Akshan ff - Parivaar Ka Sath part 5 page 3 - Page 2

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PART 3

REALISATION II

NEXT DAY
Everyone is in hall just then as per plan guddan faints
Everyone is worried
Kishore calls doctor
After sometimes doctor arrives and checks guddan

Do:- dekhiye iss halat me inka itna tension lena acchi baat nhi h

A:- iss halat me mtlb docotor.. Kya hua h guddan ko

Do:- mtlb ye ki... congratulations Mr.jindal, guddan ji is one month pregnant

A:- sach doctor... Thank you so much doctor..

Do:- ye kuch medicines h inhe de dijiyega aur jitna ho sake inhe tension se dur rakhiyega

A:- ji doctor

Doctor leaves
After sometime guddan regain consciousness...

A:- i m so happy guddan thank you so much

G:- lekin kyu jindal sahab humne kya kiya

A:- tumne mujhe duniya ki sabse badi khushi di h guddan.. Me bata nhi sakta me kitna khush hu..

G:- lekin hua kya h jindal sahab..?

Al:- mumma thank you so much... Ab jald hi mera chota bhai ya behan aane wali h yeyyy...

G:- kya ye sach h jindal sahab..!!

A:- haan guddan tum one week pregnant ho and cups her face

G:- hume yakeen nhi ho rha jindal sahab humare andar humara baccha h...

Everyone is happy
Vikrant is also somewhere happy
He congratulates her and goes from there
Parv and saru also leaves from there
(Parv and saru they don't know the plan)

Al:- chalo plan ka 1st part to successful rha ab aage...

A:- ab sab koi na koi excuse dekr ghr ke bahar chalte h

G:- lekin parv aur saru unka kya kre...

R:- Aap unki chinta mat kro di... Unko me dekh lungi and smiles

But guddan doesn't react to it... Revati gets sad...

After sometime....

Only vikrant and guddan is at home

Everyone is out according to plan

G(politely):- vikrant

V:- kya hua SAASU MAA

She gets irritated by this but still said politely...
G:- wo ghr pr koi nhi h aur hume abhi doctor ke paas jana h, hume kuch thik nhi lg rha

V:- to khud chali jao na

G:- iss halat me akeli kaise jau me bahar

V:- kya natak h yrr chalo

Vikrant and guddan in car
Vikrant is driving carefully as she is pregnant
Guddan calls him and he turns towards her
Just then one boy comes in front of car guddan shouts and vikrant turns the car and it hits the tree
(BILKUL WAISA JAISA PEHLE HUA THA)
Guddan faints

Vikrant takes her to hospital
Everyone is present there
Just then doctor comes out

Do:- I M SORRY MR. JINDAL BUT MRS. JINDAL HAS MISCARRIAGE
This broke everyone

They bring guddan home
Vikrant is crying

Akshat goes towards vikrant and slaps him
A:- le liya tune tera badla, tujhe lgta tha mene tera baccha cheena aur isliye tune mera baccha cheen liya, ye umeed nhi thi vikrant apne badle me itna pagal ho gya tu

V:- nhi mere bhai meri baat sun ye mene janbhujkr nhi kiya ye sab achanak ho gya meri glti nhi thi wo to Baccha achanak samne aa gya to isliye.... Mene janbhujkr nhi kiya akki..

A:- jhut mat bol vikrant tune janbhujkr kiya, tujhe mujhse badla lena tha isliye kiya

V:- nhi mere bhai wo to baccha gaadi ke samne aa gya isliye ye sab hua mene kuch bhi janbhujkr nhi kiya...

A:- tune maara h mere bacche ko vikrant... Me tujhe nhi chhodunga.. Jaan le lunga teri.. And holds his collar

V:- nhi akki mene nhi maara tere bacche ko wo ek accident tha akki...

G:- jab ye ek accident tha toh jindal sahab kaise glt ho sakte h vikrant ji

V:- mtlb

Al:- mtlb ki ye humara plan tha tumhe tumhari glti ka ehsaas karane ka

V:- tum logo ki itni himmat... Mere sath aisa ghatiya natak kiya tum logo ne..

