Arylie TS: A storm is brewing Chapter 3 (16+), updated Page 9 - Page 7

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Posted: 3 years ago
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That is such a satisfying update. You hit all the right notes, fantastic 👏 👌 👍

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Posted: 3 years ago
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Originally posted by: nikipuki

That is such a satisfying update. You hit all the right notes, fantastic 👏 👌 👍


Awwww thanks, Nikipuki. Unlike some of my other OS this one required a lot of contemplation and trying to enter Aryan and Imlie's heads. Or at least my fictional pair's heads 😃 I am so glad it paid off and you liked it! 🤗

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Posted: 3 years ago
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Dear M,🤗

Ohh girl..

Do you possess the power to read minds?? Are you a mind reader??

Don’t let me be misunderstood.. This song is my daily go to song.. I was listening to it yesterday and I was thinking to write a piece on Aryan n Imlie with the song. N I while reading last part of your beautiful story yesterday it came to my mind that the situation exactly matches with the lyrics of the song..

I am yet to read this part.. but I know it would be as beautiful as you and your writing.

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Posted: 3 years ago
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Originally posted by: dusk2dawn

Dear M,🤗

Ohh girl..

Do you possess the power to read minds?? Are you a mind reader??

Don’t let me be misunderstood.. This song is my daily go to song.. I was listening to it yesterday and I was thinking to write a piece on Aryan n Imlie with the song. N I while reading last part of your beautiful story yesterday it came to my mind that the situation exactly matches with the lyrics of the song..

I am yet to read this part.. but I know it would be as beautiful as you and your writing.


The only reason I was able to use this song is because @bluegrass generously suggested it. So kudos to her for picking this gem🤗 Let me know what you think of the story when you are done reading it. ❤️

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Posted: 3 years ago
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In any relationship when there is any misunderstanding or dispute the best way is to communicate with each other n every thing will be sort out... Loved this so much

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Posted: 3 years ago
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Loved it. Definitely not vanilla! 🤣☺️

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Posted: 3 years ago
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Aww..they are so adorable 😍 ..thank you fir writing such a beautiful piece...

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Posted: 3 years ago
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Originally posted by: mltr16


The only reason I was able to use this song is because @bluegrass generously suggested it. So kudos to her for picking this gem🤗 Let me know what you think of the story when you are done reading it. ❤️

This song itself is amazing…A true gem..It has 3-4 versions.

Thank you bluegrass for suggesting the gem.

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Posted: 3 years ago
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Anothrer amazing chapter, both were suffering but once they talked to each other, their trust actually grew. Both were right and wrong and they realised it and corrected it. Awesome

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Posted: 3 years ago
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I am back after reading the whole TS is amazing…❤️

I loved how you have interwoven everything with your SS, OS n TS.

Thank you for writing such beautiful pieces..🤗

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This TS was needed to build the foundation of unwavering trust between Aryan n Imlie. As Aryan knew when it comes to T’s imlie will stop thinking from her brains. I am loss of words. Honestly speaking when I am overwhelmed with so many things to write about the beautiful stories I read I literally hit the writer’s block.

I always wanted to write comments about your stories since I started reading full circle. But everytime I write few words something or the other thing comes up n then I get busy n totally forget. n I apologize for that..🙏

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