FFKya mujhe pyaar hai part 35 updt pg 143 - Page 4

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Posted: 14 years ago
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lovely lovely lovely piyu 😃 👏 oh v need u to continue it, yes yes yes piyu vl also be writing a FF yeayyy piyuuu maaariii o piyaaariii, kyun FF tu continue karay naaa, intezaaar kare hai dil meraaa, FF likhiyo naaa 😆 🤗
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Posted: 14 years ago
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Originally posted by: kiran_trudecent

lovely lovely lovely piyu😃👏oh v need u to continue it, yes yes yes piyu vl also be writing a FF yeayyypiyuuu maaariii o piyaaariii, kyun FF tu continue karay naaa, intezaaar kare hai dil meraaa, FF likhiyo naaa😆🤗

O meri pyari sunehri kiran.🤗.Thanks for the lubbly version of this song..☺️..O I lubb you..😳

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Posted: 14 years ago
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O meri pyari sunehri kiran.🤗.Thanks for the lubbly version of this song..☺️..O I lubb you..😳


u r welcome piyuuu maaariii 🤗 awww i love u tooo threee four infinite 😆 😃
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Those cherished memories

Part2..

Gulaal silently climbed down the stairs..and kept breathing heavily…She felt choked…

Her heavy jewellery made her sweat..and her heavy..nath..(nose ring)..gavea sharp stinging pain…Oh her Mom poonam..had given her this special bridal nath..made of 1 tola..gold..

The trademark..of a garhwali bride….She was looking like a rubensque woman..with all her Gold jewellery ..She was a beautiful bride..Alas..But all this heavy jewellery,her bridal attire..were not meant to make her happy..she felt like throwing up..All of a sudden her life had changed..All her hopes shattered..all her dreams..would now remain unfulfilled..

Lost in her thoughts..she silently reached the room..and looked sadly..at the bed decorated with rajnigandha flowers..and roses..

That was her and Vasant's room…She breathed heavily..Her eyes could not focus anymore..she felt a sharp burden on her chest..she coughed..and coughed ..hard…

"Gulaal..gulaal..Relax..Take this…"Kesar…pumped a few sprays of Asthalin..from an inhaler.while patting her back continuously….Gulaal gasped for breath…as she inhaled the mist..from her mouth..PB and rewa..came running…

Gulaal…what happened…They all knew she suffered from asthma..

The mists reached her..pharynx…permeated the mucosa..and started the slow and steady process of bronchdilation…She felt relaxed..She felt better…

G: "nahi Baa..I am Ok…she said feebly.

.I think you should better rest..Kesar..take her toMy room..she will sleep with me today.."PB said and Kesar quickly followed her instructions..

Rewa and Kesar..heped her to move and finally Gulaal rested on pb'S BED..Tears kept rolling down her cheeks..

It was 2:00 in the night..and Gulaal cudn't sleep…Her whole life turned upside down This night…She was lost in the thoughts….

Her mind took her..to her past…Where she could hear a voice..the voice of Kesar..

14 yrs ago..

K:Paan Ba..dekho na..bhai..aur gulaal mujhe apne saath nahi le ja rahe hain…"cried 8 yr..old kesar..as he ran after Vasant and Gulaal..

G:Oye tu abhi bacha hai..re…jab bada ho jayega..to tub hi jana apne frnds ki birthday party main.."said gulaal as she pulled his chubby cheeks…

V:are Kesuda..tu ghar pe khel hum tere liye chocolate..layenge…OK Baa.we are leaving…

K:Baa mujhe bhi gulaal k saath jana hai..cried Kesar inconsolably as Vasant and gulaal walked away..They were going to their celebrate their frnds 14th birthday..

Gulaal and Vasant's family were not only neighbours but the best pals too..

