FF- DEEWANGEE: Ch18 'Its 8 pm on pg 55 - Page 15

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Stunning Promo!! I am jumping up and down with excitement! Please Ramona make it fast! LUB YOU!!!!!!!!

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Originally posted by: shefads

Stunning Promo!! I am jumping up and down with excitement! Please Ramona make it fast! LUB YOU!!!!!!!!

okay... okay...
Lubb you toooooooo.....😃
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Thanks Ramona, great job 👏
Whoooooo could it beeeeee😉, loooking forward to another steamy chapter.
Love your self assured Avi, no doubts all action😳
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wooooooooh wat a promo yaar ,👏
trealer ye hai to picture kya hogi or i should say,deewangi ka aagaz ye hai to anzaam kya hoga,👏
waiting for ur update plz yaar zaldi karo,i m dying to know how far he can go for her,! rage,fury,passion,craze,in love make it more dangerous 👍🏼
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Nice one ramona,waiting for next part.
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Hey Kriya, it sounds compelling. I'm very intrigued and excited to read it!
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Hey Ramona😊
Very interesting ......looking forward to it😊......thanks for the pm
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Hey Ramona Darling 🤗 🤗 🤗

who is the guy 😲 😲

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make it long chapter this time 😉

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proma toh ek dum jhaakkkaaass hai
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this is the next chapter.. for my darling PRIYA


Chapter 7 - the next meeting.



He came closer and closer but Arpita kicked him hard on his groin. "Aaaahhh", he yelped in pain. She pushed him and ran towards the door. He quickly opened the door and ran towards the hall. Manjari, Shikha & RV were busy with the other guests. Seeing them busy, Arpita decided that is was better to leave. They didn't notice Arpita going away.

On the other hand, Avdhesh was amused at Arpita's antics. He smiled to himself. "Feisty !! I like it." He watched her go away & said to himself, " We'll meet again MY Arpita, we'll meet very soon. Now that I've decided, You have to be mine."

It was a restless night for both of them. Avdhesh was baffled by her beauty. He just wanted her. He wanted to touch her, feel her presence, hug her & never leave her. He was just thinking about her as well as planning to meet her again.

There, Arpita was shaken to the core thinking about the events in the party. She was tensed and just couldn't sleep. It was 5.00 a.m and Arpita had to leave for college by 8. So she decided not to sleep. She sat down to complete her assignments.

At College:

Manjari- "Why did you leave without informing us?"

Arpi- "I'm so sorry. Actually mom was worried."

Manjari- "Shikha is very angry.. and even RV."

Both walk towards their classroom. On the way they met Shikha & RV.

Shikha- (mocking) " Miss Arpita Sharma.. Would you mind telling us the reason as to why you left the party??"

She was really mad at her. Even RV was angry.

Arpi- (sadly) "I'm really sorry. Mom was tensed so I had to leave. You all were enjoying so I didn't want to disturb anyone."

Shikha- "Hmm, chalo tumhe maaf kiya. Now let's go we're already late for class."

After attending class, they decided to go to the nearby mall. Arpita was a bit reluctant but finally agreed. RV was not at all interested. Shikha literally pulled him along.

At Inorbit mall:

Shikha was fascinated by the multi coloured hand bags. She wanted to buy them even though she had a collection of 150 bags! RV knew that Arpita was tensed, he wanted to talk to her but Shikha took him along to the counter. Manjari & Arpita were busy checking dresses in another shop.

Manjari- " Here, take these dresses & try all of them. Be quick. Ok?"

Arpita nodded 'yes' and took all the dresses and went to the dressing room. Just as she was about to enter the room, someone pushed her inside totally out of the blue and locked the door. She banged herself against the wall. She turned around to see who it was but stood like a statue as she met his passionate gaze. He moved forward and she kept moving back. She stopped when there was no more place. He stood right in front of her.

Arpi- " Tum ? What are you doing here?"

It was Avdhesh [dekha.. no prize for guessing 😆]. He knew Arpita was here. He had kept his men to keep a watch over her. His men had informed him that Arpita was here in the mall.

Avi- "Oh come on Arpita, don't be so silly. 🤪 Of course I'm here for you."

He started playing with her hair. 😍

Arpi- "Why don't you leave me alone?"

Avi- "Why should I? I LOVE YOU", He said sensually. ☺️

Arpi- " Cut the crap, will you? How can you say that you love me? We've just met last night, I don't know you neither do you know me & you're saying that you love me."

Avi's temper started rising. He was fed up of her stupid talk. He just cupped her face in one hand & bought it close to his, as if to kiss her and said, "Don't you ever question me again. I hate people doing that. Get one thing very clear Arpita, I LOVE YOU. I LOVE YOU very much. You are MINE and will always be mine and don't make me repeat myself." He left her.

He calmed himself and told her to leave. Arpita who was on the verge of crying, controlled herself. She left the dresses there & ran out of the room.


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Edited by KriYa_life - 14 years ago

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