OS: Consequences (16+) PART 3 UPATED PG 14 (NOTE ADDED) - Page 9

Originally posted by: sho-shweet

Damn! Another cliff hanger :D

The write up was absolutely wonderful! keep it up.

The best view is from top of the cliff.😆

Originally posted by: Peaceout09

you are so talented ! i love your work ... i wish there will be a scene like this in the serial InshaAllah one day there will be ...👏

Inshallah!😃

Originally posted by: Moon_light

Dear Neem

Wow! I am in a daze! Arzoo wasnt the only one who held her breath, i found myself taking several deep breaths when i had finished reading that wonderful, juicy and every apt continuation. Hai! Mei kya bholon, i am in love with your writing! You have this talent to completely draw your readers into the worlds you create. Honestly i dont see or hear anything while i am reading your work. Allah knows, your one of the most gifted writers i have come across. Agreed the characters were created by other people but your insight into them is astounding! You really know your trade and i feel fortunate to be one of the people you gets to experience your amazing talent.

Oh God! I am still catching my breath! Phew! Kiya kiya tumne Neem?? Rehem karo humrey upar! Who said the writer in you has a block, i see her alive, vivacious, brimming with ideas, so many they are spilling over into these wonderful OS's your writing for us your hungry fans!

Thank you, thank you, thank you, for the dedication. Here's a prayer that you are able to start your novel ASAP!

Tons and tons of love and big huge humongous 🤗🤗🤗

You're so very sweet, S.

I was just practicing a bit, to get back in form, so your kind of response bowls me over. Thank you for your good wishes, I can tell you that my novel needs them.😳

Originally posted by: deepavasudev

Oh My God..

Neem Sundari.. u say ur user name is neem sundari...but ur writing of u says that u should change ur user name to some thing sweet and sausy ...

U are not the kadva neem but the sweet nectar of the flowers..

really the part of admonishing a man ..by a women .. in her self talks .. and mind mumbling.. and making her realise or think that the bite or the mark left by the thorn in the jungle is none other than HER ASHIQ AND FOR ISHQ ..HER ISHQ... Wow.. superb POV and very beautifully described..

Very artistic... and contemprory way of describing or say expressing feelings of her..

BEAUTIFUL..

IM VERY short of words to describe this second part.. NeemS... I would love to call u as Sugary or jalebi ..sorry..

I loved ur writing and enjoyed to the max the post ..the OS>

thank u dear.

Neem is part of my real name, and to be a 'sundari' was my aspiration, once upon a time 😆. Now it's too late.

Thank you so much for your positive feedback. I never really write romance, so it is heartening to know that I could, if I wanted to. 😳

Originally posted by: THEfanOFheartz

Amaaazinggg!!!!!!!!👏
I must say you write fab!!!😉
Please do try to write more OS's
Also i love how you write your OS's they just hook me in😉
I guess Arzoo is over the moon😆
The description of this is superb!☺️
Hot, and something worth reading!👏
@Thanks for the PM😃
Please do write more OS's!!😳

You're welcome to the PM-- and if I write more, you'll definitely be among the first to know.😃. I love that my writing pulls you in-- what more can a writer ask for?

Originally posted by: Mahenoor_Rehbar

Helloji thnx for the pm,the update is superb haye Allah ppl think like this when they're in love 😉 amazing loved it keep writing darling stay blessed 👏 :-D

I don't know about other people, but I imagined Arzoo thinking like this. You're welcome to the PM-- not sure ifI'll write more, but will let you know if I do.😊

Originally posted by: Junoonian

You write brilliantly. You have captured the deeper, darker and intimate emotions and thoughts of Sahir and Arzoo so well.
I do hope you find time to continue writing this piece.
1700 words in 2 hrs is not bad at all... I am a writer too so I can really appreciate the word count achieved :).
Hope your writer's block as regards your novel is a thing of the past after this exercise. Best of luck with the novel.

Thank you, I'm hoping my block is history, too. Happy to meet a fellow-writer, and good wishes for your writing, too!

Originally posted by: TeriGalliyan.

WOW. You are good! Fabulous work. Really enjoyed part 2. ;)

Please do keep writing on HS.

Will add you to my buddy list. :) Will bother you with PM's if you don't write more HS stuff.

Thanks!

Nisha

Nisha, buddy request accepted. Will let you know if I write more. It all depends on whether I can make time. Haven't even seen Monday's episode yet 😊

Wow! I read both parts and, what a treat! Absolutely wonderful. The emotions were written perfectly. I could visualize this in front of my eyes. You are so very talented. I hope that you will treat us with more of your writing pieces in the near future.

Originally posted by: shreya_rc

Writer Neem ji !!
ap kaun si per se tapak kar yaha giri ?? omg !! what a cracker u are and your play with words...I literally felt incredibly warm and sweaty in -10c and took a bath ( thank god cold bath nehi li, pneumonia hoke mar jaati )
bcoz u r a writer, just asking u...dnt feel offended ok ? hav u written an erotica ever ? bcoz your lines are better foreplay than any action , ur readers will me madly aroused and beg for more, lolz ! and you will never satisfy them, as ever ( itz the trick, as u hav said yourself !!).
are u planning to add another chapter ? i know fangurls will not let u rest...u pm boxes will soon be full of beggings and poutings 😆 and emosunal attyachars to write more. If u plan to give in, haha, let me know plz !
hugs,
shreya

Shreya, nahin...pls don't get pneumonia!😆

I've never written erotica, but I do read it from time to time. Good stuff, like Anais Nin 😳

I've loved all the fangirling -- I wonder what Harshad feels like these days, he must be floating in air, you girls are so generous with your love and warmth 😉

I'm not sure if and when I'll write more, and I don't want to be a tease-- I will write if I get the time, that's a promise-- simply cos I've loved all your responses. I haven't had time to watch the episode yet, so you can imagine the way my life is going these days!

I think yesterday I took 2 hours to write, an hour to polish and pm-- so am not sure how often I'd be able to carve out that kind of time.

Hugs to you, too, babe. You ladies rock.