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Posted: 6 years ago

Originally posted by: Akshananju

Me bhi 😂😂especially love flourished in college hai mera favorite 😇 ek dum alag concept from actual one

Toh bataaya kyun nahi itna jyaada pasand aaya.

Who likes or replies ke no dekhne ke baad mujhe aisa lag raha tha that story din baa din ghatiyaa hote jaa rahi hai....

Trust me agar lina aur kajal nahi hote ahaayad yeh story 7 8 parts ke baad badhti hi nahi........

and now you too got added to them.

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Posted: 6 years ago
Matlab baaki ki itni ghatiyaa hai kya?
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Posted: 6 years ago

Originally posted by: Gayatri9

Matlab baaki ki itni ghatiyaa hai kya?

Bilkul nhi i love all of ur stories lekin clg wala mra fav hai bt isko v plz jaldi update kro na plz

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Posted: 6 years ago

Sorry yaar yeh IF ka new settings ke wajah se I was not able to comment on any posts😐 recently I just tried and commented on one update since then I'm commenting on all posts I think I have messaged you

Ab toh pata chal gaya naa so jaldi updating start karo 😂😂

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Posted: 6 years ago

Chapter 1:

Liked the way u started & described the events that took place👍🏼

Loved the mirror scene, her trying to rub it off but in turn spreading it all over which had became her fate❤️Liked the fact that reasons for her rage against him was not only what happened with Chutki but also what Shweta faced.

Overall a very good update😛U write very well👍🏼

Chapter 2:

Liked AJ's entry😎with anger, intense wrist pulling scene & their closeness was good

Can't these 3 Dil first knock & come😡 never mind atleast they save her SaasuMaa

Predicted scenes but Nice update.

Chapter 3:

Loved Lakshmi's each dialogue that how her SasurJi is desperate for his SR😆

Chapter 4:

Enjoyed reading it😛 Good u added the Flashback scene.

Chapter 5:

Liked Dadi's Aashirwaad giving scene, Akshat's feeling on touching Guddan's hand. Loved their tashan & aankh Mari dialogue.

Very nice update👍🏼

Chapter 6:

Superb update👏

Loved their sweet tortures to each other & Dadi understanding it something else😆aur Bahuyon ki acidity

Chapter 7:

Awesome update⭐️

Pervy ki dhamakedaar dhulai from Sherni😎🥳AJ also smiling watching her dandarate.😛 AJ protects Guddan from falling & got lost in her😳

Pervy requesting AJ to bachao him from his biwi & that too like a puppy🤣

Chapter 8:

Lakshmi & Saru's convos were entertaining especially Lakshmi's dialogue- Bacchhon ke peeche bhagne ke umar mein devar aur nanand ke piche bhaagna pade🤣

Lovely Update😊

Chapter 9:

Liked that you show Vardhaan's dilemma of addressing Guddan & Lakshmi's excitement.

Short one but looking forward to bus trip 😛

Chapter 10:

Good & short update

Loved AJ completing the song sung by Guddan. I like this song.


Finally commented for all parts. Enjoyed reading😛

Plz try to speed up the story and try to show some tashan/arguments in between every scene even if it's very shot.

Will try to comment on other stories soon...

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Posted: 6 years ago

Originally posted by: Akshananju

Sorry yaar yeh IF ka new settings ke wajah se I was not able to comment on any posts😐 recently I just tried and commented on one update since then I'm commenting on all posts I think I have messaged you

Ab toh pata chal gaya naa so jaldi updating start karo 😂😂

Jee but give me time for this particular story I have completely lost the link.

Kya karna tha yeh bhi yaad nahi aa raha

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Posted: 6 years ago

Originally posted by: kavya1994

Chapter 1:

Liked the way u started & described the events that took place👍🏼

Loved the mirror scene, her trying to rub it off but in turn spreading it all over which had became her fate❤️Liked the fact that reasons for her rage against him was not only what happened with Chutki but also what Shweta faced.

Overall a very good update😛U write very well👍🏼

He he he itna bhi khaas nahi tha it was melodramatic. Issiliye jyaada logon ko pasand nahi aati

Chapter 2:

Liked AJ's entry😎with anger, intense wrist pulling scene & their closeness was good

Can't these 3 Dil first knock & come😡 never mind atleast they save her SaasuMaa

Predicted scenes but Nice update.

