Kiska Rasta Dekhe Ae Dil : An Arylie ff Ch.5 : Ochre Yellow p.15 - Page 9

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Posted: 3 years ago
#81

Originally posted by: -TeriMalang-

Wow! This forums has genuis writers. Which makes me want to settle her and let the stories pour in .

That was plethora of emotions. Imlie now immune to the words of Pd wasis. Aryan who don't care what the world think is being effected by those unimportant ppl and their wrds. He took the biggest step not to put them in their place but to protect HER .all he could think was her protection.protecting her from the world not those superficial wounds , but those inconspicuous ones.

Livid imlie is sight that Aryan would'nt like to come across with. As that comes with silent war which he cannot afford to live with .

Kabhi kisi cheez ko na tarasne wale

Kabhi Kisi ki awaz ko taraste hai.

P.s: this for the 3 updates. Will come back after reading 4 update



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Would love to know your thoughts on this chapter as well. :)

@waffle — remember kal ka SEGGSY TIMES prompt? 😳

@mona— thank you so much for reading!


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Posted: 3 years ago
#82

This: What was she doing gawking at him from behind the blinds in the middle of a hospital? Did she have brain fever?

Gawk, stare, gaze, ogle, etc etc Do what ever you feel like Imlie, we are right there with you. 🤣

I found it interesting that you did not include anything from Aparna, is she so dense that she did not even ask Imlie if she was ok after everything. Ah what a weird person.

But an amazing chapter. Waiting for next part.

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Posted: 3 years ago
#83

Amazingly written...... Waiting for next.....update soon.....😊

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Posted: 3 years ago
#84

Originally posted by: nmurali

This: What was she doing gawking at him from behind the blinds in the middle of a hospital? Did she have brain fever?

Gawk, stare, gaze, ogle, etc etc Do what ever you feel like Imlie, we are right there with you. 🤣

I found it interesting that you did not include anything from Aparna, is she so dense that she did not even ask Imlie if she was ok after everything. Ah what a weird person.

But an amazing chapter. Waiting for next part.

Aparna bores me to death and inspires nothing in me. 🤷

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Posted: 3 years ago
#85

Chapter 2 thoughts-

Action packed!

I know this was written before that track finished but .. I’m on the fence about “coincidental” shaadi 🤣 but loving Imlie Satyakam Rathore 😍

Question, mature kyun? 😂

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Posted: 3 years ago
#86

While I’m here, & before I forget, Pooja - lol your siggie changes by the day 🤣🤣

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Posted: 3 years ago
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Originally posted by: moksha89

While I’m here, & before I forget, Pooja - lol your siggie changes by the day 🤣🤣

You already missed one in between as you were busy... 😆

I don't want the efforts of talented creators to go in vain 😎😎

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Posted: 3 years ago
#88

Had tons of caffeine the other day - topped off with Turkish coffee & was buzzing until 4 am 🥲 Me thinks it was my mind racing more than the coffeeeez


One, I enjoy the music so keep it coming


Two, looks like AryLie have a lot of introspection and there’s a transparent convo to be had. Can’t wait to see where you take this


I’ve been awol, what’s this 15 post thing. Is this why I’m seeing delta-ben everywhere 🤣


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Posted: 3 years ago
#89

Originally posted by: SundariP

You already missed one in between as you were busy... 😆

I don't want the efforts of talented creators to go in vain 😎😎


🤣🤣 I enjoy it - it’s like viewing the surface of the greatest hits


i think I’ve seen 3 siggies thus far, yday was mhmm hmmm

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Posted: 3 years ago
#90

Yes she's got limitations hence delta-ben around.


And if you saw mmmmhmmm, then you didn't miss anything it's the third one


Still busy or a bit free now?

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