FF- DEEWANGEE: Ch18 'Its 8 pm on pg 55 - Page 13

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Posted: 14 years ago

Originally posted by: yoga23priya


Ramona


loved it very much......awww poor Arpi don't know that she cannot run from Avi....πŸ˜†
he will find her for sure πŸ˜³πŸ˜‰ now how is gonna save you Arpi😈


waiting for next......πŸ˜‰i know i am asking too much.....😳but what to love your writting sweety..πŸ˜‰πŸ˜³

love you alots a

thanks alot honey....
@bold.... yes of course.... πŸ˜†
Love you too...
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Posted: 14 years ago
this Chapter is for my Jaaneman Sharan....
A small Valentine Gift... I hope you like it..

Chapter 6- The Dance & .....

this is how Arpi's dress looked.....

Avi- " Hmm.. Mujhse bachke kahan jaogi ?" 😈

And with dat he pulled her towards the Dance floor with an evil smile on his lips.. 😈

He put both his arms around her waist, stood still & was just staring at her.😍 She hit him on his shoulder.

"I guess we are here to dance, aren't we??"

Avi-" Er.. Oh.. Yes Yes.."

He took her hand in his & with the other hand around her waist, moved to and fro. He pulled Arpi closer to him & focused completely on her. Arpi however was still avoiding his gaze.😳 Few strands of hair were falling on her face.. He gently moved them aside whilst touching her cheek & neck. She felt ticklish and pushed his hands away. Avi smiled at her and whispered in her ears, "You are so Beautiful !!" 😳

His warm breath tickled her. She blushed & looked up to him. ☺️ There was something in his eyes.. She saw a special want for her in his eyes. She tried looking away but his eyes didn't allow her to do so.

He ran his fingers up & down her back whilst looking straight into her eyes. Arpi felt a goosebumps all over her body, She jerked his hands off.😑

"Apne haath hatao.." she said angrily and moved out from there & hurried towards the terrace.. Avi as usual followed her with a smirk..😈

Shikha- "Tumhara dhyaan kahan hai??"

RV- " Err.. Sirf tum par .."

Shikha- " Achha.. Mujhe to aisa nahi lagta.."

Both of them laugh.πŸ˜†

Shikha- " Waise.. yeh batao ki.. Hum kaise lag rahe hai?"

RV- "Just like A Star!!"

Shikha- (blushing) "Thanks Honey"

RV- "Pata nahi Arpita kahan gayi? Abhi abhi to yehi thi.." 😲

Shikha- "Why are you bothered ? I mean.. obviously she'll be with Avdhesh na.." 😑

RV- " I'm just asking.. Coz I haven't seen her."😑

Shikha- "Relax Dude !! Woh dekho.. Manjari is also busy."

RV-" Busy ?? 😲 Look at her, star! She's so lost without Tanmay"

Shikha- " Hmm.. I hope he comes soon. By the way when is he returning from UK ?"

RV- " May be in a week."

She was just gazing at the twinkling stars in the sky. Cold wind was gently touching her body. She could see the entire highway from the terrace. She could see the reflection of the full moon in the lake. She enjoyed being there. Everything was so calm & peaceful, until she felt his strong arms around her.

"Why did you leave me and come here?" he asked in a soft voice and started kissing her shoulders. She tried to free herself but in response he tightened his grip around her.

Arpi- (angry) "Let Me go."😑

Avi- "Why ??" πŸ˜‰

Arpi- "What do you mean WHY??"

Avi- " I mean that I like you. I can't let you go especially when we're so close to each other." πŸ˜‰

Arpi- " Cut the Crap, You Jerk !!" 🀬

Avi- "Oohh.. Honey.. too bad. But I cant." πŸ˜†

He was about to kiss her on her neck but she stamped his foot. 😑As she was wearing shoes with pointed heels, it really hurt him. She made a dash for the door but he anticipated that. He quickly ran towards her, grabbed her by the waist & pinned her against the wall. She now got a little scared.

He smiled at her while playing with her hair. He came closer & closer & was about to kiss her lips but Arpita moved her face just in time. He kissed her ear & the pulse of her neck. She was feeling uncomfortable while he again kissed cheek.

Arpi- " Get away from me You Filthy Animal" 🀬

Avi- "Honey.. You should be happy that Avdhesh Singh Thakur touched you. Duniya ki saari ladkiyaan mere liye kuch bhi karne ke liye tayyar hai. Main un sab ka dil tod kar tumpar fidaa hoon. I really feel sorry for those girls." πŸ˜‰

Arpi- "You're not doing a favour on me!!"😑

Avi- " Sshhh !! (he placed his fingers on her lips) Pyaar ka mausam hai.. Enjoy it".

