Akshan ff - Parivaar Ka Sath part 5 page 3 - Page 3

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Posted: 5 years ago
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Originally posted by: plmzaq

Awesome update

Love it

Thank you 😘😘

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Posted: 5 years ago
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Originally posted by: Viditian1

Amazing...seriously muje nahi lga tha ki vik sudhar gya higa...but honestly i m happy...skhukar hai sudhar gya...it was totally nit expected..muje lga tha ki vo sudhra hi nahi hoga...

But update was damn soo interesting...loved it cont soon❤️

Glad u like it 😘😘

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Posted: 5 years ago
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PART 5

REPENTING




Everyone one is happy but vikrant is sad...


G:- kya hua vikrant ji... Aap thode udaas lg rhe h..


A:- kya hua vikki...


V:- wo akki....
just then police arrives


A:- inspector.. Aap yha.. Kisne bulaya aapko...


V:- mene


A:- lekin kyu vikki


V:- mene jo kiya uske liye meri shi jagah jail h akki..


A:- kya bakwas kr rha h Vikki...
Inspector dekhiye hume koi complain nhi krni h sorry aapka wqt barbaad krne ke liye...


V:- nhi inspector ek min rukiye....


P:- ji...
(AS IN SERIAL POLICE WORK ACCORDING TO ACTORS NA)


V:- akki me janta hu tune aur baki sab ghr walo ne mujhe maaf kr diya h... Lekin me khud ko maaf nhi kr pa rha hu uske liye... Kya kuch nhi kiya mene tere khilaf, iss parivaar ke khilaf, alisha aur bhabhi ko kitna torture kiya, bht gunaah kiye h mene akki, aur meri saza aur pachtawa yhi h ki me khud ko police ko surrender kr du...


A:- ye kaisi baat kr rha h Tu Vikki... Teri halat me samjh sakta hu.. Tune jo kiya wo apne bacche, apni patni ko khone ke gam me kiya.. Aur tujhe uska pachtawa bhi ho rha h.. Wo guilt teri aankhon me dikh rha h.. Tu kahi nhi ja rha h Vikki samjh aayi meri baat..


G:- jindal sahab bilkul shi keh rhe h vikrant ji... Mante h hum ki aapne glt kiya h.. Lekin aap jail tab jate jab aapko aapki glti ka ehsaas ab bhi nhi hota... Lekin aapko aapki glti ka ehsaas h, uska pachtawa h, hume aur kuch nhi chahiye...


V:- sorry akki, soory bhabhi, sorry maa, sorry alisha... But plzz mujhe mat rokiye...


A:-tujse baat krna hi bekar h... Inspector... Agar koi insaan glti krne ke baad apni glti ka pachtawa kr rha h... Genuinely sudharna chahta h to kya hum use ek mauka nhi de sakte...


G:- ji inspector... Hum maafi chahte h ki aapka itna wqt kharab hua.. Lekin hume vikrant ji ke khilaf koi complain nhi krni h...


A:- sorry inspector...
Police leaves...


V:- ye kya kiya tune akki


G:- vikrant ji hum mante h aapne jo kiya wo glt tha lekin ab aapko aapki glti ka ehsaas h wo hi kafi h hume aapse koi shikayat nhi h.. Shi kaha na humne jindal sahab


A:- bilkul and smiles


V:- akki...


A:- bas ab mujhe na thank you sunna h aur na hi sorry.. Samjha.. And hugs him


Al:- aise to revati ko bhi apni glti ka ehsaas h maa fr bhi aapne unhe maaf nhi kiya


Guddan gets shocked and revati looks at alisha with tearful eyes
She din't thought that alisha will take stand for her...


Al:- kya hua maa


G:- isne jo tumhare sath kiya wo...


Al(interrupts her):- glt to vikrant ji ne bhi kiya na fr bhi aapne unhe maaf kr diya
Revati ko bhi maaf kr do maa.. mere liye.. Plz


Guddan doesn't respond to it...
Alisha continues...


