hai!
A=sir aap mujhe ek mauka dijiye main apne aapko prove karke bataunga!
D=dekho aditya tumhe chance nahi de sakta!
A=sir aap un so called stars ke beto ko acting ka A bhi nahi pata unhe mauka de sakte hai lekin jo talented strugglers aate hai unhe apne aapko prove karne ka ek chance bhi nahi de sakte!
D=dekho aditya ye filmein banana koi aasan baat nahi hai!hum in stars ke beto ko ya fir jo actors already stars hai unhe apni film mein lete hai taki humari filmo ko financer mil sake!bollywood aaj bhi chahti hai to sirf shahrukh,salman ya abhishek!bollywood fresh faces ko accept nahi kar sakti!
A=sir main samajhta hu ki star sons ya fir stars ko lete hai!star sons ke baare mein tomain aapko kuch bol sakta lekin jo stars hain ye bhi to pehle strugglers hi the!
D=in sab bato ka koi fayda nahi hai u may leave now!

aditya with an irritated expression on his face leaves from there and he decides that he will not give up and he will become a big star one day!

what about chandni!to know about that keep urselves updated with my fanfic!
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Posted: 18 years ago
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šŸ‘ .....seriously shrishti i feel ur fic is now mor interestin dan d show
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Posted: 18 years ago
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thnx 😳 .....will post the next part veryyyyyyy soon! 😊
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Posted: 18 years ago
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amazing haa....read d entire thing juzz nw.... 😊
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Posted: 18 years ago
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PART-4
chandni is standing near a director's office and she is arguing with the guard!the guard is not permitting her to go in!but still she is trying to make him understand that how urgent is for her to meet the director but the guard tells her that he can't let her go as its the question of his job just then the director cums out and sees chandni and he calls her inside!chandni with a hope enters his cabin!and then their conversation begins!

D=have a seat!
C=thank u sir!
D=haan to bolo kya naam hai tumhara!
C=sir!chandni!
D=chandni bahut accha naam hai mujhse kya kaam hai tumko!
C=sir vo actually main yahan mumbai actress banne aai hun!abhi tak kisi ne mujhe chance nahi diya!agar aap ye photographs aur portfolio dekh lete to....
D=nahi nahi inki koi zaroorat nahi hai tumhe audition dena hoga!
C=to thike sir main abhi dene ke liye tayaar hun!
D=nahi nahi abhi nahi tum ye mera card lo is pate par mujhe milna vahaan tumhara audition bhi le lenge aur.......samajh rahi ho na!

chandni understands everything and she gives an instant reply!

C=sorry sir main is keemat par aapke saath kaam nahi kar sakti!thank u very very much!

she goes from there and slaps the door of director's cabin!now a difficult situation is surrounding chandni such that she is at the mid point of her life where she is helpless! she decides that one day on the basis of her talent she will become a successful actress!

its exactly 3p.m. and as decided aditya and chandni meet up at the same place i.e. gateway of india from where they started their struggle!

A=koi break mila!
C=nahi aur tumhe!
A=nahi!

just then they see a person distributing some printed papers the person cums to them and gives a printed paper to them and after seeing that paper aditya-chandni's faceget brightened!

hey what's there in that printed paper!to know about that keep urselves updated with my fanfic!
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Posted: 18 years ago
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wah wah wahkya story hai.... you know the best part about this Shristi... its that there is no gap like 3 days (fri, sat, sun)when you write your fanfic... great work keep it up. šŸ‘ šŸ‘
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Posted: 18 years ago
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PART-5
its a blue colour glittering and shining paper!on that paper its written that a talent hunt of young and talented actors is going to held on wednesday from 3:30 p.m.-5:30 p.m. after that its written that in final judges will choose a talented girl and a talented boy and these winners will be awarded with Rs 90,00000 and they will be given a chance to act in a film of a big banner and after reading this aditya-chandni get excited!and here begins their conversation....
A=chandni ye apne aapko prove karne ka bahut accha chance hai!
C=haan vo to hai but btw aaj to aaj to wednesday hai!
A=shit!compitetion shuru hone ke liye sirf 20 min baki hai aur ye jagah bhi yahaan se dur hai!chalo jaldi!
C=haan chalo!

aditya-chandni hurriedly rush to the nearest bus-stop and they take a bus to the rite place!they arrive at that place at sharp 3:30 p.m.!and what they see!they see such a big crowd that they have never imagined ever in their lives!crores and crores of people having big dreams!
C=yahan to itne saare log hain!kya hum select ho payenge!
A=kyun nahi ho payenge!hum zaroor select honge!

they both enter the place with confidence and get their registration number!here cums the turn of aditya!he goes and gives his audition!then goes chandni she also gives her best performance and and both get selected for the next round!

will this talent hunt show create a rift between aditya-chandni or will change their friendship into love or.....both!to get ur questions answered keep urselves updated with my fanfic!
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Posted: 18 years ago
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šŸ‘ shrishti ur dis fic is as interestin as frndz or sumthin else......seriously.....keep it up
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Posted: 18 years ago
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PART-6
aditya-chandni are working hard to make their dreams come true!they don't even see that whether its day or night they just rehearse rehearse and rehearse!round by round they give their best of the best of the best performances and bag more and more points from the judges and more and more compliments and valuable votes from the audience!they finally make it to the last round!and after soooo much hardwork aditya-chandni finally win the title of an actor and actress respectively!they both celebrate this success from the place where they strted off i.e. mumbai's pride
gateway of india.
C=aaj main bahut khush hun aditya jo sapne main apni palkon mein leke soti thi vo aaj sach hote dikhai de rahe hain!
A=main bhi bahut khush hun aakhir mujhe aaj meri mehnat ka fal mil gaya!der se hi sahi lekin mila to sahi!
C=vo kehte hai na sabr ka fal meetha hota hai!

and both laugh!

A=are 12 baj gaye hai!
C=oh haan maine to dhyaan bhi nahi diya ki itna time ho gaya!
A=chalo vaapas hotel chalte hai afterall kal humari nayi zindagi ki shuruat hai jahan hoga lights camera and action!
C=matlab!
A=matlab kal hum apni pehli film ka contract sign karenge!
C=vo to hai!chalo jaldi jate hai!subah jaldi bhi to uthna hai!
A=chalo!

both head towards the hotel!

Edited by srishti bhutani - 18 years ago
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Posted: 18 years ago
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Hatsoff šŸ‘ Fantastic fanfic. Million times better than the original IC. 😊 Fantastic efforts. šŸ‘ Just now I read all the six parts. Great job!! continue. 😊

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