Arylie TS: A storm is brewing Chapter 3 (16+), updated Page 9 - Page 10

First! I love that Mess is Mine connected with you for this story! It’s one of my most favourite songs and fits so well here!!

Second. This was so beautifully done. You did such a great job at showing that Arylie’s relationship is anchored on trust and communication. The minute they stopped communicating - both of their own valid reasons, his specifically being because he wanted her to focus - issues arose. That’s not who they are. They share/talk about things.

Long distance is hard though and communication has a chance of really breaking down during these relationships. I love that they prioritize their relationships. I love that they talk and are honest with each other. I love that Aryan was open with how much her doubts hurt him.

When he went to his room and realized Imlie was there, them hugging each other because of just how happy they were to be together, the relief - I felt that in my bones. You’re such a great writer. Bravo!! ♥️♥️♥️

As always looking forward to reading more. I would probably write more - gushing about this - but I should really go to sleep. I had fallen asleep on the couch and then was so wide awake by the time I got up to bed that I thought I’d read these before attempting sleep again.

Finally..To M”s A storm brewingChapter1 & Chapter 2

Aryan when he says Imlie’s student mind is very cute is right .His strategic mind has to be attracted to that too.The face off between AA is amazing .Aryan calming the hell down for Imlie :).His acceptance that he is absolutely grey when it comes to Aditya makes it even better.The strategist mind of his is fire.Aparna as usual is annoying..Rupi didi finally taking responsibility of not dumping things on her.

Chap 2

The first couple fight..I am as restless as them..The angsts this served. I won’t repeat the things you have written, but M the relationship dynamics,physical and emotional -trust factor with no qns asked is woven in very very well like how couple goals should be .

HarishJi part is tricky too. Hmm okay Aryan..Though it is with good intention in mind,I would have lost my mind if I were Imlie with Neel and family in qn.

Piya Tose is love.I have never seen a more perfect song for this situation

Love

Lex

Chapter 3

And Imlie is here .Aww the relief and tears -Them and me :)They are as normal as they can be with that desire kicking in .
Running to google mata to get details about that red fabric and it’s uses😂There was information overload .

And the convo.Imlie’s bribe dialougue 😂Her dialogue on how to non judge mentally approach Aryan -That entire work track ❤️
Aryan explaining about how he should protect his office members and his own credibility is the absolute fact .As a boss ,There are so many things to protect .

sunrise and sukoon -Such well thought our characters M .Imlie not being just cute and jumpy makes its so special .

Was just resolving their trust issues in detail in my imagination...

So after Imlie proved her trust on him,

It was Aryan's turn and he didn't back off....

That's all I'm gonna say here ☺️

S/n : congratulations golden girl 🥳

Originally posted by: SundariP

Was just resolving their trust issues in detail in my imagination...

So after Imlie proved her trust on him,

It was Aryan's turn and he didn't back off....

That's all I'm gonna say here ☺️

S/n : congratulations golden girl 🥳

🤣🤣🤣 It eej implied and left to reader's fantasies. Aryan has proven to be a very generous lover, how would he leave her out of the fun? 🤣🤣

Originally posted by: mltr16

🤣🤣🤣 It eej implied and left to reader's fantasies. Aryan has proven to be a very generous lover, how would he leave her out of the fun? 🤣🤣

In my version karma plays a big role...

Want goes around comes around

Now guess who's turn it is to take the tie 😆

Originally posted by: SundariP

In my version karma plays a big role...

Want goes around comes around

Now guess who's turn it is to take the tie 😆

ROFL!!! 🤣🤣🤣🤣 Twisting my own words, are we??

Originally posted by: mltr16

ROFL!!! 🤣🤣🤣🤣 Twisting my own words, are we??

Generous lover gets what generous lover deserves.... That's all 😈

Can someone please help me find chapter 2😅

Originally posted by: DeeptiBatchu

Can someone please help me find chapter 2😅

https://www.indiaforums.com/forum/post/160053084