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Posted: 6 years ago
#31
Happy New Year
Awesome
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Posted: 6 years ago
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Part-5


They returned to home.dadi was waiting in the hall for them.seeing guddan she hugged her.hearing the noise all of three Dil came to hall.


D- tumhari himmat kaise hui iss Ghar me waapis aane ki Jate waqt to itni akad dikha k gayin thi na kis ne Diya tumhe is Ghar me aane Ka haqqq...

As Durga was about to say more


A- Maine Diya hai use ye haq biwi h wo MERI or aap teeno ki saas. Maine apse shadi k din b Kaha tha or abhi b kah Raha Hu Durga bahu aap k liye yahi achcha Hoga ki aap is Ghar me Aaye is badlav ko Khushi Khushi sweekar Kar le.

AJ started leaving but come back.


His tashan music plays n he says


A- or ek baat Shayad aap bhool Rahi h to main yaad dila du apko ki bhale hi Ghar ki zimmedari or chabiyan Aapke pass hai magar iss Ghar k faisle Lene Ka haq ab BHI mere pass hi hai. Or haaa Yaad rakhiye k rishtey me main Aapka sasur or MERI biwi hone k naate ye aapki sasumaaa hain.to agar apko in Rishton Ka hisab samajh AA Gaya ho to aainda se unhe isi tarike se deal kijiyega.

Lvj n sj was I. Awww they covered their mouths with their hands.


Durga was amused...

A- chalo guddan Apne kamre me chal k aaram karo. Maa aaap aaiye na mujhe aapse Kuch bat Karni hai.


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They all were in AJ room. Guddan went to change AJ told maa everything.


When guddu came out washroom


M- Yaha AA puttar baith mere pass


G- ji dadi


Guddu sat near dadi.


M- tujhe pata hai Tu Mera sabse Bahadur or himmati bachcha hai

At this


guddu looked at dadi


M- janti h kyon kyonki Mera Lalla Jo hai na wo Apne takleef ko gusse me chhupa leta hai jiski wajah se Sab par gu ssa t


Karta hai magar apni takleef ko muskurahat me chhupa Lena or doosre ko muskaan dena bahut himmat Ka kaam hai Jo sirf Tu Kar Sakti hai.

Mujhse pyaar Karti hai Tu??


G- dadi ye aap ...


M- to phir jab maaa manti h to kahti kyon Nahi ..

Hearing this she couldn't stop


She just hugged dadi.calling her maaa n cried.


Akshat who was witnessing all this wiped his eyes corners with his fingers.


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After half n houraa n guddan was there guddan was lying her head in maa's lap.n maa was caressing her hairs.


Akshat came with a tray guddan gets up . Sit on the bed


G- ye kya hai???


A- kankhajura hai. Dikh Nahi Raha ki Khana hai.


G- magar hame bhookh Nahi h


A- tumhe ho na ho mujhe to h.

Saying this he sat on the bed put a plate in front of her. N took his own.


M- kha le bachcha subah se Kuch Nahi khaya h tune


G- maa sach me bhookh Nahi h


M- thik h tujhe bhookh Nahi h to tu mat khaaa. Magar MERI beti bhookhi h or main use bhookhi Nahi rahne doongi.

Saying this maa took plate n feed her from her hands.after eating three nivalas guddan said


M- itne se pet Bhar Gaya


G- Nahi maaa Mann Bhar Gaya. Bahut din baad maaa k hath se khaya hai.

Maa wiped the tear of her eye.


Akshat who was watching it silently said


A- ye kya maaa itne salo me mujhe to Kabhi Apne hath se Nahi khilaya or isko aate sath itna sara pyaar.


Before maa could say anything guddu replied him teasingly.


G- arre apko Nahi pata maa aapse zyada mujhse pyaar Karti h.

They started arguing


A- maa aap batao


M- ye BHI koi poochne ki baat hai har maaa k liye uska bachcha bahut pyara Hota hai.


Akshat smiled in a manner of winning a battle.


Maa continued


M- magar mujhe MERI guddan zyada pyari hai.


Hearing this guddu n maaa laugh loudly n AJ made a puppy face.


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It was two in the night as sleep was out of akshan mind they both were awake.


Akshat was having his back at balcony.


Gudddu thought that he was sleeping so she went outside at terrace.


After 15 mins he came there n saw she was looking at the sky having her legs dipped in the pool.


He sat besides her.


She said looking at him intensely


G- I Love You


Akshat was stunned at her statement.


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Kya Hoga inki PREM kahani Ka anjaaam janne k liye intezaar kijiye kal ka.


Stay tuned n do comment


Love u alll

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Posted: 6 years ago
#33
Freaking hell!!!😲
Ye kya hua?!
Ekk taraf main senty hui hi thi Guddan aur dadi ka bond dekhkar ki Guddan ne "i love you" ka bomb phod diya!!!
😆
So even i got teary eyed when Guddan called dadi as maa.
Akshat fighting for rights over his mother was😳
Waiting!!! Aj ka jawab kya hoga?!
Mere sawalon ka...jawab do...😆
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Posted: 6 years ago
#34
Ye lo Guddan Akshat ki prem kahaani ka aagaaz ho gya 😳
Update soon and koi hai jisne mera SS read ni kiya 🤔😆
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Posted: 6 years ago
#35
Awesome update dear
Loved it alot
Iam really happy that AJ showed Durga her place
Akshan fight over who dadi loved more that part was also beautiful
And finally guddan confessed she loves him wanna know his reaction
Please do continue soon
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Posted: 6 years ago
#36
Nice chapter kavya
aww guddan ne I love you bol diya

Serial main bhi aisa hota to maja aa jata

Jaldi jaldi update kardena
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Posted: 6 years ago
#37
Wow Dadi and Guddan scene was so emotional
AJ ne Durga ki mast class li loved it
Update soon
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Posted: 6 years ago
#38
Awesome update...
Love it
Please continue soon
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Posted: 6 years ago
#39
AJ stood for Guddan ❤️
Oh teri Guddan ne I love you Bol diya 😲
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Posted: 6 years ago
#40
Superb update
Love it
Continue soon

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