Akshan ff - Parivaar Ka Sath part 5 page 3

INDEX

Part 1 - Page 1

Part 2 - page 1

Part 3 - page 2

Part 4 - page 3

Part 5 - page 3

Hey guys this is my first ss... I din't write before it... But after previous episode i thought to write... So here it is...

FORGIVENESS

It starts with alisha coming to akshan with tearful eyes, akshan ask her the matter

She din't said anything just ran and hugged her fathery cryingly and said sorry PAPA

Both are very happy to listen this

Akshat ask alisha what happened then she narrate that she knows now that he din't had any idea about my existence and guddan MAA din't kill my mummy

I AM SORRY FOR HURTING YOU BOTH

Akshan forgive her

Al:- how can u both be so sweet.. Mene aap dono ke sath kitna bura kiya, kitni takleef di iss poore parivaar ko, fr bhi aapne mujhe itni aasani se maaf kr diya, koi itna accha kaise ho sakta h

Kitni chot pahuchayi mene aapko, ek dusre se alag karne ki koshish ki, guddan maa ko marna chaha, fr bhi aap log mujhe maaf kr rhe ho

A:- kyuki hum tumhare parents h, bacche chahe kitni bhi glti kr le, chahe glt raaste pr chale jaye lekin parents kabhi apne baccho ka sath nhi chodte

G:- aur humne to tumse vaada kiya tha ki chahe kuch bhi ho jaye hum tumhara sath kabhi nhi chodenge toh abhi kaise chod dete

Lekin baat to tumne shi kahi alisha, glti to tumne ki h to saza bhi milni chahiye, hena jindal sahab

A:- guddan shi keh rhi h alisha, saza to milegi

G:- to tumhari saza ye h ki ab se tum hume guddan maa nhi bulaogi

Al:- lekin kyu, aapne to mujhe maaf kr diya tha na

G:- haan haan maaf kr diya tha hum to ye bol rhe the ki tum hume guddan maa nhi bulaogi kyuki hum chahte h ki tum hume mumma bulao sirf mumma aur baki ghar walo se bhi maango aur ek acchi bacchi ban jao and hugs her

Alisha smiles and have a happy family hug...

Later alisha ask forgiveness from everyone..

In night akshan and alisha are sitting in akshan's room and talking but guddan is thinking something

A:- what happen guddan.. kya soch rhi ho?

G:- aap hum pr bharosa krte h jindal sahab?

A:- khud se bhi jyada.. lekin kya hua

G:- hum alisha ko sab sach batana chahte h

This shocks akshat and alisha is confused

A:- lekin guddan...

But guddan interrupts him saying that hum iss naye rishte ko jhut ya dhoke se shuru nhi krna chahte jindal sahab

Now alisha got super confused and ask the matter..

Akshan are seeing each other...

Akshat thinks and gives her silent confirmation to go ahead...

G:- Alisha.. she holds her and narrate everything about her mother

Alisha is crying very badly

Whom she is thinking right all the while woh hi culprit nikli

Now she starts blaming herself how can she do this to them..

But somehow akshan console her and hug each other happily..

After 2 days.....

In hall

Revati:- I AM SORRY GUDDAN DI

Everyone is crying except parv and saru

so guys here is the first part of my first ever ss...

I know accha nhi lga hoga but do let me know

Good and bad comments all are welcome

But plz do read and share ur views

Till then bye bye

And ya suggest a title also plz

Awesome...I hope alisha hi revti ki guddan ko sorry bolne ka wajah bane...I always wanted such kind of plot...continue soon.

Originally posted by: naaheean

Awesome...I hope alisha hi revti ki guddan ko sorry bolne ka wajah bane...I always wanted such kind of plot...continue soon.

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Superb start

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Originally posted by: plmzaq

Superb start

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REALISATION

Revati:- I'M SORRY GUDDAN DI

Everyone is crying except parv and saru bcoz as usual they are least interested in all this
(Shocked right)
Ohky so....

(FLASHBACK)....
In morning
After reuniting with her parents alisha is thinking something
Al:- revati ko kaise samjhau ki mumma glt nhi h, glt antara thi (yes now she hates antara that she doesn't even want to call her mummy)
Then she gets an idea and goes to akshat
Al:- papa apne parking lot me CCTV installed h kya?

