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Posted: 18 years ago
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šŸ‘ damn intrestin yaar.........kp it up
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PART-12
aditya-chandni enter the party hall of hotel sun 'n' sand!this pomp and show is sumthing new to them!as they enter people start taking their photographs,interviews and autographs!rohit sees them and take them away from the press and media and introduces them to the top faces of the industry!
R=aditya-chandni ye tara hai tara vadhera!
T=hello!
AC=hello ma'am!
T=are ye ma'am kya laga rakha hai!main itni aged lagti hun kya!just call me tara!
A=ok ma'am i mean to say tara!
and they all laugh!then the party begins all of them start dancing but aditya-chandni are just standing and watching all of them dance!rohit who was first dancing comes to them and askes them to dance!
R=are aditya-chandni tum dono is party ki jaan ho aur tum dono kya boring bankar khade ho!chalo let's dance!
A=no sir jaan vaan kuch nahi mera dance karne ka mood nahi hai
R=c'mmon yaar don't be such a spoilsport!
A=aap chahe to chandni ko le jayiye dance floor par! par main not possible!
C=main!
R=zaroor le jata par i already have a partner tara u know!to chandni akele to dance nahi karegi!chalo
he forces both of them and get them onthe dance floor!rohit gets back with tara and aditya-chandni dance!
aditya-chandni are dancing physically but mentally they r lost in each other's eyes!
tara excuses rohit and goes to the bar and starts drinking!
aditya observes this and excuses chandni and goes to tara!
A=ma'am aap ye kya kar rahe ho!
T(in a drunk voice)=aditya maine tumhe kaha na call me tara just tara!
A=ok tara aapko drink nahi karna chahiye!
T=aap nahi tum kaho!
A=ok tumhe drink nahi karna chahiye!
T=kyun!
A=coz its bad for ur health1
chandni observes this and gets jealous!soon the party ends!aditya goes to chandni and tells her that he has talked to rohit sir and asks her to go with him as tara is not in a state to go back home alone!chandni gets hurt and just nods her head!
aditya drops tara and rohit drops chandni!
aditya-chandni!both r thinking about each other and can't sleep the whole night!
its a new day and both aditya-chandni reach the studio for the shooting!they continuously shoot for 5 hours and its a break!and both sit down to relax!
A=chandni i m sorry!
C=kis baat ke liye!
A=vo kal maine tumhe drop nahi kiya aur tara ko drop karne chala gaya!actually that time she was in a bad state and i hope u understand!
C=its absolutely alright!
A=thx!
just then his cell rings!he picks it up!
A=hello par achanak ok main abhi aata hun ok bye!
A=chandni tara ka phone tha!mujhe abhi ussse milna hoga!
C=par!
A=please rohit sir ko inform kar dena please!
C=thike!
A=thx main aadhe ghante mein aata hun ok!
C=ok!
A=gr8 bye!
Edited by srishti bhutani - 18 years ago
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Posted: 18 years ago
#43
šŸ‘ .dats really intresting.Doing gr8 job dear.
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Posted: 18 years ago
#44
PART-13
chandni is in tears after aditya left!aditya goes to tara's home!
A=hi
T=oh hi aditya plz aao na
A=kaisi ho tum!
T=i m fine!thx kalke liye i m reeli sorry1
A=but kal aapne itna drink kyun kiya!
T=aditya logo ko aisa lagta hai tht i m very happy but its nt true main bahut akeli hun!mere mom dad is duniya mein nahi hai!pata hai jisse bhi maine pyar kiya vo is duniya mein nahi raha!main apne mom dad se bahut pyar karti thi par vo ek car accident mein mar gaye!fir mere rishtedaron ne meri shaadi te ki shaadi ke ek din pehle hi ABHI ek plane crash mein mara gaya!mujhe logo ne manhus kehna shuru kar diya !fir main vahan se bahut dur yahan mumbai aa gayi bahut struggle ki paisa,naam sab kuch mila par ab in sab ka kya fayeda ab to main bahut akeli hu!yahi akela pan mujhe khane laga aur isliye maine sharaab ka sahara liya!
A=aisa karke tum sirf apne aapko dhoka de rahi ho aur kuch nahi chod do sharaab!ye sirf insaan ko barbaad karti hai aur kuch nahi!main filhaal chalta hun!take care!
T=bye!
A=bye
aditya leaves from there and goes back to shooting!and finds chandni talking to rohit!he himself dont't know why but he also gets jealous!
A=hello !
R=oh hi aditya chalo shot ready hai1
A=ji sir main abhi aata hun!
R=ok tab tak chandni u cum tumse kuch baat karni hai!
aditya again gets jealous!but rite now he forgets all that and gets on with the shooting!after the pack up he meets chandni!
A=chandni main tumse kuch kehna chahta tha!
C=kya
A=vo actually
just then rohit comes with a lady!
R=aditya chandni ye meri mom aur is film ki producer hai Mrs.kamini bajaj aur ma humari film ke lead actors aditya and chandni
AC=hello ma'am!
K=hello!u know what aditya pehle is film ke lead ke liye apne bete rohit ko lena chahti thi par isi ne mana kar diya!
R=mom!!!!!
K=ok!ok!main tumhe koi tana nahi suna rahi!but agar tumhe chandni ke opp. cast kiya jata then tum dono ki jodi bahut chalti!i hope aditya u don't mind!
A=not at all ma'am not at all
aditya has a smile on his face but jealousy also!
K=accha then ok bye main aur rohit chalte hai!see u tomorrow!bye
AC=bye ma'am!
aditya drops chandni home on his bike!
A=accha chandni tum aaj shyaam ko kya kar rahi ho!
C=kuch khaas nahi!
A=mere saath dinner ke liye chalogi!
C=ok!
A=gr8 then main tumhe pick up karne 8 o'clock aa jayunga!is it fine with u!
C=ya!
A=ok bye
C=bye!
its exactly 8 aditya comes to chandni's home and take her along with him!they come to a hotel and order sumthing!they r just lost in each other's eyes just then aditya's cell rings and its tara!
A=hello tara!but.... ok main aa raha hun!
chandni i m reeli sorry jana hoga!
C=its ok!
A=bye sorry again
chandni is having a smile on face but tears in eyes!

