FFKya mujhe pyaar hai part 35 updt pg 143

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Posted: 13 years ago
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Is it the end..or the beginning of a new journey

part1


"Stop'ye kya kar rahi ho gulaal'"cried kesar..quickly grasping the hand of gulaal..who was standing on the edge of the terrace..and about to jump'

G:Leave me..MAIN MAR JANA CHAHTI HUN..MUJHE NAHI JINA'"still resisting to free her hand from his grip.

K:thik hai..thik ..hai..Hmmm mar jana..But let me see'."he said..leaning and looking at lawn below'

G:Kya hua'kuch bolte kyun nahi'"She asked with curiosity in her eyes..

K:kya kahun'tum marna chahti ho..par yahan se kudogi to sirf haddi pasli hi tutegi'aur bahut sara pain..Ek kamm karte hain..kal subah mere saath Mussoorie chalna..waha..Gun Hill se kudna'dhakka main de dunga..sidhe upar pahunch jaogi..aur hospital ka kharcha

Bhi bach jayega.."he said naughtily'

G:you monster tu mujhe dhakka dega'I hate..you..you stupid monkey'main tujhe jaan se maar dungi.."her determination. just vanished and she started to hit him..madly..

K:Ouch..stop it you pagal..mad bore..you haven't changed a bit..nautanki"..he winked his eyes naughtily'

Gulaal burst laughing and they both laughed a lot..Suddenly Tears started rolling down her eyes..and she said in a very disheartened tone'

"Kesar..aisa kyun hua..maine kya gallti kit hi'ye sab hamare hi saath kyun hua..Ab age kya..ab hum kya karenge?"there was so much desperation'

K:BUDDHU..TUM YE QUESTION KISE PUCH RAHI HAI..usse jo ye bhi nahi sochta k nxt minute use kya karna chahiya'Hmmm..philhaal to humein neeche chalna chahiye'

Kal subah sochenge..ki kya karna hai'

G:Thik hain..chal'"said gulaal as she walked down the stairs'wearing a dazzling..red wedding lehenga..with zardozi work'Kesar..silently..watched her..as she walked away'

As the sound of tinkling of her anklets faded..Kesar..took out a cigarette.and lit it up..the flame..made his tears even more visible'as they shined..with the glow'the question was so right..now what was he supposed to do..?

Hi everyone😛..just Time pass..kya continue karun'I can't believe maine ye likhne ki sochihai kya mujhe continue karna chaiye..I will update..if get some comments..nahi.to bhul jana


INDEX

PART 1 -PG 1-http://www.india-forums.com/forum_posts.asp?TID=1764554

PART 2,3-PG 5-http://www.india-forums.com/forum_posts.asp?TID=1764554&TPN=5

PART4-PG 10-http://www.india-forums.com/forum_posts.asp?TID=1764554&TPN=10

PART 5-PG 12-http://www.india-forums.com/forum_posts.asp?TID=1764554&TPN=12

part 6-pg17-http://www.india-forums.com/forum_posts.asp?TID=1764554&TPN=17

Part 7-pg21-http://www.india-forums.com/forum_posts.asp?TID=1764554&TPN=21

part8 pg 25-http://www.india-forums.com/forum_posts.asp?TID=1764554&TPN=25

part 9-pg 27

Part 10-pg 33

part 11-pg 38

part12-pg 40

part13 pg 44

part14-pg 49

part15-pg53

part 16-pg 56

Part 17-pg 61

part 18-pg 67

part 19-pg 73

part20pg75

part21-pg80

part22-pg81

part23 -page 87

part24-pg88

Caps -pg 87 and 91

part25 -pg 94

part26-pg96

part 27-pg102

part 28 pg 107

part 29 -pg 112

part 30-pg118

part31-pg123

part32-pg128

part33 -pg135

part 34-pg140

part35-pg 143



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Posted: 13 years ago
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Piu, tumhe ghatiya sayari aur poem ke bad OS lekhne ki vi talent hai, me shocked 😲. But OS is so good and beautiful, plz continue...👏.
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Posted: 13 years ago
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Doc, Me knock knock😛
Oye bache ke haath mein cigarrette😆
But she is jumping for suicide and he saving and the laugh...Intriguing start...I liked the camaraderie ... and the genuine devil may care attitude of Kesar...chalo aagey kya hota hai Hum log😛

Kya mujhe pyaar hai!
Nahi, bukhaar hai😛😛😛
Edited by -Srushti- - 13 years ago
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Posted: 13 years ago
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Originally posted by: Gman

Piu, tumhe ghatiya sayari aur poem ke bad OS lekhne ki vi talent hai, me shocked😲. But OS is so good and beautiful, plz continue...👏.

Oh gina..mujhe bhi nahi pata maine kya likha.😆.ye FF hai ya OS...par yaar just wanted to write my own version with the same characters..thanks..for liking it..bole to me also shocked

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Posted: 13 years ago
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Piyu - my phone wont work the like tab - but ofc you should continue! your gulaal kesar sound very different from the show - i'm curious to see what has brought them to this terrace scene, and where they will go from here... bridal and all, did they get forced into a wedlock?! perhaps!

keep it coming!
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Originally posted by: -Srushti-

Doc, Me knock knock😛
Oye bache ke haath mein cigarrette😆
But she is jumping for suicide and he saving and the laugh...Intriguing start...I liked the camaraderie ... and the genuine devil may care attitude of Kesar...chalo aagey kya hota hai Hum log😛

Kya mujhe pyaar hai!
Nahi, bukhaar hai😛😛😛

Bole to srush My PiG...

tUJHE ACHA LAGA..

I was so mad and sad..so I decided to write my own story..

And yes This is the bad,naughty and wild kesuda...Not the sudharofied version...So Cigarette..bole to bad habits to hongi hi na..😆

Nahi..Bukhaar to mujhe hua..hai...Kesgularia..kehte hain ise

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Posted: 13 years ago
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Originally posted by: JZephyr

Piyu - my phone wont work the like tab - but ofc you should continue! your gulaal kesar sound very different from the show - i'm curious to see what has brought them to this terrace scene, and where they will go from here... bridal and all, did they get forced into a wedlock?! perhaps!


keep it coming!

Aww..Jzee.🤗.you liked it..OOPs you need not play the like like game..😆.BTW how are..you..Just take care..🤗.Lets see if ppl like it.and yes..My kes gul..share a different rapport..😆

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Posted: 13 years ago
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omg...piyu with a ff...wow wow wow...be prepare gal now u r gonna witness my madness😉
i simply loved ur suspense bhara starting👏👏👏👏👏 and me reserving will come with bada waala comment
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Posted: 13 years ago
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piyu naa hume aaur tarsaao
jaldi jaldi next chapter le aao
mission piyu pakau with my shayyari start now😳😳😳😳
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Posted: 13 years ago
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Originally posted by: manzilmukul

Bole to srush My PiG...

tUJHE ACHA LAGA..

I was so mad and sad..so I decided to write my own story..

And yes This is the bad,naughty and wild kesuda...Not the sudharofied version...So Cigarette..bole to bad habits to hongi hi na..😆

Nahi..Bukhaar to mujhe hua..hai...Kesgularia..kehte hain ise


Kesgularia Sounds like laveria 🤣

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