Akshan os tere Bina last part page 7 Jan 4 updated

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AKSHAN TS - tere Bina


on the special request of our one n only yashi here is another two shots.


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It's been two. Half hours since guddu left. The three DIL are very happy. Dadi is in her room. Sons went to restaurant.


Here he was in the balcony sitting on the jhoola where she used to sleep. He clinched the pillow in his right hand n was looking at the door. From where she left. She was looking at him with so much expectations but today Akshat Jindal his "SHER KHAN" was helpless. He was about to go inside just then kathor came on his shoulder.


He recalled the moment when they were arguing n guddu pick him from his shoulder.


He said to kathor in a low voice " Nahi aayegi wo ab tujhe mere kandhe se utaarne k liye."



He then realized kathor didn't eat something from morning.


He stood up with kathor on his shoulder took kathor 's bowl n tried to feed him.


He again recalled her when they were feeding kathor together. The smile of her face made him smile for a sec but he realised again. "Nahi ayegi wo waapis."

He then left to terrace for some fresh air. Kathor was still on his shoulder.


He decided to sit at the poolside.when he sat he again recalled


1. The night when she came to his house n their first proximity of hugging each other. Her laughter when he fell down in the pool.


2. When he saved her from shweta's plan.

He again realised "Nahi ayegi wo waapis".

He decided to get up n he went to his bedroom. He saw there was a Diya lighted up in antara's picture he smiled. He saw yellow flowers there n said "guddan kitni Baar Kaha h ki Antara ko Peele Nahi safed phool Pasand the." He saw a shadow coming from balcony it was not of guddu. It was maaa.


Kathor flew away n sat somewhere.

Akshat saw his mother n was about to leave when maaa hold his hands.


Akshat couldn't stop himself now.


He just turned n hugged his mother. He was not crying.but still he wanted some peace of mind. He just closed his eyes. Her mother rubbed his back.


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As guddu's parents were out of town so she decided to go to her Mama's house. After her mother died her mama n mami loved her a lot they had no children so they treat her as their daughter.


Guddu told them everything which happened. They asked her to go n get Changed. So she could have her dinner.

Mama informed revati about the same n asked not to inform Bhushan about it.


Guddu went to change when she opened her bag there was a photo frame in which there was only two persons who means the world to her now first was her dadi or should she say maaa now. N the other was her maaa Ka beta his Akshat.


She didn't felt strange on calling him his Akshat.


She sat on the bed holding the photo.


She recalled when they met in the temple. His eyes his strong arms


Around her waist.


She realised "Kabhi Nahi mil payenge ab ham"

She recalled him holding her in his arms n taking her to the ground floor when she was wetted in swimming pool.

She recalled him when they rescue the Diya when she asked help to remove perv From revati's life.


She recalled him holding her hand when Durga decided to throw her out from the house on the day of her grihpravesh.

She recalled him catching when she was falling from the cupboard on the night of their suhaagraat.


A year dropped from her eyes when she realised.


"Kabhi Nahi mil payenge ab ham.


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So guys here it is. It will be a three shot pahle socha tha ki two shots me ho Jayega magar akshan scenes itne saare h ki three shots lagenge.

Is story me emotions romance drama or action Sab Kuch milega. I promise u that telll me how was that.


Criticism is also welcome. Love you alll

Edited by Kaya_luvakshan - 6 years ago

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Posted: 6 years ago
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Lajawab shuruwaat Kavya 👏
Jaldi jaldi kal next part de daalo😆
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Wow this is very interesting.
Akshan seperation is really painful 😭
But it was needed for them to realise their love
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Nice os kavya rula diya tumne😭
Jaldi jaldi update kar do
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Akshan remembering all their moments and saying they will not meet again it was so touching😭
Really good start of story
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😳beautiful
It was emotional
Loved it
Update soon
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I got nostalgic while reading
Loved it...👏
Continue soon...
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Awesome
Love it
Emotions are very well portrayed
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Superrr...waiting for the next shot...👏
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Part -2


Guys I decided to make it an three shots but I guess ki Kuch zyada b ho Sakte Hain.


So here we go with part 2


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AJ was hugging his mother n she was rubbing his back. After some time they sat on the bed. AJ sat on the floor lying his head on his mother's lap.


