Arylie TS: A storm is brewing Chapter 3 (16+), updated Page 9 - Page 9

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Posted: 3 years ago
#81

Originally posted by: Chanchal_tvd

Wow beautiful...!!

Perfect song....everything just perfect...

Are you like srsly a literal godess...im the words were sooo expressive in their own way...

I need some air...

Please do write more...keep up the good work👏🏻👏🏻👏🏻👏🏻


yes yes, the bullying worked huh? Thik hai ab OS ke bare mein zaroor sochenge 😘😘 seriously though, thanks for reading. If you don’t react or leave a comment how will I know. So thanks for taking the time 🤗🤗

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Posted: 3 years ago
#82

Originally posted by: Madhu_Sharma123

It's Amazing. More then the episode I'll wait for ur update it's like addiction.iam addicted to ur stories and sometimes it helps me to refresh my mood thank you😘😘😘.Lots of loveeeee😍😍


Awwwww, you melt my heart ❤️ ❤️ What a lovely compliment!

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Posted: 3 years ago
#83

Originally posted by: Chanchal_tvd

Wow beautiful...!!

Perfect song....everything just perfect...

Are you like srsly a literal godess...im the words were sooo expressive in their own way...

I need some air...

Please do write more...keep up the good work👏🏻👏🏻👏🏻👏🏻


@bold: Also I want to say the title of literal goddess on this forum should go to @MaryBarton. You probably already have, but if not, please read her FF Sabr. It is the perfect balance of humor, emotional connect and heat. ❤️

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Posted: 3 years ago
#84

Originally posted by: mltr16


yes yes, the bullying worked huh? Thik hai ab OS ke bare mein zaroor sochenge 😘😘 seriously though, thanks for reading. If you don’t react or leave a comment how will I know. So thanks for taking the time 🤗🤗


as i said bullying always works 🤣

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Posted: 3 years ago
#85

All's well that ends well ☺️!

Happy they communicated without any hesitation!

Another amazing update! The emotions are soo well written and described!

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Posted: 3 years ago
#86

Reconciliation doesnt get better than this! Perfect blend of the naughty and domestic vibe that this couple fits into!

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Posted: 3 years ago
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Fantastic update soon

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Posted: 3 years ago
#88

Yep total love everytime I read it ❤️

Abandoned the book to after 2 pages because

AryLie >>>>>>> ordinary world things

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Posted: 3 years ago
#89

asdfiahfj;a dfjaiwesdfasdf i just got back from lunch and hadn't checked the forums yesterday because i was so busy with school work and this was a delightful surprise to see this last part of this story. i LOVED their discussion, and am so glad you are pacing yourself/will be working your way towards a break so you can think through the bigger story and get a break too. as much as i love your work i dont want you to burn out for your own good!

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Posted: 3 years ago
#90

Awesome progression and the resolve of the conflict. This was written nicely for a delicate issue, where one could relate to both of the characters.👏👍🏼

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