Gulaal's father revji and Vasant's father Soma who was better called Mota bha..fondly were childhood frnds..and so were Gulaal ,vasant and Kesar,rewa…Poonam..gulaal's mother..and Paan ba..were also very close and Gulaal was almost like a daughter to PB

Well as both revji and Soma..were in the army..mostly their talks..revolved around battles and missions…So time quickly passed until Revji's father became sick…and he was forced to shift from there to Allahabad..where they had their ancestral home..Revji took voluntary retirement…and MB was heartbroken…so was the whole family…

But MB gave the promise to revji that they will always be in contact with each other…and Said that He will make Gulaal his DIL..one day..that was for sure…

Both the families were overwhelmed and..happy..and they parted…Kesar ,gulaal,rewa,vasant..all said goodbye with a heavy heart…

Time kept passing by…and days turned into months,then years…

The first meeting-When..parted souls reunited

Part 3

Poo..:Gulaal tune apni packing kar li hai kya…

G:haan ma..sab chizein rakh li

Poo:are sweaters and coats rakh lena..wahan bahut than dhoti hai..

G:maa..abhi May ka mahina hain maa…dehradun is pleasant during summers..and not cold..stop following me…

Poo:Oh yes and I have informed MB and Pb that you will reach tomorrow

G:maa..pls..apne unse kah diya hai na..k main.hostel mein rahungi..I will feel awkward

Poo..:tu bhi na..pagal hai..waise bhi tujhe ek din wahan humesha k liye rehna hai..to..acha chal maine keh diya hai..par ye weekend to tujhe wohin rehna padega…hostel to tujhe 2-3 days me hi milega…

G:thik hai maa,I will miss you.."she hugged ..poonam

Gulaal always knew that it was her destiny to marry vasant..she had accepted this and had built many dreams and hopes too…She knew her journey had a destination..Vasant…

Gulaal..was an average looking girl..honey coloured complexion..,almond eyes….she was simple,honest…and Very intelligent and hard working..finally she was going to fulfill her dream to…pursue her Phd in Oriental studies..in Doon institute of higher studies..She was always fascinated by the mysteries..of the world..and this was what her soul was in…

The memorable train journey….

As the train whistled ..and ran fast …Gulaal got up to take a walk in the train corridor…

"my love I missed you soo much"gulaal..was taken aback as a boy in his early twenties..hugged her tightly..

Boy:"Oh I just can't live without you….where were you.."the hug tightened as Gulaal tried to free herself..She was shocked …

She managed to free herself somehow..and slapped him…

Boy:Ouch…I know you are angry..but I still missed you,,

A girl who was following this boy…shouted… "Oh you were right..that you already have a girlfrnd…I am sorry"

G:Have you lost it…kid…ewww..Get lost…

Boy:Phew ..thanks and sorry dear…Actually that stupid girl was after me and I had to find some..way to get rid off her..Thanks for this …Well but you shouldn't have slapped me…

G:Get lost ..you idiot..I am not interested in your story…

And he walked away carelessly…

I am so Sorry Maam…Pls Don't mind him…He is a bit bratty…"said..a young man..who was wearing an army like uniform…Gulaal's eyes widened..she knew those Eyes…she knew those twinkling eyes…They seemed so familiar…but she cudn't recall where she had seen them…

G:Its ok…never mind…"she replied shyly..while totally..being enchanted by those twinkling eyes…as he walked away to his berth

She lied on her berth…still dazed by those twinkling eyes…

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Posted: 14 years ago
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resss yeah me first thenga siree😃
me updated kanha kiya shayad 6-7 mein😆😉
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Posted: 14 years ago
#36
wow..just wow piu...👏👏👏a beautiphool story n nice build up..😳oh..piu shayaad hamare show ke writers aise sochthe....u know..there is so much of attraction in ur writing..every single line is beautiful n making us curious to know..what will b d next line...😃loved loved loved these 2,3 chappies...😳love u..🤗
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Posted: 14 years ago
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grr me 3rd res😡
comments updated page-6😃
Edited by bioinfo - 14 years ago
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Posted: 14 years ago
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res 🤓



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lovely lovely piyu, oh i m loving the FF so so so much, n vasu an army officer wow, n gullu having asthma 😲 n that brat kesu, ohhh so lovely 😳 love u yar, waiting for next chapis 😃 😃 😃
Edited by kiran_trudecent - 14 years ago
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Posted: 14 years ago
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very nice update piyu👏agar aise ghatiya epi ke baad aisa ff padhne ko mile to mujhe apni zindagi se koi shikayat nahi hai😉babes tu meri smile wapas le aayi😃, loved this chappi and love you for writing it😃🤗
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Posted: 14 years ago
#40
nice creativity. But you can give whatever descriptions you like, never mind 😳 for me Gulaal is always Mansi herself.

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