Jab vikrant ji ko unki glti ki maafi mil sakti h to revati ko kyu nhi...
Vikrant ji ko apni glti ka ehsaas h to revati ko bhi h maa...
Ek baar dekho unki taraf.. Kya aapko unki aankhon me guilt, wo dard nhi dikhayi de rha jo ek behan apni dusri behan ke door hone pr krti h...
Aapko pta nhi h maa lekin mene dekha h..
Roj revati raat ko apne kamre me roti h ki usne apni di pr bharosa nhi kiya.. Kitni takleef di unko... Use behan khelane ka koi hak nhi h.. Jis behan ne use sage rishton se badke mana use chot pahuchayi h mene...


Revati looks down.. Everyone look at her teary eyes but parv and saru.. As always making faces...


Guddan looks at revati emotionally and then looks at alisha...


G:- meri beti kab itni badi ho gyi...


Al:- jab se aap meri mumma bani ho... And smiles..


Al:- to aapne unhe maaf kr diya na...
Guddan smiles


G(goes towards her):- chutki... And hugs her
Both are crying


Akshat hugs alisha and says.. I M PROUD OF YOU BETA...
Alisha brightly smiles bcoz this is the moment every girl want in her life that her father says this to her
(Am I right..)


Da:- aaj tumne sabit kr diya ki dil ke rishtey khoon ke rishton se bahut bade hote h...
Jeeti reh meri bacchi...


L:- shi me alisha.. Tum to kafi sudhar gyi..
Everyone is happy with alisha...


R:- i m sorry di.. I m really sorry.. Me aapko samjh hi nhi payi... Sauteli aap nhi ho, sauteli to me hu.. Aapne to mujhe humesha sago se bhi badkar pyaar kiya h.. Sautela behave to mene kiya h... Maaf kr do di.. And cries vigorously


G:- nhi chutki.. Bas.. Shhhh... Bas chup kr.. And wipes her tears...


Al:- Arey revati jyada sautela sautela mat kro.. Nhi to mumma ke hath tumhare cheeks pr kab land kr jayenge pta bhi nhi chalega..
Everyone laughs...


Akshat playfully hits her....
Guddan glares at her...
Alisha gets silent...


G:- waise baat to shi keh rhi alisha
Now everyone laughs loudly...


R:- i m sorry di


G:- bas kr chutki.. Kitni baar sorry bolegi.. Tujhe apni glti ka ehsaas h wo hi kafi h.. Ab rona band kr.. Meri chutki haste hue acchi lgti h.. Rote hue nhi.. Samjhi... And hugs her


Revati looks at alisha and goes towards her..


R:- alisha... I m very sorry... Mene apne badle me tumhari jindagi ke sath khelna chaha... Maaf kr do...


Al:- nhi.. Bilkul nhi..
Revati gets shocked..


A:- alisha...


Al:- Arey meri baat to suno... And pouts...


R:- Haan bolo.. Kya hua..


Al:- ek shart pr maaf karungi


R:- aur wo kya..


Al:- me abse aapko maasi bulaungi... Manzoor h to bolo... Nhi to no maafi.. And cross her hands...


(Akshat gets relieved bcoz he gets scared what will alisha do now bcoz after all she is guddan's daughter)


Akshan both hit her head...

Everyone smiles with Alisha's transformation


R:- manjoor


Al:- to fr maafi bhi manjoor.. And hugs her..


Parv and saru left from there bcz some people can't change


Everyone has a family hug including vikrant..
But guddan is looking at someone and thinking something....




What guddan is thinking... Ab kya hone wala h inki life me.. Sochiye..
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Edited by Mrihika - 5 years ago
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Posted: 5 years ago
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Nice update

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Posted: 5 years ago
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Originally posted by: plmzaq

Nice update

Love it

Cont soon

Glad u like it 😘😘

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