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Posted: 14 years ago
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read up read up - thanks for quick chapters piyu... so she does fall in love with vasant yeh?! reading chapter 2 I was almost wondering is she wanted to marry Kesar but was compelled to marry Vasant, lol!

And asthma and all?! Now Kesarji can solely take over the 'chulha' duties khushi khushi without Gullu being bossy :D
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Posted: 14 years ago
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Originally posted by: manzilmukul


Those cherished memories

Part2..

Gulaal silently climbed down the stairs..and kept breathing heavily?She felt choked?

Her heavy jewellery made her sweat..and her heavy..nath..(nose ring)..gavea sharp stinging pain?Oh her Mom poonam..had given her this special bridal nath..made of 1 tola..gold.. ok so she is married and kesar also yupee vassy bhoot haina

The trademark..of a garhwali bride?.She was looking like a rubensque woman..with all her Gold jewellery ..She was a beautiful bride..Alas..But all this heavy jewellery,her bridal attire..were not meant to make her happy..she felt like throwing up..All of a sudden her life had changed..All her hopes shattered..all her dreams..would now remain unfulfilled..

Lost in her thoughts..she silently reached the room..and looked sadly..at the bed decorated with rajnigandha flowers..and roses..

That was her and Vasant's room?She breathed heavily..Her eyes could not focus anymore..she felt a sharp burden on her chest..she coughed..and coughed ..hard?

nahi yeh to gullu aur vassy ka room hai kisse marrigae hui hai
"Gulaal..gulaal..Relax..Take this?"Kesar?pumped a few sprays of Asthalin..from an inhaler.while patting her back continuously?.Gulaal gasped for breath?as she inhaled the mist..from her mouth..PB and rewa..came running?

Gulaal?what happened?They all knew she suffered from asthma..

oops asthama pateint mmr kar sakta hai kesu too good yaar
The mists reached her..pharynx?permeated the mucosa..and started the slow and steady process of bronchdilation?She felt relaxed..She felt better?

G: "nahi Baa..I am Ok?she said feebly.

.I think you should better rest..Kesar..take her toMy room..she will sleep with me today.."PB said and Kesar quickly followed her instructions..

Rewa and Kesar..heped her to move and finally Gulaal rested on pb'S BED..Tears kept rolling down her cheeks..

It was 2:00 in the night..and Gulaal cudn't sleep?Her whole life turned upside down This night?She was lost in the thoughts?.

Her mind took her..to her past?Where she could hear a voice..the voice of Kesar..

arey yaar u r still killing me gullu ki shaadi kisese hui????
14 yrs ago..

K:Paan Ba..dekho na..bhai..aur gulaal mujhe apne saath nahi le ja rahe hain?"cried 8 yr..old kesar..as he ran after Vasant and Gulaal..

G:Oye tu abhi bacha hai..re?jab bada ho jayega..to tub hi jana apne frnds ki birthday party main.."said gulaal as she pulled his chubby cheeks?

V:are Kesuda..tu ghar pe khel hum tere liye chocolate..layenge?OK Baa.we are leaving?

K:Baa mujhe bhi gulaal k saath jana hai..cried Kesar inconsolably as Vasant and gulaal walked away..They were going to their celebrate their frnds 14th birthday..

Gulaal and Vasant's family were not only neighbours but the best pals too..

oh so sweet childhood chote friends...wow me loving this and best part kesar is 6 year younger
Gulaal's father revji and Vasant's father Soma who was better called Mota bha..fondly were childhood frnds..and so were Gulaal ,vasant and Kesar,rewa?Poonam..gulaal's mother..and Paan ba..were also very close and Gulaal was almost like a daughter to PB
brilliant concept👏👏👏

Well as both revji and Soma..were in the army..mostly their talks..revolved around battles and missions?So time quickly passed until Revji's father became sick?and he was forced to shift from there to Allahabad..where they had their ancestral home..Revji took voluntary retirement?and MB was heartbroken?so was the whole family?

oh allahabad now she is small town girl...choti finger pe nachaayegi kesu yeh hai small town girl wow
But MB gave the promise to revji that they will always be in contact with each other?and Said that He will make Gulaal his DIL..one day..that was for sure?

Both the families were overwhelmed and..happy..and they parted?Kesar ,gulaal,rewa,vasant..all said goodbye with a heavy heart?

Time kept passing by?and days turned into months,then years?

The first meeting-When..parted souls reunited

Part 3

Poo..:Gulaal tune apni packing kar li hai kya?

G:haan ma..sab chizein rakh li

Poo:are sweaters and coats rakh lena..wahan bahut than dhoti hai..

G:maa..abhi May ka mahina hain maa?dehradun is pleasant during summers..and not cold..stop following me?

Poo:Oh yes and I have informed MB and Pb that you will reach tomorrow

G:maa..pls..apne unse kah diya hai na..k main.hostel mein rahungi..I will feel awkward

Poo..:tu bhi na..pagal hai..waise bhi tujhe ek din wahan humesha k liye rehna hai..to..acha chal maine keh diya hai..par ye weekend to tujhe wohin rehna padega?hostel to tujhe 2-3 days me hi milega?

G:thik hai maa,I will miss you.."she hugged ..poonam

Gulaal always knew that it was her destiny to marry vasant..she had accepted this and had built many dreams and hopes too?She knew her journey had a destination..Vasant?

acha bachpan ka pyaar vasant and reality kesar waah i m speechless piyu now i wnat this ff to telecast on the tv yaar allahabad and now dehradun...wow love will bloom in pahadi😳😳
Gulaal..was an average looking girl..honey coloured complexion..,almond eyes?.she was simple,honest?and Very intelligent and hard working..finally she was going to fulfill her dream to?pursue her Phd in Oriental studies..in Doon institute of higher studies..She was always fascinated by the mysteries..of the world..and this was what her soul was in?
oriental studies mein phd woh kya hota hai????? but sounds bahut padhi likhi hai😆

The memorable train journey?.