Maa said "agar itni takleef ho Rahi hai to roka kyon Nahi tune usse. Ya phir tujhe b Lagta hai ki wo paison k liye...


AJ stopped her "Nahi maaa main janta hu ki guddan ne mujhse paison k liye shadi Nahi ki hai usne mujhe apko ya iss pariwaar ko koi dhokha Nahi Diya"


Maa- to phir roka kyon Nahi usse.


A- maa mere pass uski begunahi Ka koi saboot Nahi h. Mujhe laga tha ki Shayad guddan Durga bahu ki baatein sunkar Kuch to kahegi magar wo cHali gayi.


M caressed his head n said


M- uski begunahi Ka saboot dhoondhna Teri b zimmedari h mere bachche. Wo ...


A completed maa


A- biwi h MERI or MERI biwi par jhootha ilzaam lagane walon ko main Jawan dunga.


He hold maaa's hand n said


A- main wada karta hi apse apki bahu or apni patni par lage har jhoothe ilzaam ko Mita Kar rakh dunga.


He was about to move when maaa asked him


M- Lalla kya Tu usse...


A- maa main Nahi janta ki ye kya hai magar sach ye h agar main usse pyaar Nahi karta to nafrat b Nahi karta.


Main janta hu ki wo akeli h apna har dukh apni muskurahat me chhupa Leti h magar Maine Dekha h Us k akelepan ko jo kahin na kahin mujhme BHI hai.


Bhale hi ye rishta pyaar Ka ho ya na ho magar dard Ka zaroor h or main janta hu ki use MERI or mujhe uski zarurat hai.

He left the room in search of proof.

Antara's picture was glowing with the light of Diya. Maa notice it.


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Guddan was still laid on the bed. When her mami came n put her hand on her head. Guddan just hold her n started crying. When she was done. Mami asked her


M- pyaar karti hai Tu Unse??


G- mami main Nahi janti ki ye pyaar hai ya Kuch or magar sach ye hi agar wo mere sath na ho to main apni Zindagi me Kuch b Nahi Kar paungi. I need him for myself for my heart.


Unka Mera sath hona hame bahut Khushi deta hai sach hai ye hi hai.


M- ek aise insan ki zarurat Jo tere liye apni bahu Ka Munh band Nahi Kar saka??


G- Nahi mami aaj Jo Durga bahu me Kaha wo sach hi tha or main janti hu ki wo hamesha galat se ladte Hain sach se Nahi.


Magar mere chale Jane k baad sabse zyada takleef unhi ko ho Rahi hogi. Ye main janti hu.


M- bhagwaan Kare Aisa hi ho..


Mami left her n asked her to sleep.


Just then guddu received a call.


N she rushed to somewhere.


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Meanwhile AJ was searching for some kind of proof in his CCTV footage. He gets revati call.


He picked up


R- jiju aap aisa kaise Kar Sakte h Di k sath


A- revati MERI BAAT suno ye tumhari Di k liye bahut zaruri hai.


Mujhe ye batao ki shadi wale din tumhare sath kya kya hua??


R recite all the story to him.


He said he will call her later. He again started checking the footage n saw something which raises his anger.


He tried to call somebody twice or thrice.


He went out of the house.


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Guddan reaches the temple of the area n saw none other than perv standing there. She asked him dejectedly


G - tumhari himmat kaise hui hame Yaha itni Raat Gaye bulane ki. Phone par kya ghatiya mazak Kar Rahe the tum..


P- ale Meli pyali sasumaaa aap to naraaaz ho gayi. Aapko apki shadi Ka sach batane bulaya hai.


Guddu gets shocked on hearing this.


P- aap janti h ki aapki shadi me AJ Ka koi b hath Nahi tha. Are unhe to Maine badnaam Kiya tha taki aap or so ek doosre se nafrat karte rahe.or apki Zindagi narak ban Jaye.


Guddu started recalling how AJ tolde her on their after wedding confrontation mujhe tumse shadi Karne k liye natak Karne ki zarurat nahi hai. Samajhi.


She remembers when she said on the day dadi asked him to tie the mangalsutra. Dhokhe se ki hui shadi.


She just wanted to go n hug him n say sorry for not trusting him.


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Ok so guys here it was I know it's very short but will update tomorrow. Emotions Apne Dekh liye kal dekhiyega drama or action. So be ready Stay tuned.


Do comment n like if u loved it


Lots of love.

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