G:- ek minute vikrant ji... Vikrant ji hum mante h aapne apna baccha khoya, apni vaishali ko khoya.. Lekin uss accident me jindal sahab ki kya glti thi
Jaise ye aapne janbhujkr nhi kiya waise hi wo bhi jindal sahab ne janbhujkr nhi kiya tha wo ek accident tha jo kisi ke bhi sath ho sakta tha jo us wqt jindal sahab ke sath hua aur aaj aapke sath....

Now vikrant starts realising his mistakes sorry sins
V(cryingly):- folds his hands...akki mere bhai, guddan bhabhi, maa aap sab log mujhe maaf kr dijiye
Me apne badle me itna pagal ho gya tha ki kya shi h kya glt smjh hi nhi paya
Sorry maa me ek accha beta nhi ban paya
Sorry bhai me ek accha dost nhi ban paya
Sorry alisha sorry bhabhi mene aap dono ko kitni takleef di
Mujhe maaf kr do
And falls on floor

A:- holds him and says
Bas vikki me samjhta hu tune ye sab kyu kiya lekin tujhe apne dost pr trust hona chahiye tha ki tera bhai aisa kabhi krne ki ya fr tujhe ya bhabhi ko nuksan pahuchne ki soch bhi nhi sakta...

V:- maaf kr de mujhe mere bhai

A:- nhi Vikki.. Jo tune kiya wo bht glt tha.. Agar tujhe lgta tha ki ye sab mene kiya h to aakr mujhse baat krta.. Mujhe marta lekin tune ye raasta chuna.. Apne badle ke liye meri beti meri guddan ki jindagi se khela hai tune vikrant.. I m sorry but i can't forgive you for this.. Tune humari dosti ko sharminda kiya h.. Bht glt kiya tune Vikki bahut glt...
And goes from there...

V:- akki meri baat to sun.. Akki..

G:- jindal sahab apni jagah shi h vikrant ji.. Lekin thoda wqt dijiye unhe sab thik ho jayega...

V:- ji bhabhi and folds his hands and says.. Ho sake to mujhe maaf kr dijiye bhabhi...

G:- jab jindal sahab aapko maaf kr denge tab hum bhi kr denge.. Usse pehle humse bhi kuch umeed mat rakhiyega.. And she also goes from there...

V:- alisha mujhe maaf kr do mene tumhare sath bhi bht glt kiya h.. I m sorry alisha..

Al:- jab mumma papa ne maaf nhi kiya toh me kaun hoti hu tumhe maaf krne wali.. And goes from there

Everyone goes from there only vikrant is left...

V(on call):- thank you but thoda jaldi
Ab dekhna akki me kya krta hu...

Now what is vikrant upto... Kise call kiya h usne.. Kya ye vikrant ka natak h accha banne ka ya wo sach me badal gya h... Janne ke liye bane rahiye mere sath..
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PART 4

RECTIFYING

Next day...
A(comes down):- ye sab kya ho rha h yha pr aur aap log yha kya kr rhe h... Kisne permission di aap logo ko andar aane ki.. Chaliye bahar jayiye...

G:- suna nhi Aapne jindal sahab ne kya kaha.. Jayiye yha se... Aaj aapko yha pr kuch nhi milega...

U(unknown):- dekhiye Mrs. jindal.. Hum yha bin bulaye nhi aaye h... Hume bulaya gya h

G(looks at akshat Confusingly):- bulaya gya h

A:- kisne bulaya h..!!

V:- mene bulaya h akki

A:- ab kya tamasha krna chahta h inhe bula kr... Itna kuch to kar diya.. Ab kya baki reh gya h..!

V:- abhi pta chal jayega
Aap log plzz bathiye

G:- vikrant ji ye sab kya h

V:- batata hu bhabhi
Mujhe aaj in sabhi ke samne kuch confess krna h isliye mene in reporters aur mahila morcha ko bulaya h

G:- lekin vikrant ji...

V:- nhi bhabhi.. Mujhe krne dijiye

Then he confesses all his crime in front of all how he plotted against this family, how he uses alisha's hatred, also the reason behind it everything...
All are shocked..

V:- manta hu gunah mene kiya h lekin mujh jaise log aisa kr pate h aap logo ki wjh se...