As the train whistled ..and ran fast ?Gulaal got up to take a walk in the train corridor?

"my love I missed you soo much"gulaal..was taken aback as a boy in his early twenties..hugged her tightly..

yeh pakka kesu hoga par hug pehle hi haila kiran geesh siree chaitu kirti look 2 chapii mein tight hug aage pyar hi pyar hai me all tamatarmukhi☺️
Boy:"Oh I just can't live without you?.where were you.."the hug tightened as Gulaal tried to free herself..She was shocked ?
hiala tight hug ek aur baar hug kar good going piyu loved it
She managed to free herself somehow..and slapped him?

Boy:Ouch?I know you are angry..but I still missed you,,

A girl who was following this boy?shouted? "Oh you were right..that you already have a girlfrnd?I am sorry"

haye haye yeh kaun bandariya thi dont tell talli😆
G:Have you lost it?kid?ewww..Get lost?

Boy:Phew ..thanks and sorry dear?Actually that stupid girl was after me and I had to find some..way to get rid off her..Thanks for this ?Well but you shouldn't have slapped me?

haan haan ekdum se tight hug karega aur ladki return mein varmaala pehanyegi...bach gaya bache mein hoti to wanhi public k samne dho deti
G:Get lost ..you idiot..I am not interested in your story?

And he walked away carelessly?

I am so Sorry Maam?Pls Don't mind him?He is a bit bratty?"said..a young man..who was wearing an army like uniform?Gulaal's eyes widened..she knew those Eyes?she knew those twinkling eyes?They seemed so familiar?but she cudn't recall where she had seen them?

naahi yeh vassy hai ise train mein hi maar do aur shrad kardena i dont want him to return as ghost
G:Its ok?never mind?"she replied shyly..while totally..being enchanted by those twinkling eyes?as he walked away to his berth

She lied on her berth?still dazed by those twinkling eyes?

hug chod kar eyes dekh rahi hai ullu gullu

wow wow wow piyu i really imagined each and every scene described in your ff u r real story teller loved it...its a masterpeice
and i so sure u will bring the next chapii very soon😳
Edited by arti07 - 14 years ago
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Posted: 14 years ago
#43
Arre yaar...yeh kab hua...mujhe pata hi na chala😔
piu...tu ne ff start kiya...superb...loved ur story ...😳lubb story hai...😳very nice...
Jaldi next laa...😳
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Posted: 14 years ago
#44
just read ur FF 1n 2 chapters... they r really wonderful... great work indeed ...
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Posted: 14 years ago
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OMG this is a classic under construction- I can just feel it! Yaar, Arti and Piu bach ke rahiyo, saare creatives tum logon ka hi kaam uthalenge. You are a brilliant story teller, Piu. Luking forward for the next chappie.
PS: Don't u feel impatient 2 write the next chappie wen u end ur chappie????
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Posted: 14 years ago
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Piu, both chappie are brilliantly written still keeping us in suspense and giving hints all the while.

I really loved how you introduced Kesar and giving hug scene at first meeting and confessions that will come true later on.

What is this paragraph telling us? This WAS not IS.
That was her and Vasant's room…She breathed heavily..Her eyes could not focus anymore..she felt a sharp burden on her chest..she coughed..and coughed ..hard…

It only means that Vassy is gone from very chapter one. hip hip hurray.🥳


Ohhh... I have saved Aarti's FF and now I am saving your work too. Great work indeed. Bravo Girl.👏
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Posted: 14 years ago
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Originally posted by: kiran_trudecent

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lovely lovely piyu, oh i m loving the FF so so so much, n vasu an army officer wow, n gullu having asthma😲n that brat kesu, ohhh so lovely😳love u yar, waiting for next chapis😃😃😃

O meri pyari sunehri kiran...thanks...so much...See vassy is not eggjactly an army officer...age clear hoga..haan yaar gullu ko asthma hai..poor gullu..apna kesuda to fultoo bratty hai na😆thanx...😳

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Posted: 14 years ago
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Originally posted by: bioinfo

very nice update piyu👏agar aise ghatiya epi ke baad aisa ff padhne ko mile to mujhe apni zindagi se koi shikayat nahi hai😉babes tu meri smile wapas le aayi😃, loved this chappi and love you forwritingit😃🤗

Mamoni...yaar episode ki to baat mat kar..mera man karraha tha ki sab..ki kabra khod k zinda gadh dun

Yaar itni bhi tareef mat kar...😆..thanx.🤗.lubb you too...😳

BTW kaun se smile ki baat kar rahi hai..ye wali

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Posted: 14 years ago
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Originally posted by: alanta

nice creativity. But you can give whatever descriptions you like, never mind😳 for me Gulaal is always Mansi herself.

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Thanx alanta..😳.Ya if you see mansi..also..she can not be said to be an absolute beauty..but her whole persona..makes her glow even more.👏.For me she is even more beautiful than..some of the..best bolly actress.I lubb MP ...🤗

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Posted: 14 years ago
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Originally posted by: JZephyr

read up read up - thanks for quick chapters piyu... so she does fall in love with vasant yeh?! reading chapter 2 I was almost wondering is she wanted to marry Kesar but was compelled to marry Vasant, lol!


And asthma and all?! Now Kesarji can solely take over the 'chulha' duties khushi khushi without Gullu being bossy :D

Thanx Jzee..🤗yes vassy plays an important role in my FF.😉.lets see...Yes totally agree..he will now have to do all chulha duties🤣

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