Akshan os tere Bina last part page 7 Jan 4 updated - Page 2

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Posted: 6 years ago
#11
Superb update
Loved the way Guddan and AJ expressed the feeling for each other they have
Both realising the truth of marriage is great
Waiting eagerly for next update
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Posted: 6 years ago
#12
Amazing one
U portrayed their emotions really well 😳
👏

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Posted: 6 years ago
#13
Nice update
Love it
Continue soon
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#14
Amazing update...
Love it..❀
Continue soon...😊
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Posted: 6 years ago
#15
Awesome...emotions se Abhi dil bhara nahi...ye dil maange more...👏update soon and make it longgg one...
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Posted: 6 years ago
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really loved it..continue soon[
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Posted: 6 years ago
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Part -3


When parv told guddan about this guddan gave him a tight slap with a full force.


G- pointing her index finger. Tumhari himmat kaise hui hamari mummy par itna ghatiya or ghinona ilzaam lagane ki tumhe kya Lagta hai ki tumhari in jhootha baton me aa jaungi main.


P - evilishly. Nahi sasumaaa aap MERI baton me Nahi AANA chahti na mat aaiye magar saboot ko to sachcha manegi na aaap. Ye Dekhiye


He shows guddu a cellphone where is a video in which they r planning akshan marriage n kaushalya saying her step daughter a Bala. N wanted a ameer ladka for revati. Guddan gets shocked seeing this a tear dropped from her eyes.she fell on the floor.


Parv gets his knees bend took his phone n said


P- Kaha tha na aapse sasumaaa apki sauteli maaa aapse koi pyaar Nahi krti. Aap hi Unse rishtey nibha Rahi h.


Arre main to kahta Hun ki apko unki wajah se banaye rishte ko nibhane ki zarurat nahi hai.


Guddan looked at him.


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AJ is driving his car rapidly n gets a call


A- hello ji sp Sahab thank u so much for your help. Ji main samajh Gaya Mandir k pass ki location hai. Main samajh Gaya ji.


Saying this he cuts the call.


Again his phone rang it was revati.


R- jiju abhi mami Ka call aya tha Didi Ghar par Nahi hai achanak se kahin cHali gayi h.


A- whaaat??? Itni rat Gaye Kaha jaaa Sakti h think h main dhoondhta hi usse. Tum tension mat lo.

A- Kahan ho tum guddan


He gets tensed.


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Perv gets closer to her n says


P- Mera MATLAB hai ki revati aapki chhoti Bahan h Yani har cheez me aapse chhoti Umar me tajurbe me himmat me. Or khoobsurati me b .


Sach Kahu sasumaaa JIS din se aap k hath Ka thappad khaya h na junoon ban gayi h aap mera.


Or main bevakoof aapki chhoti Bahan k peeche ghoom Raha tha jabki asli hira to aap h guddan jiii


Saying this he hold her shoulder guddan tried to make herself free.


G- chhod hame kamine kya babdtameezi hai ye??


P- arre guddan ji khaamkhah Ka tamasha Nahi Kar payenge aap kyon ki itni Raat Gaye aapko bachane koi Nahi ayega.


Aapka wo buzurh pati to bilkul b Nahi.


Or vaise b usne Diya kya hai aapko dukh or takleef k sivay


Guddan again slapped him n said


G- kamine ek shadishuda ladki par Gandhi nazar daal Raha h Tu


After it parv got mad he just removed guddan's dupatta n laid her on the floor n tried to kiss her n said


P- arre aaj tak ladki k pati me usse chhua b na ho wo shadishuda kaise ho gayi haaan???


Ab or mat satao guddan aaj to mere Dil ki aag bujha Kar rahunga chahe is l liye tujhe kyon na jalana pade.


Guddan was shouting crying n recalling Akshat who says in the night of Christmas


"Kuch ghante b Nahi rah Sakti tum mere madad k binaaa"


Tears were flowing through her eyes.when she realised that she is not capable to fight with him she is loosing it. She shouted for once n last. Akshaaattt.

N then she saw someone hold parv n remove him from top of her.


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So tell me guys how was it.


Next update me apko milega bharpooor action or parv ki dhulai


Jaan ne k liye bane rahiye.

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Posted: 6 years ago
#18
Wonderful update yaar👏
Not fair... yahan par rok diyađŸ„±


Next update kab milegi?😭

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Posted: 6 years ago
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Awesome update...👏
Continue soon...
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Posted: 6 years ago
#20
Aww bechari Guddan first her stepmother's real face was shown then that Pervy đŸ€Źmolesting her
I hope in next update Perv ke zordaar dhulaayi ho

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