aditya chandni's film shooting goes on and on in these days,months,year passes and their film is complete and ready to hit the theaters!but u know sumthing their professional lives r on a smooth track but what about their personal lives!they love each other but can't confess their feelings for each other!in this 1 year distances r developed between them!call it their luck or whatever!both r unaware about each other's feelings!everytime when they feel that everything is ok sumthing happens that leads to the distances!aditya is only having sympathy for tara but tara misunderstoods aditya's sympathy as love and even chandni misunderstoods that she is only having feelings for aditya and aditya loves sum1else!and chandni she is only having friendship with rohit but rohit misunderstoods this friendship as love and even aditya misunderstoods that he is only having feelings for chandni and chandni loves sum1else!

after this 1 whole year their film releases and its a huge hit!aditya-chandni have proven their talent!but still they r alone!what they want is each other's company!

time passes and now there is an award ceremony in which aditya-chandni get awards for best newcomers!while the event is going on chandni leaves from there and rohit drops her home!
C=bye!
R=actually chandni mujhe tumse ek baat karni thi!
C=kya
R=i luv u!will u marry me!
C=sorry sir par ye sab namunkin hai
R=par kyun kya tum kisi aur se
C=haan par vo mujhse pyar nahi karta
R=fir bhi tum!
C=haan sir fir bhi!pyar sirf ek baar hota hai dusri baar sirf samjhota!
R=dua karta hun tumhe tumhara pyar mil jaye!
chandni smiles and leave from there!
there in the event aditya is very sad just then tara comes to him!
T=hi!
A=hi
T=aditya i luv u!
A=kya
T=haan i really luv u
A=tara tum meri bahut acchi dost hopar pyar main kisi aur se karta hun
T=ye to nahi puchungi ki vo kaun hai shayad bardaasht na kar payun lekin ek hi dua karungi tumhe tumhara pyar mil jaye!
A=shayad vo munkin nahi hai!
T=agar tum usse saccha pyar karte ho to bilkul munkin hai!
she shakes hand with him saying......
neways nice to meet u!bye!
its a new day and aditya decides to meet chandni rather then keeping his feeling in his heart!
he goes to her home and amy opens the door!
A=hi amy!
Amy=aditya aao na!
A=chandni hai!
Amy=vo to chali gayi!
A=kahan
Amy=austrailia!vo tumse bahut pyar karti thi par tum tara se
A=kya!chandni mujhse!uski flight kitne baje ki thi
Amy=10 baje ki
A=aur abhi saade nau hai(9:30 am)ok main ja raha hun
Amy=kahan
A=chandni ko rokne
Amy=par tum to
A=main chandni se pyar karta hun!bye
Amy= bye all the best
aditya rushes to the airport but guard stop him!
G=saab aap andar nahi ja sakte
A=dekhiye mera andar jana bahut zaroori hai
just then a senior police inspector comes who is aditya's relative only
SP=aditya tum
A=uncle mera andar jaana bahut zaroorihai plz
SP=ise jaane do meri jaan pehchaan ka hai!
aditya thanks him and enters the airpost he is searching for chandni but there is no clue of her just then his mind clicks and he goes to the announcement room and he requests the announcer to plz let him announce and hopefully the announcer agrees1aditya announces.......
A=chandni
everyone out there becomes attemptive and
chandni who was first moving towards her flight stops after hearing aditya's voice and turns around with expectations to find him!but then she realises that aditya is somewhere else and taking her name
aditya continues.....
A(with tears in his eyes)=chandni tum jahan bhi ho ruk jao ruk jao chandni main tumse pyar karta hun sirf tumse!agar tum aaj nahi ruki to main bahut akela pad jaunga bahut akela plz ruk jao!
he makes an exit from the announcement room and finds chandni standing b4 him!he moves towards her and wipes her tears!
A=i luv u chandni!
C=i luv u too
and they both hug and everyone standing there in the airport claps for their true love for each other!

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Posted: 18 years ago
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thx for all the appreciation guyz!hope u all like the last part of this fic!😊

Edited by srishti bhutani - 18 years ago
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Posted: 18 years ago
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ohhhh d bst part bout ur fic is shrishti dat ur fics always end on a really sweet note....completely hats off šŸ‘
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Posted: 18 years ago
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it was grrrrrrrrrrrrrrrrr8.too gud well dun. šŸ‘

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