FF '(1) Unread Message' chapter 24 pg 58

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Posted: 14 years ago
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hey guys, im sure im not the only one that is bored with gulaal ending.
nothing to do anymore, seeems like im stuck in a long weekend.
anyway i tried to write a little something with the help of, Nirmohi also know as 'certifiedbummer'.
Gulaal: "i can't guys" she exclaimed looking up at two of her closest friends, looking down at her grinning widely.

avantika: yes u can, being 26 and single is not normal

janvi: and you really need a bit of fun in your life, online dating is just perfect for you

Gulaal looked up at them, sighed and then logged in.

janvi leaned over and typed something in to google, this is a good one, all the locals go on it.

Gulaal looked at the screen and blushed. The name, ONLINE DATING screamed back at her, she looked at her two friends desperately, please guys "chalo guys, lets do something else na", but avanitika had already, made her account.

"dev, wow, How hot is he", dekho na gulaal.

"Yuck, tumhe accha lagta hai, toh tum hi leh lo" and gulaal moved from in front of the computer onto her bed.

"Kesar, what a weird name": janvi said, while staring at the computer screen, "arrey photo bhi nahi lagai".

"Lets do face chatting" said avantika

"Chalo abhi bas karo" said gulaal getting up from the bed.

As she sat in front of the screen and moved the mouse towards the turn off button , two of the most dreamiest, chocolatiest, brown eyes, that she had ever seen stared at back at her.

"kesar" came a female voice from the screen, " camera tilt karna parega".

and that's it, yes you can throw whatever you like at me and at Nirmohi also. chappals, tomatoes whatever you guys like😃.
tell me if i should continue and if not please do tell me, i will delete this and get lost to some faraway land.😃.
Rimjhim x
Links to chapter :)
chapter nine part one: https://www.india-forums.com/forum_posts.asp?TID=1770219&TPN=16
chapter nine part two: https://www.india-forums.com/forum_posts.asp?TID=1770219&TPN=17
chapter ten: https://www.india-forums.com/forum_posts.asp?TID=1770219&TPN=20
chapter 11: https://www.india-forums.com/forum_posts.asp?TID=1770219&TPN=22
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Posted: 14 years ago
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Rimjhim, why are you so innocent? because we'd love if the next chapter to be rated r. jokes. :']
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Posted: 14 years ago
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Originally posted by: CertifiedBummer

Rimjhim, why are you so innocent? because we'd love if the next chapter to be rated r. jokes. :']

dirty girl, is that all you think about??????
not yet maybe in the future 😳
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Posted: 14 years ago
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hey rimjhim, i was thinking today when i was in the kitchen that what if some one writes totally new thing taking gulaal n kesar n oh u did it šŸ‘ hey its interesting but aagay kya hone wala hai 😲, n yeh face chat kya hai? i mean chat through web cam na?
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😲....u mean Kesar is a gal...
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Posted: 14 years ago
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Originally posted by: nneeiill

😲....u mean Kesar is a gal...

Kesar can be a girls name too.
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Posted: 14 years ago
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yeah another FF.ā­ļøšŸ‘šŸ„³.o wow Rimjhim..šŸ‘.me superlikes and now will chew your brains...till you update.šŸ˜†..pls continue na😳
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Posted: 14 years ago
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i think i need to read the next update for liking or disliking your ff, till then i res my comments on this 😃
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Posted: 14 years ago
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Yeaaa! Another FF! M dancing! This is gonna be so different...m guessing its a Romcom...ohhh always wanted to see Gulsar in such a theme. A big thumbs up frm my side. Go ahead, post more chappies.
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Posted: 14 years ago
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Haila Rimjhim...tera FF dekh ke to mujhe "Love net" aur"dare to date"yaad aa raha hai...nic re...bilkul different hai tera ye ff...😃
Please continue...

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