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Posted: 6 years ago
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Part -6


Akshat was looking in her eyes.he asked


A- kya Kaha abhi tumne.


Guddu started him for a while n burst out into laughter.


Akshat was looking at her confused.


G - arre yarrr main to mazaaak Kar Rahi thi. Aap to serious ho Gaye.

At this Akshat got very angry..


He just hold her dragged her n pinned her to the wall. Guddan was watching him with intense eyes.


A- mazaaak Lagta hai tumhe ye Sab Kuch. Yani ki tumhe har rishta b ek mazaaak hi lagta Hoga or Hoga b kyon Nahi guddan Jo ho. Tumhe Kisi ki feelings or emotions ki kadar hi Kahan hai.tum to har BAAT ko mazaaak me Lena janti ho. Sahi kahta tha main tum bilkul b Nahi sochti ki tumhari ek baat Jo Bina soche samajhe ki Jaye uska asar kya ho Sakta hai. Maine socha ki mere sath bhale hi do mahine Rahi hogi magar mujhse Kuch to seekha Hoga. Main b tumse Kuch achcha seekhna Chahta tha magar koi fayda Nahi h.

He tightened his grip n get more close to her. Their proximity was such that they both could senses each others breaths as well as heart beats.

A- pyaar or rishtey mazaaak Nahi hote. Magar Main tumhe ye kyon samjha Raha Hu. actually I don't even care about it.

He left her n started to leave.


Guddu hold his hand n said

G- jhooth bolna to seekh Gaye aap

Akshat got stunned at the line.


He turned n saw her eyes there was tears but they were not of pain.


Guddu get closer to him he hold his both hands.


G - hamari ankhon me Dekh k kahiye ki you don't care. Kahiye ki apko hamare Jane par koi takleef Nahi hui. Hamare itni Raat Gaye Ghar me na hone par darr Nahi laga. Hame Mandir me USS haalat me Dekh Kar apko gussa Nahi aaya. Durga bahu Ka hamse USS Tarah BAAT Karna apko Bura Nahi laga. Hamare isss Tarah tootne par Apne Khud ko bikhra hua mahsoos Nahi Kiya. Hamari Yaad me Apne hamare sath guzare har lemhe ko Yaad Nahi Kiya.


Bus ek Baar hamari ankhon me ankh daal k kah dijiye ham Zindagi Bhar apse Kuch Nahi poochenge.


Apko Lagta hai ki hame apke feelings ki Kadar Nahi hai magar sach to ye hai Akshat ki ham ye jante hi Nahi apki Dil me hamare liye Kuch hai BHI ya nahi.


Aap Jo Baar Baar hamari madad karte Hain, Hamari har galati ko sudharne me hame bachane me


Ye sirf isiliye ki ham aapki zimmedari hai.


For the sake of humanity bus...

Before she could say more Akshat shout it..


A- bcoz I love you damn it.


I love you...


Saying this he cupped her face from both of his hands.


Abhi tak bhagta Raha magar ab nahi.


Ha ye sach hai main tumhe bahut Chahta Hu tumse pyaar karta Hun.


Or ye pyaar isiliye Nahi ki tum MERI biwi ho balki isiliye ki tum mere Dil Ka gumshuda wo adha tukda ho jiske milne par mere Dil me dhadkana shuru Kar Diya.


Ye pyaar isiliye Nahi hai kyonki tumne mere liye vrat rakha balki isiliye hai kyon ki tumne mujhe USS din ye ehsaas dilaya ki main tumhara pati hone se pahle maa Ka beta b hu.bhale hi mujhe tumhare liye Nahi AANA tha magar maa k liye to aata.


Ye pyaar isiliye Nahi hai kyonki tum galtiyan Karti ho balki isiliye hai ki chahe duniya Ka koi BHI insaan tumhe kahta Raha magar tum Apne aap ko sabit Karne Ka mauka Nahi chhodna chahti.


Ye pyaar isiliye Nahi hai ki tum MERI bahuon ki saas ho ya MERI biwi ho balki isiliye hai kyonki tum sirf MERI ho sirf MERI or MERI...


G- Akshat mujhe apse Kuch kahna hai

Akshat put his finger on her lips n said


A- tumhe kya Lagta hai ki main Nahi janta..


G- magar main kahna chahti hu...


Akshat leaned closer to her face n said


A- to Kaho


G- I ... I love you Akshat.


Saying this she hide her face in his chest n Akshat hugged her.


He then said in a shayrana andaaz.


"Meri dhadkanon ko teri Sanson ki adat is Kadar hai,


Tere Bina mere Dil ne dhadkana chhod Diya tha.


Muddaton baad lipti hai Tu mujhse MERI parchhai ki,Tarah


Warna mere jism ko sayon(shadow) ne chhod Diya tha.


So guys this is it. Tell me how was that will be back with another story on Monday till yet pls tell me how was that as I say u guys make me what I am so do comments. Criticism are also welcome.


Love u alll.


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Posted: 6 years ago
#42
It was a good os, loved it a lot ❤️
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Posted: 6 years ago
#43
Love their confession
And the shayari just love it

Will wait for your next story

❤️😊😊
Edited by Angelsanvika08 - 6 years ago
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Posted: 6 years ago
#44
Loved Akshan's love confession
It was too good
❤️
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Posted: 6 years ago
#45
Beautiful update dear
Loved it
Such a beautiful confession
Do write more
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Posted: 6 years ago
#46
Mind blowing 👏perfect confession scene..loved it..
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Posted: 6 years ago
#47
Kayuuu Kayuuu Kayuuu
Kamaal kar diya yaar 👏

Loved their dialogue way too much

Hayeee ufff😳

Waiting for Monday ⭐️
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Posted: 6 years ago
#48
Aww was so nice
Akshat shayari at the end was so to romantic
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Posted: 6 years ago
#49
👏amazing
Enjoyed it to the bone
That confession was lit!😳
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Posted: 6 years ago
#50
It was so beautiful
Just loved it😳

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