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Posted: 14 years ago
#21

Originally posted by: rimjhim1


<div>[/DIV]arrey let me find out if other people liked it or not.

if they did'nt then im gonna stop :(.


dont worry will then write private ones only for you :)


Yo, thats sounds kinda hot. Is it weird that im turned on? \"
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Yo, thats sounds kinda hot. Is it weird that im turned on? \"

oho chup kar besharam
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Posted: 14 years ago
#23
Really a nice begening,waiting for the next one
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Posted: 14 years ago
#24

Haila yaha to pehla chat bhi ho gaya..😃
N Flirting bhi suru ho gayi...nic chappiii...Rimjhim...😃
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chapter 3
Kesar looked at the screen where her beautiful face had been, he traced his fingers over the now blank screen. I get it he thought to himself this is what love at first sight is.

"kesar", kesar turned and found himself facing his elder brother.

"jee vasant bhaa, kuch kaam tha".

"haan kesar, paanba meri shaadi ke bare mein chup nahi ho rahi, isliye yeh leh kuch ladkiyon ki tasveere" and he handed kesar and envelope, "ek pasand kar le".

"Main pasand kaise karun, shaadi toh apne karni hai na" he said while staring at his elder brother with a somewhat confused look.

"Arrey you ask too many question yaar, ek baar shaadi hone de, phir dekh meh kya karta hun", vasant said with a evil grin on his face.

Kesar stared at his brother, his eyes filled with admiration, he always looked up to vasant, but could somehow never make himself to be like him.

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"maa", poonam looked up to see her daughter racing down the stairs.

"Janvi aur avantika, kaha hain".

Voh toh chali gayee, par tu unko chor aur yeh dekh, pandit jee tere liye kuch tasveere chor ke gaye hai.

"Maa main apse kitani baar kahoon, mujhe pehle pyar karna hai ay phir shaadi", Gulaal said while rolling her eyes.

Poonam stared help lessly at her daughter knowing this was an argument she could never win but she could not however resist trying.

"Main jaa rahi hoon, bapji koh kahna dene ke liye" and with that she left.

Gulaal thought about the boy in the computer, kesar, that name does not sound half bad now, and she smiled quietly to herself.

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Kesar flipped thorugh the photos, yuck, yuck and yuck. Ek bhi vasant bhaa ke kabil nahi hai and he tossed the photos on the bed and stood up.

His eyes fell on the computer, oh why not he thought , i am single and if she was so pretty last night what must the other girls be like.

Kesar logged in and out of the corner of his eye, he saw it said.

Gulaal: online.

Kesar smiled mischievously to himself, things have just got very very interesting.

His thoughts fell back to what she had said yesterday, i don't want to date, oh we will see about that he thought and with that he turned his webcam on.

Edited by rimjhim1 - 14 years ago
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Posted: 14 years ago
#26
Make them longer, you cow! 😆
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Originally posted by: CertifiedBummer

Make them longer, you cow! 😆

dont think its good enough, might stop :(
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Posted: 14 years ago
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Originally posted by: rimjhim1

dont think its good enough, might stop :(



UGH, you need a slap.
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i pm'd u reply innit😆
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chapter 4

Gulaal stared at the screen, after overcoming her inner turmoil she finally logged in. She sat there for several minutes thinking about what she was doing, a whole night had passed and could not stop thinking about him, so as dawn had broke she had got up and started to make herself look beautiful for for kesar, she blushed as she thought about him.

Suddenly she saw it said,

Kesar: online. Oh my God she thought this is it.

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Kesar turned on his webcam and clicked on her profile, there she was looking as beautiful as ever, and the way she looked down shyly made him want to break the screen, get to her and then engulf her in a warm hug. No Kesar he thought to himself, u have to keep your cool.

Kesar: hi beautiful so your back, guess you changed your mind then you are looking for someone to date.

Gulaal: yeah i am actually but then so are you.

Kesar: so how do you find me then?

He could not help but smile at the way she blushed and looked down shyly.

Gulaal: um you're quite cute.

Kesar: cute is that it, u know loads of girls are dying to date me.

Gulaal: so what are you doing on here then?

It was kesar's turn to blush.

Kesar: maybe i like someone else. He said looking deeply into her eyes.

Gulaal felt extremely shy but was enjoying the attention.

Gulaal: so who else is in your family?

Kesar: um there's me, my elder brother, two sisters and our parents. Yours?

Gulaal: i live with my parents, so what's your age?

Kesar: I'm 20 and you.

Gulaal stared at the screen horrified he was 6 years younger than her.

Gulaal: um i have to go, will be back later.

And with that she logged out.

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Kesar stared at the screen, had he said something to hurt her, nah she said she would be back later he thought to himself so she would.

Just then paanba entered his room, "Kesar voh ladkiyon ki tasveere kahan hai"

"vaha bed par, mujhe toh vasant bhaa ke liye ek bhi nahi acchi lagi" and with that he left the room.

Paanba started to gather the photo's, Kesar theek keh raha hai she thought. none of the girl's matched up too her son, just then paanba saw a photo on the floor she picked it up and looked at the girl, she was beautiful and just the way she imagined her bahu to be.

'Gulaal' she read on the back of the photo, bahut hi sunder hai.

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Gulaal sat wondering, 6 years isn't much but maaa and bapji would never approve but he was just as she had imagined her other half to be.

As the day's passed Kesar and Gulaal began talking more and more, until one day he expressed his desire to meet her.

Gulaal: milna hai par kis liye

Kesar: well we have been talking for nearly a month now, baat agay bhi barhani chahiya na.

Gulaal blushed as she realised what he was talking about.

Gulaal: tumhare ghar valo ko toh main acchi lagun ghi na?

Kesar: you are the prettiest girl in the world, kyun nahi?, but there is one thing that has to happen first, mere bare bhai ki shaadi. Let me go and talk my mother about it.

Gulaal: okay, i will talk to u later then bye.

Kesar: bye gorgeous

Gulaal blushed and logged off, as she turned she saw her mother standing behind her staring at her furiously.

Edited by rimjhim1 - 14 years ago

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