OS: Consequences (16+) PART 3 UPATED PG 14 (NOTE ADDED) - Page 8

Oh My God..

Amaaazinggg!!!!!!!!👏
I must say you write fab!!!😉
Please do try to write more OS's
Also i love how you write your OS's they just hook me in😉
I guess Arzoo is over the moon😆
The description of this is superb!☺️
Hot, and something worth reading!👏
@Thanks for the PM😃
Please do write more OS's!!😳

Helloji thnx for the pm,the update is superb haye Allah ppl think like this when they're in love 😉 amazing loved it keep writing darling stay blessed 👏 :-D

You write brilliantly. You have captured the deeper, darker and intimate emotions and thoughts of Sahir and Arzoo so well.
I do hope you find time to continue writing this piece.
1700 words in 2 hrs is not bad at all... I am a writer too so I can really appreciate the word count achieved :).
Hope your writer's block as regards your novel is a thing of the past after this exercise. Best of luck with the novel.

Absolutely amazing !!
Wanna read more from uhh !!!,
Update fast ! 😃

Writer Neem ji !!
ap kaun si per se tapak kar yaha giri ?? omg !! what a cracker u are and your play with words...I literally felt incredibly warm and sweaty in -10c and took a bath ( thank god cold bath nehi li, pneumonia hoke mar jaati )
bcoz u r a writer, just asking u...dnt feel offended ok ? hav u written an erotica ever ? bcoz your lines are better foreplay than any action , ur readers will me madly aroused and beg for more, lolz ! and you will never satisfy them, as ever ( itz the trick, as u hav said yourself !!).
are u planning to add another chapter ? i know fangurls will not let u rest...u pm boxes will soon be full of beggings and poutings 😆 and emosunal attyachars to write more. If u plan to give in, haha, let me know plz !
hugs,
shreya

OMG! You're absolutely amazing!

aah neem...this was absolutely awesome

WOW. You are good! Fabulous work. Really enjoyed part 2. ;)

Thank you for the pm. Simply spellbinding!!! The original humsafars is beginning to pale in front your version. Makes us all panting for more.😉 Don't you dare stop now. Promise us you will keep dishing out more of it. This is the just the beginning of your long innings here I hope.