Arpita now furious at him struggled to free herself again, but her struggles provoked him further. He caught both her hands and locked them in such a way that she couldn't move them anymore and bent forward to kiss her. 😳😳

is it enough ??? or do you want more... πŸ˜‰
Dont forget to hit like & commentwa pls...
Edited by KriYa_life - 14 years ago
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Posted: 14 years ago


i think not you definitely did it....πŸ‘ πŸ‘
OMG! I LOVE UR AVI 😳 😳

he is making go gaga over him....β˜ΊοΈπŸ˜†

thank you very much πŸ€—

when is next update.......😳


Edited by yoga23priya - 14 years ago
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Posted: 14 years ago
Great FF Kriya. Poor Arpi is trying to shrug Avi off but he wouldn't let go. It reminds me of a Nora Roberts novel, so great job again.
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Posted: 14 years ago
Sublime and sweet valentine gift! Loved the whole chap Ramona but am craving for more! πŸ˜‰i wanted a long and a passionate kiss from Mr Hot but guess Miss Cool won't accept so easily! Red can make a woman look stunning and sexy and no doubt Avi was crazy when he saw her in that dress! ...Plz update soon Ramona,,,,make it fast!
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Posted: 14 years ago
It was again very nice like ur previous one's.but avi is too much rude yaar.yaha serial mein we are just waiting to see them together but avi is not showing any response to us,chalo tere ff mein avi is doing sumthing hoho,feeling sad for arpi poor girl.bye
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Posted: 14 years ago
thanxxxx ramona darling
this is awesome
i can imagine avi doing all these things
wowwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwww
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Posted: 14 years ago
OMG!!!!
Ramona...........................................................................
I personally loved this part......😳😳😳😳😳
Fab write up DarlingπŸ‘πŸ‘πŸ‘πŸ‘πŸ‘πŸ‘πŸ‘πŸ‘πŸ‘πŸ‘πŸ‘πŸ‘πŸ‘πŸ‘πŸ‘πŸ‘πŸ‘
Im fida on this avi..completely!!😳😳
Waiting for next part..
Post it soon..................................................πŸ˜‰πŸ˜‰πŸ˜‰πŸ˜‰πŸ˜‰πŸ˜‰πŸ˜‰πŸ˜‰
Edited by prash_t - 14 years ago
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Posted: 14 years ago
my sweetu ramonaaaaaa..........πŸ€—πŸ€—πŸ€—
me here me here jz for u beta....!!!!!!
jz read the chap n it was wowww!!!πŸ‘πŸ‘πŸ‘πŸ‘πŸ‘πŸ‘πŸ‘πŸ‘πŸ‘πŸ‘πŸ‘πŸ‘πŸ‘πŸ‘πŸ‘πŸ‘πŸ‘πŸ‘πŸ‘πŸ‘πŸ‘πŸ‘πŸ‘πŸ‘πŸ‘πŸ‘πŸ‘πŸ‘πŸ‘πŸ‘πŸ‘πŸ‘πŸ‘πŸ‘πŸ‘πŸ‘πŸ‘πŸ‘πŸ‘πŸ‘πŸ‘πŸ‘πŸ‘πŸ‘πŸ‘πŸ‘πŸ‘πŸ‘πŸ‘πŸ‘πŸ‘πŸ‘πŸ‘πŸ‘πŸ‘πŸ‘πŸ‘πŸ‘πŸ‘πŸ‘πŸ‘πŸ‘πŸ‘πŸ‘πŸ‘πŸ‘πŸ‘πŸ‘πŸ‘πŸ‘πŸ‘πŸ‘πŸ‘πŸ‘πŸ‘πŸ‘πŸ‘πŸ‘πŸ‘πŸ‘πŸ‘πŸ‘πŸ‘πŸ‘πŸ‘πŸ‘πŸ‘πŸ‘πŸ‘πŸ‘πŸ‘πŸ‘πŸ‘πŸ‘πŸ‘πŸ‘πŸ‘πŸ‘πŸ‘πŸ‘πŸ‘πŸ‘πŸ‘πŸ‘πŸ‘πŸ‘πŸ‘πŸ‘πŸ‘πŸ‘πŸ‘πŸ‘πŸ‘πŸ‘πŸ‘πŸ‘πŸ‘πŸ‘πŸ‘πŸ‘πŸ‘
i didnt knw that u write so fantastically!!!!!!!Arpi want to grt away from Avi but cant.......haha!!!!n it was truly a valentine's day gift!!!!!!
y r u asking us?i want more......dont stop here itself!!!!
lub
azi
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Posted: 14 years ago
Ohhho....wat is tis new awi doing,..
tauba tauba,...met a few moments ago nd he bent down to kis her....
truly he is spoilt.....

come on dear...update fast... I am curious to know how arpi would react.,..

lots of luv,
$un@h@
Edited by Sunaha6 - 14 years ago

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