Arylie TS: A storm is brewing Chapter 3 (16+), updated Page 9 - Page 8

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Posted: 3 years ago
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Originally posted by: dusk2dawn

I am back after reading the whole TS is amazing…❤️

I loved how you have interwoven everything with your SS, OS n TS.

Thank you for writing such beautiful pieces..🤗

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This TS was needed to build the foundation of unwavering trust between Aryan n Imlie. As Aryan knew when it comes to T’s imlie will stop thinking from her brains. I am loss of words. Honestly speaking when I am overwhelmed with so many things to write about the beautiful stories I read I literally hit the writer’s block.

I always wanted to write comments about your stories since I started reading full circle. But everytime I write few words something or the other thing comes up n then I get busy n totally forget. n I apologize for that..🙏


I am thrilled you decided to post today! So glad you liked the plot and its execution ❤️🤗

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Posted: 3 years ago
#72

Outstanding plz update soon

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Posted: 3 years ago
#73

First off, congrats on successfully completing this TS...I know how hard it is to stay committed to something like this....

Second, Yesss!! I don't think clearing things up could get any better than this....I was a lil anxious but not too much cuz I know you ain't like the shi*ty writers of our beloved show....Nothing like a lil' lovers' spat to have them go strong again...and I love that you kept Aryan the way he should be....caring yet uncompromising..loved it, loved it, loved it


As usual thanks for tagging me, and will be lookin' forward to more

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Posted: 3 years ago
#74

You know what I love about their relationship that you have penned so beautifully. Their communication. No matter what they will always talk it out. And that’s what makes their relationship work. Makes it different from her past one. As always an outstanding job. ❤️🥺

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Posted: 3 years ago
#75

It was so beautiful 😍!! I loved your way of presenting both of them.❤️ so organic and raw feelings it gives. Their intimate scenes are also feels so natural. No hype & no vulgarity. Only purity & serenity. Even their conversations are so full of understanding & calmness. This kind of relationship which Imlie has always deserved. This song which you have used is beautiful 😍

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Posted: 3 years ago
#76

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you are damn tease... you know that right???

the massage comment? when i read it first time i was like 😲😳☺️

but you clearly had no plans to follow through 😔


but well compensated with the tie.... (I say blindfold is best way to tackle trust isuess 😆)

and thankfully my aru baby wasn't tadpaofied to infinity again 😆


their conversation is total love ❤️

i first loved how imlie used her education to get things outta him...

like wow... her husband's money and alll this long distance angst is put to right use 😆

then their honesty and openness in communication that leads to strengthening of that trust bond they've formed over the year.... classic example of how little fights lead to strengthening of love.


the end... its total in sync with their convo

how the andhera of doubt and MU cleared giving way to the sunshine on their relationship with renewed trust and understanding.❤️

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Posted: 3 years ago
#77

Thanks for the tag

Loved it

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Posted: 3 years ago
#78

OMG NOW I UNDERSTOOD THAT UDHAR WAALI BAAT

DID NOT EVEN EXPECT IT WAS IN CONTEXT AYYYOOO.

Why do I feel the tie, specifically red , was sort of inspired from the Shiddat dance 🤭

Ohhhooo, using her analytical mind to get Aru to spill the beans 👌🏻

Wonder what Aru would think of that 🤧

Sooooo, how is Aru gonna give them back the money 🤔

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Posted: 3 years ago
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It's Amazing. More then the episode I'll wait for ur update it's like addiction.iam addicted to ur stories and sometimes it helps me to refresh my mood thank you😘😘😘.Lots of loveeeee😍😍

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Posted: 3 years ago
#80

Wow beautiful...!!

Perfect song....everything just perfect...

Are you like srsly a literal godess...im the words were sooo expressive in their own way...

I need some air...

Please do write more...keep up the good work👏🏻👏🏻👏🏻👏🏻

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