FF '(1) Unread Message' chapter 24 pg 58

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Rimjhim

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Posted: 14 years ago

#11

thanks for all the comments guys :).

i guess i should continue, will write another chapter later on today and then you guys can tell me whether or not to continue :).

um whether kesar is a girl or not🤣, your gonna have to wait and see ;).

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Gman

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Posted: 14 years ago

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Rimjhim, the storyline sounds very interesting. Plz go ahead. With FF, at least we can get attached to our beloved couple. I feel that I have lost something very precious since monday. 😭

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Incense

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Posted: 14 years ago

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whats that since u and nirmohi has written me i m all 😲😳😆😛...dont know what to say u ppl always suprise us maybe kesar is a gal may be a boy may be both😆

plz continue need to know where it is leading

Edited by arti07 - 14 years ago

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Rimjhim

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Posted: 14 years ago

#14

chapter two.

"Kesar camera tilt karna parega" said rewa, as devika stood behind laughing.

"Arre yeh kya faltoo bakwas hai yaar" said kesar turning to face his two sisters, "bas dare tho ho gaya na, lets leave it now".

But rewa leaned over him and tilted the camera, and kesar sat awed looking at the most beautiful girl he had ever set eyes on, he looked towards the corner of the screen, "gulaal" whispered kesar as if calling out to her.

"Right that's it" said kesar turning towards his sisters, who looked as equally stunned at the girl from the computer staring back at them.

"Chalo niklo mere kamre se" and he pushed his sisters out.

"Have fun" said devika mischievously as her and rewa left.

Gulaal stared at the screen, she could not breath, it was as if the boy in the computer has memerised her into a spell. He was talking to two other females it seemed like, the thought made her uncomfortable.

For a while the screen went blank and all she could see was a room, it was how she had imagined her dream room, open, spacey, with light colours.

And then suddenly the boy came back into the frame.

"Hi good looking" he said mischievously. Gulaal did not know what to do, she looked back for support and found that avantika and janvi had disappeared.

"Um hi" she replied and then she looked down and saw she was wearing her favourite night gown, she tried to smoothen it down and set her hair right.

"Oh no need to do that for me" said the boy in the computer, "i like you exactly how you are. So your looking for someone to date"?

Gulaal did not know what to say, all she wanted to do was turn off the computer but there was something about him that enchanted her.

"A decent but very beautiful girl like you, who would have thought", he said grinning widely.

Right that's it, thought gulaal,"I i don't want to date" said gulaal and she switched off the computer.

um do tell me how it was guys, and whether i should continue😃.

Rimjhim x

Edited by rimjhim1 - 14 years ago

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Keithuu

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Posted: 14 years ago

#15

Sweet chappi...very nice...u shud continue...😳
Chalo...kesar ladka hi hai...😳
N abhi flirting bhi shuru...haha...m lovin it...pls continue...😊

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Incense

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Posted: 14 years ago

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phew...he is boy...can take a deep breath now...great now bring a next chapii soon

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Rimjhim

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Posted: 14 years ago

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Originally posted by: Keithuu
Sweet chappi...very nice...u shud continue...😳
Chalo...kesar ladka hi hai...😳
N abhi flirting bhi shuru...haha...m lovin it...pls continue...😊

thank you so much for liking 😃.

hahahaha yes kesar is a boy, i would never have made him a girl lmafo😆.