Kiska Rasta Dekhe Ae Dil : An Arylie ff Ch.5 : Ochre Yellow p.15 - Page 3

For something that was hastily (or in your words, capriciously) written, you've captured all the emotions ...Imlie's helplessness and desperation.. Aryan being an inadvertent sweetheart with his denial, concern and admiration for everything Imlie..

The part I loved most was of course the imagery of Imlie's house that was empty and yet rife with memories..

Do keep writing.. I'd love to see more

Awesome... Amazingly written.....continue soon.....😊❤️

It's sooo good. You gotta keep writing more.

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btw what is this? ss/ts/ff?

Originally posted by: lovereading14

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btw what is this? ss/ts/ff?

I don't exactly know, love. Had to write it because these scenes should be shown in the show.

Having been thinking/planning another chapter though.

Originally posted by: reginalsecret

For something that was hastily (or in your words, capriciously) written, you've captured all the emotions ...Imlie's helplessness and desperation.. Aryan being an inadvertent sweetheart with his denial, concern and admiration for everything Imlie..

The part I loved most was of course the imagery of Imlie's house that was empty and yet rife with memories..

Do keep writing.. I'd love to see more

Thank you so much, R!

They really write poor scenes in the show.

I love the sensory details, here. You’re a descriptive writer so I enjoy that it provides a setting and allows the “lines inbtwn” to be molded by my imagination. The description of Imlie’s home was so nicely done - I’m a fan of seeing the beauty in the quaint normalcy of life

I equate Aryan and his portrayal to feline qualities: observant, intelligence, and grace. Mischievous, intuitive & sudden at times. Loved that you included some of his guidance at the end

Okay I only read annulment and imlie satyakam Rath... Something incomplete....

So short circuit on top floor 😳😳😳

Originally posted by: Bluegrass

Combust!

You mean this literally and that makes me sad somehow 😂