Re&mm:- aap hum pr ilzaam kaise lga sakte h Mr. Goyal.. Khud ek apradhi hokar...

V(interrupts them):- manta hu apradhi hu me, lekin aap log.. Bina soche samjhe jo news milti h use mirch masale laga kr dikhane lg jate ho... Kabhi uss baat ke peeche ke sacchayi janne ki koshish krte ho... Nhi.. Kyuki aap logo ko sirf TRP chahiye hoti h..
Aur aap log mahila morcha.. Kabhi kuch glt hua nhi ki aa jate ho aap log aurat ki glti nikalne.. Ye nhi sochte ki mard bhi glt ho sakta h.. Humesha glti aurat ki nhi hoti..

Reporters and mahila morcha gets silent on this...

G:- bilkul shi keh rhe h vikrant ji...
Ek minute nhi lgta aap logo ko kisi ki ijjat ki dhajjiya udane me... Kuch hua nhi ki jhanda leke aa jate ho unki life ke decision lene...kaun deta hai hak aap logo ko kisi aur ki jindagi ke decision lene ka.. Ye jhande ye mic.. Nhi.. Bilkul bhi nhi... Arey jo hua uske peeche koi to wjh rahi hogi na.. Lekin nhi.. Aap log kaha kisi ki baat sunte h.. Arey aap log khud ko mahila morcha kehte ho aur dusri taraf aurato ki ijjat ki dhajjiyaan udane me koi kasar nhi Chodte... Yhi kaam h aapka.. Haan.. Arey mahila morcha ka mtlb bhi samjhte h aap log... Mujhe nhi lgta...
Aur aap log.. Aap logo se toh kya hi bolu... Mic mila nhi ki samjhne lg jate h ki hum ab kuch bhi bol sakte h kisi ke bhi baare me bol sakte h... Paise kamane ke chakkar me aap log apna farz bhul gye... Arey aap logo ka kaam h logo tak shi news pahuchana.. Jaha shi me glt ho rha ho wha jake use rokna... Logo ko uske baare me aagah krna... Lekin nhi..
Sharam aani chahiye aap logo ko..

A:- aap log wha jate ho jha se aapko TRP aur publicity mile... Kabhi normal logo ke sath kya kya glt hota h wha jate bhi ho aap log..

Now they are ashamed of their act and ask forgiveness from them...

G:- hum abhi to maaf kr dete h lekin agli baar kisi ke baare me koi raay banane se pehle baat ki teh tak jana... Aur khaas taur pr.. humare jindal sahab aur humari family ke baare me kuch bhi ulta seedha bola toh dekh lena... Namastey... Darwaza us taraf h aap log ja sakte h..

They leave...

Akshat is looking at vikrant with teary eyes.. He din't thought that vikrant will do something like this...
He just hug him..

V:- ab to tune mujhe maaf kr diya na

A:- Haan ye bhi koi bolne ki baat h ab and hugs him

V:- bhabhi, maa, alisha.. Aap log bhi..

But guddan interrupts him

G:- arey jab jindal sahab ne maaf kr diya toh humne bhi kr diya kyu maa ji... Hena alisha
Both nod their heads

V:- Ab bas ek cheez aur bachi h...

Everyone looks at him..
Just then lawyers enters...

V:- alisha idhar aao

Ye rahe divorce ke papers...

Al:- thank you vikrant thank you so much

V:- nhi alisha.. Thank you to mujhe kehna chahiye aap sab logo ko.. And specially tumhe.. Aakhir tumhare idea ki wjh se hi toh mujhe meri glti ka ehsaas hua h.. And puts his hand on her head..

A:- thank you mere bhai

Vikrant smiles at akshat..
V:- chalo alisha ab jaldi se sign kr do.. Mene already sign kr diye h.. Jaldi se ab hum dono ko iss dhoke ke rishtey se aazad kr do..

Alisha nod her head and sign them

V:- mere abhi ke confession se ye divorce bhi aaj hi ho jayega...

Everyone smiles...
But vikrant is sad...
Why??

Ab vikrant ko kya hua.. Kya chal raha h uske dimag me.. Socho aur batana ki aap logo ko kya lgta h...
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