OS: Consequences (16+) PART 3 UPATED PG 14 (NOTE ADDED) - Page 10

Originally posted by: AmanaR

OMG! You're absolutely amazing!

The temperature is hitting the roof!! Youve captured arzoo's thought process soo perfectly. I love that she cant help but her mind is taing her places and thats completely freaking her out. And Sahir, omg he's got it bad for her.

Also, thanks for the pm!

You're welcome! I've tried to stick to the original characters as much as possible, and I'm thrilled you like them.😛

Originally posted by: -vandy-

aah neem...this was absolutely awesome

but...sahir's pov was hotter☺️

i might sound biased🤣 but my sahir is way more passionate than aarzoo ☺️ 🤣

neways coming to the os...u have a marvellous style of writing...its different...and i just loved how u know..just got into the thought process of our leads...

waiting for a lot more from u...😳

Vandy,

Some of it is due to that sexybaaz thread you've started. 😳

Sahir is older, more experienced, so of course, he is more, ahem...passionate.

That's the age=old appeal of this genre of stories-- the fierce, experienced male, and the innocent, fragile female. The feminist in me balks at it sometimes. I've tried to make it as strong as I'd like a woman to be-- a trembling woman is good, but the one that learns to tremble yet move forward, well, those are the winners, imo.

Am not sure I have a lot more to give-- but I sure am bowled over by all the love this thread has received.😛

Originally posted by: HCDeewani

Wow! I read both parts and, what a treat! Absolutely wonderful. The emotions were written perfectly. I could visualize this in front of my eyes. You are so very talented. I hope that you will treat us with more of your writing pieces in the near future.

Loved it!

Nikki

Nikki,
To give the reader an experience, that's what writing is all about, and I'm happy I manage to touch the reader in you with my words.
Thanks for taking the time to comment, and ofc, if I write more, you'll receive a pm.😊

Originally posted by: Rummykub

Thank you for the pm. Simply spellbinding!!! The original humsafars is beginning to pale in front your version. Makes us all panting for more.😉 Don't you dare stop now. Promise us you will keep dishing out more of it. This is the just the beginning of your long innings here I hope.

Thanks again.

I can't make promises I might not be able to keep, but I have to thank you for your comments, and assure you that if I do write a sequel to this one, I'll definitely pm you.

I have added everyone who has commented on this thread to my buddy list, so if you accept my buddy request, you'll get a pm. 😊

Originally posted by: ilovekaran001

Amazing

Thank you for reading.

Originally posted by: lourel24

Loved it

Thanks for reading.😊

Haye allah

thnkx for the pm.😳..dis was HOT☺️...do write more stories..u r a talented writer👍🏼

omg this is awesome. Simply loved it to the core

Originally posted by: Misnomer

Haye allah

maar dala...

ufff...

goes and hid behind the bed..

Pls pls cont.

keep writing

this was so beautiful ...

Still blushing ...

Thank you. I haven't had time to watch the episodes this week, so am not sure I can write more at the moment. But maybe soon.