strugglers in town(part 13)(last part)

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Posted: 18 years ago
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hey guyz!

i m strting a new fanfic!i promise u it will be as good as my earlier fic!heres presenting u the character introduction and the concept of my story!hope u guyz will like it and my request to all of u plz plz plz give ur valuable comments!

ADITYA KHANNA::A guy who has run away from his house and has reached mumbai to struggle in bollywood!he lives as a pg in andheri at mrs. fernandis's house who treats him like a son nt a pg!

wardrobe::simple t-shirts with jackets and jeans!

CHANDNI KAPOOR::A gal who is very ambitious and want to become a successsful actress but until now she hasn't got a break in bollywood but she is struggling in the tinsel town!she lives in a hostel and her room mate''amy'' is her best friend!

wardrobe::long skirts and cut sleeves tops!

KAMINI BAJAJ::Successful film producer and very ambitious!ready to do anything to everything for making profit!sweet but sumtimes sarcastic!

ROHIT BAJAJ(dilawar of ic)::Son of kamini bajaj and a successful film director!

TARA VADHERA::Very ambitious and a successful bollywood actress but alone

AMY::An air-hostess in indian airlines and Chandni's room-mate and her best friend.

MRS.FERNANDIS(bg of ic)::Aditya's landlord!she treats aditya like a son not as a pg!

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the story deals with emotions like jeolousy,love,friendship,sadness and happiness!its basically about two strugglers ADITYA-CHANDNI!ppl. they cum across,problems they face,their relationship with each other....its all about that!

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Posted: 18 years ago
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hmmm interesting... so how and when.......... šŸ˜›
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Posted: 18 years ago
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hey its cool plzz continue soon
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Posted: 18 years ago
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omg shrishti it seems soooooo interestin 4m d intro onlyšŸ‘ .........plz post d nxt part fast......vaitin 4 it
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Posted: 18 years ago
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PART-1
Film world i mean to say bollywood is very vast!many people i mean strugglers cum here in search of a single break!sum get suceeded,sum get defeated so sum get lost in this unknown crowd!aditya-chandni were from the first category of strugglers who got suceeded but lost sumthing in this process!what lets see!

its a bright noon!sun is over head giving its bright light to everyone!a long queue is standing in front of a studio waiting for their turn!

everyone is having a drop of sweat on forehead but a bright light of hope in eyes!on the 40th number(u can imagine how long was the queue) there is standing a girl!simple but ambitious!not wearing so expensive clothes jus a maroon colour long skirt and a light brown cut-sleeves top and having a file in her hands which just slips out of her hands!she bends to take the file and hearing the subtle but deliberate sound of falling the file a boy standing next to her helps her to pick-up the scatered papers!and then their conversation begins!

girl=thx!
boy=its ok!vaise aapka naam kya hai!
girl=hi!i m chandni!aapka naam kya hai1
boy=i m aditya!yahan audition dene ke liye aai ho!
girl=well itni lambi line to isi ki lagi hai!
and both of them laugh!

jus then a person cums out of the studio and announces that the directors have chosen the right actor and others may leave!chandni gets upset and having a look on her face expression aditya says sumthing to her!what lets see!

A=fikar mat karo aaj nahi to kal tumhe break mil hi jayega!
C=tumhe kaise pata?
A=bas pata hai!tumse milke i mean tumse baat karke aisa laga ki tum mein vo talent vo confidence hai jo koi na koi bada director zaroor pehchan lega!i wish u all the best!
C=thx!all the best to you too!
A=thnx!
C=neways nice meeting u!bye afterall tumne jo baat kahi hai use sach karne bhi ta jana hai!
A=ok bye!
and they both head towards their ways!

Aditya-Chandni both were looking 4 their first breaks but none of the directors give them a single chance to showcase their talent!but still in the whole day they just went from one place to another!they didn't know that they will meet again!

its midnight exactly 12!after a day's struggle chandni goes to sit on a bench and a person was already sitting besides her and to her surprise it was none other than aditya!

C=aditya!
A=chandni!
C=maine socha naho tha hum fir milenge!
A=maine bhi nahi!so kaisa raha aaj ka din!koi break mila!
C=nahi abhi tak to nahi!tumhe koi break mila!
A=nahi!
C=mujhe nahi pata tha ki bollywood jo samne is itna aasan dikhta hai vo itna complicated hoga!din bhar ki struggle ke baad mujhe to bahut bhook lag rahi hai!
A=vo dekho samne ek vada-paw ki dukaan!vahan se kuch leke aate hai!
C=thike!
both head towards the shop and get themselves a vada paw wrapped in a piece of newspaper!and sit on the same bench and strt eating!

A=vaise tum yahan kiske saath rehti ho!
C=lincoln road pe ek hostel hai st.mary hostel main vahin rehti hun apni friend ke saath!aur tum?
A=main andheri mein rehta hun rustam society mein as a pg meri aunty ke saath i mean meri landlord''mrs fernandis''.
C=tum yahan mumbai mein kab se ho!
A=ek mahine se aur tum!
C=main to pichle hafte hi yahan aai thi!aur pata nahi tha yahan struggle karna itna mushkil hoga!paise jo layi thi vo bhi khatam ho gaye!
A=to tum part time job kyun nahi kar leti!actually main bhi kar hi rahan hun!vo bhi do jagah!petrol pump aur cafe mein!
C=i think tum thik keh rahe ho!main aisa karti hun ki tutions pada leti hun!
A=gr8!jitne paise main in do jagah naukri karke kama leta hun utna to tum tutions pada kar hi kama logi!
C=haan vo to hai!
A=friends!
C=sure!

they both shake hands!


A=to fir thike kal se hum ek saath struggle karenge!
C=gr8!
A=ok then kal thik 9 o'clock gateway of india!
C=done!

is success on their way!to know that keep urselves updated with my fanfic''strugglers in town''!

Edited by srishti bhutani - 18 years ago
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Posted: 18 years ago
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omg dis is so interestin shrishti........ur 2 gud at fics šŸ‘
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Posted: 18 years ago
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its so nice n intresting. šŸ‘ Dun't keep me waiting for toooo long. šŸ˜‰
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Posted: 18 years ago
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PART-2
its yet another bright morning!chandni is getting ready she is about to leave but just then her room mate amy reaches there!

A=hi
C=bye
A=kahan ja rahi hai!
C=bollywood mein struggle karne!
A=all the best!
C=thx!

chandni leaves from there!

there on other hand aditya is also getting ready!he is about to leave jus then mrs.fernandis his landlord calls him!
MF=adi beta nashta to karte jao!
A=aunty aaj time nahi hai main ja raha hu!
MF=aise kaise chalo gud boy ki tarah kam se kam ye milk ka glass to khatam karo!

aditya hurriedly drinks the glass of milk and hugs his aunty!

A=ok bye aunty!
MF=god bless u m child!

aditya leaves from there!

both meet at gateway of india!

A=hi!
C=hi!
A=so kahan se shuruat ki jaye!
C=hmmmmm aisa karte hai hum dono alag alag directions mein role dhundne jate hai!aur hum yahan pe thik 3 baje milenge!ok!
A=cool!all the best!
C=same to u!

both head towards different directions!

ps:thx 4 all the appreciation guyz!

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Posted: 18 years ago
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gr8 plot!!!!!!!!!!šŸ‘

continue please

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Posted: 18 years ago
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ur fic is really gud yaar..... šŸ‘
plz post d nxt part venevr u hav time

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