FFKya mujhe pyaar hai part 35 updt pg 143 - Page 6

piyu tell me bandi ko asthma hai aur bacha smoke karta hai😲...kyu bhai gullu ko marvaayega yaa phir first smoke and then gullu going behsos and then he will give asthama😉

Originally posted by: arti07

wow wow wow piyu i really imagined each and every scene described in your ff u r real story teller loved it...its a masterpeice

and i so sure u will bring the next chapii very soon😳

Awww thank you so much arti..😳actually this FF is just because of you...I remembered you said it once...I lubb you arti..and lubbed your bada wala comment🤗

Originally posted by: Keithuu

Arre yaar...yeh kab hua...mujhe pata hi na chala😔
piu...tu ne ff start kiya...superb...loved ur story ...😳lubb story hai...😳very nice...
Jaldi next laa...😳

Bole to ye tab hua kirty.😆.jab tu so rahi thi..🥱aur cows k sapne dekh rahi thi..

thanks.🤗.and YESH SAB LOG SUN LO..YE LUBBSTORY HAI😆

Originally posted by: sukriti19a

just read ur FF 1n 2 chapters... they r really wonderful... great work indeed ...

Thanks sukriti.😳.for appreciating this😳

Originally posted by: prachurya

OMG this is a classic under construction- I can just feel it! Yaar, Arti and Piu bach ke rahiyo, saare creatives tum logon ka hi kaam uthalenge. You are a brilliant story teller, Piu. Luking forward for the next chappie.

PS: Don't u feel impatient 2 write the next chappie wen u end ur chappie????

OMG prachurya.😲.I am on cloud nine...

Cvs kuch nahi uthayenge..they will look for more topi,gavya ,dheeth stuff...🤣

Aww thanx so much.😳..It gives me inspiration to write more🤗

P.S..yesh me actually have nightmares ki ab kya likhun🤣

Originally posted by: Gman

Piu, both chappie are brilliantly written still keeping us in suspense and giving hints all the while.

Thanks Gina.🤗..actually me all dabloofied after seeing todays episode🤢..kahin to torture karun..yahin sahi

I really loved how you introduced Kesar and giving hug scene at first meeting and confessions that will come true later on.

Yesh...main serial mein to as arti says 100m romance milta hai..😡so I decided to start with chiii😆

What is this paragraph telling us? ThisWAS not IS.

That was her and Vasant's room'She breathed heavily..Her eyes could not focus anymore..she felt a sharp burden on her chest..she coughed..and coughed ..hard'

It only means that Vassy is gone from very chapter one. hip hip hurray.🥳

Ya lets see vassy ka kya hoga😆

Ohhh... I have saved Aarti's FF and now I am saving your work too. Great work indeed. Bravo Girl.👏

OMG gina.😳.thanx..🤗it really means a lot..😳.Now I can't stop dancing

Originally posted by: arti07

piyu tell me bandi ko asthma hai aur bacha smoke karta hai😲...kyu bhai gullu ko marvaayega yaa phir first smoke and then gullu going behsos and then he will give asthama😉

u know read ur ff thrice⭐️⭐️ and best part its quickie.😆..loved it ab waiting for chapii 4😳

Haan yaar kesuda..and gullu are diammetrically opposites..not only in nature but also habits.😆..tabhi to push and pull banega.😉.ye banda..smoke kiye bina nahi reh sakta..aur gullu smoke k alwa sab k saath reh sakti hai😆

Sachi...lubb you arti..meri chotu govinda🤗

Originally posted by: chweetu

piu..just now read d first chappiee...😛n just loved loved loved it..n loved s sense of humour in kesu...😳n he smokes..😕chal banda..kahin na kahin repent hhoga na...😃OMG..just a beautiful convo..between d 2..😳n me will thoda late in reply...😭😭😭sab mujhko thenga de rahe hai.including my lightwala..😭😭..but will give reply as soon as possible..n loved d chappie..n u..🤗

Siree🤗..tu abhi sirf first chappi padhi....Thanks yaar...🤗

bole to teri light wale ki to..

I will wait for your comment😍

and I lubb you 2,3 4