A(confused):- haan beta.. Par kyu?!

Al(smiling):- kab se lag rhe h??

A:- bahut time ho gya h.. Par hua kya??

Al:- mtlb ab kaam ho jayega...

A:- mujhe kuch samjh nhi aa rha h alisha.. Tum kya kehna chah rhi ho

Then alisha explains him everything...
Now akshat understood and smiled..

NEXT DAY....
Al:- mumma dadi bhahai bhai Revati parv saru sab log neeche aayiye

Da:- kya hua alisha beta.. Aise sabko kyu bula rhi ho

A:- batate hai maa phle sabko aa jane dijiye

Everyone comes in hall

Al:- hume aap sabko kuch dikhana h

Then she plays the CCTV footage of that day..
Everyone was shocked... And Revati is crying
She was not able to believe her own eyes..

A:- dekha Revati... Jis guddan se tum nafrat krti ho, ye sochti ho ki isne angad ko nhi bachaya, sacchayi to ye h ki isne angad ko pehle bachaya tha, ye sab antara ka plan tha tumhe aur guddan ko alag krne ke liye

R:- ye mene kya kr diya.. Us antara ke jhaase me aakr me apni hi guddan di ki dushman ban gyi, unhe marna chaha, ye kya ho gya mujhse
She looks at guddan emotionally and goes towards her

R(folds her hands):- maaf kr do di.. Mujhse bahut badi glti ho gyi.. Mene aapko samajhne me bahut badi bhul kr di.. Apne dukh me ye bhi bhul gyi ki meri di ne humesha khud se pehle parivaar ko rakha h... Manti hu meri glti maafi ke layak nhi h lekin plzz ho sake to mujhe maaf kr do
(FLASHBACK ENDS HERE)

R:- MUJHE MAAF KAR DO DI I M SORRY

G:- nhi revati, hum mante h ki tum humse nafrat krti thi humse badla lena chahti thi lekin tumne in sabme alisha ki jindagi barbad krni chahi... Tumhe humse pareshani thi na toh humse badla leti, Lekin alisha... ek 18 saal ki bacchi ko kyu leke aayi in sabke beech me.. Arey wo to bacchi h use samjh nhi thi ki kya shi h kya glt lekin tum... Tum to badi ho samajhdaar ho fr bhi.. Apne badle me tum itni andhi ho gyi... Tumne humare sath jo kiya uske liye bhale hi hum tumhe maaf kr de lekin tumne alisha ke sath jo kiya uske liye ek maa tumhe kabhi maaf nhi kr payegi.. Kabhi nhi and goes from there cryingly..

Revati falls on floor...
R:- yeh mujhse kya ho gya... plz mujhe maaf kr dijiye jiju dadi alisha i m sorry.. I m really sorry

Al(holds her):- chinta mat kro revati.. Mumma tumhe jald hi maaf kr degi and hugs her...

Everything was going fine but after 2 days..
Same happens as in the show vikrant drama about property papers and says tum log yha reh sakte ho lekin naukar bankar.. Iske alawa tum logo ke paas koi option nhi h and laughs evilly...

Night time...
V:- tum sab log iss ghr ke naukar ho aur naukaro ki jagah itne bade bade kamro me nhi hoti... To tum sab log ab se yha hall me soge.. And smirks...

After some time....
Vikrant goes out for some work and parv and saru are sleeping
Everyone is talking then alisha screams
Everyone gets startled and ask her ki kya hua

Al:- mere paas ek idea h...

Everyone in union:- kya

And alisha narrated her plan

Everyone's mouths are wide open listening this and alisha is looking at everyone
Akshan look at each other and burst out laughing.... Alisha is confused

Al:- aap aise has kyu rahe ho?!!

A:- hum kaise bhul sakte h ki tum guddan ki beti ho khurapati idea dene me expert

Alisha and guddan looks at each other and smiles sheepishly

Kya idea h alisha ke paas.. Kya krne wali h ab ye ldki.. Socho socho...
Till then bye bye
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I m glad that u too wrote ss on Akshan read both the parts in one go and i really liked it very much

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Originally posted by: Kammy02

I m glad that u too wrote ss on Akshan read both the parts in one go and i really liked it very much

Continue soon

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