Yaah but out of the box kuch new nahi tha

Chapter 3:

Loved Lakshmi's each dialogue that how her SasurJi is desperate for his SR😆

Let him fall in love phir dekhna Suhaag raaat kya din bhi nahi chodega

Chapter 4:

Enjoyed reading it😛 Good u added the Flashback scene.

Yeh mujhe yaad nahi aa rahe

Chapter 5:

Liked Dadi's Aashirwaad giving scene, Akshat's feeling on touching Guddan's hand. Loved their tashan & aankh Mari dialogue.

Very nice update👍🏼

Haa unki tashan and nok jhok dekhne main jyaada mazaa aata hai even then imagining and love who entertaining hota hai.

Chapter 6:

Superb update👏

Loved their sweet tortures to each other & Dadi understanding it something else😆aur Bahuyon ki acidity

Inn sab main bahuoon ko acidity karane main jyaada maza aaya.

Chapter 7:

Awesome update⭐️

Pervy ki dhamakedaar dhulai from Sherni😎🥳AJ also smiling watching her dandarate.😛 AJ protects Guddan from falling & got lost in her😳

Pervy requesting AJ to bachao him from his biwi & that too like a puppy🤣

Haa use pitwaana toh tha hi.Why should girls be dependent on men for their security.

Chapter 8:

Lakshmi & Saru's convos were entertaining especially Lakshmi's dialogue- Bacchhon ke peeche bhagne ke umar mein devar aur nanand ke piche bhaagna pade🤣

Lovely Update😊

He he yeh meri bakwaas thi

Chapter 9:

Liked that you show Vardhaan's dilemma of addressing Guddan & Lakshmi's excitement.

Yeh bhi yaad nahi aa raha.

Short one but looking forward to bus trip 😛

Chapter 10:

Good & short update

Loved AJ completing the song sung by Guddan. I like this song.

Even I liked it.


Finally commented for all parts. Enjoyed reading😛

Keep enjoying

Plz try to speed up the story and try to show some tashan/arguments in between every scene even if it's very shot.

Abb har shot main argument aur tashan kahaan se laaye

Will try to comment on other stories soon...

Will wait for it

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Posted: 6 years ago

Originally posted by: kavya1994

Chapter 1:

Liked the way u started & described the events that took place👍🏼

Loved the mirror scene, her trying to rub it off but in turn spreading it all over which had became her fate❤️Liked the fact that reasons for her rage against him was not only what happened with Chutki but also what Shweta faced.

Overall a very good update😛U write very well👍🏼

Thankyou! maybe because it was just planned for single shot

Chapter 2:

Liked AJ's entry😎with anger, intense wrist pulling scene & their closeness was good

But bohot ghisa pita idea tha

Can't these 3 Dil first knock & come😡 never mind atleast they save her SaasuMaa

No unki issi baat main toh maza hai

Predicted scenes but Nice update.

Yaah but har baar naya kya aur kahaan se laau?

Chapter 3:

Loved Lakshmi's each dialogue that how her SasurJi is desperate for his SR😆

Let him fall in love he won't spare day too

Chapter 4:

Enjoyed reading it😛 Good u added the Flashback scene.

Kaunsa? yaad nahi aa raha actually yeh story full padhni padegi for continuation.

Chapter 5:

Liked Dadi's Aashirwaad giving scene, Akshat's feeling on touching Guddan's hand. Loved their tashan & aankh Mari dialogue.

Very nice update👍🏼

He he thankyou!

Chapter 6:

Superb update👏

Loved their sweet tortures to each other & Dadi understanding it something else😆aur Bahuyon ki acidity

haan unhe kaise chain se jeene de.

Chapter 7:

Awesome update⭐️

Pervy ki dhamakedaar dhulai from Sherni😎🥳AJ also smiling watching her dandarate.😛 AJ protects Guddan from falling & got lost in her😳

Pervy requesting AJ to bachao him from his biwi & that too like a puppy🤣

Haa toh we girls should be capable for our security

Dhulwaana toh use tha hi

Chapter 8:

Lakshmi & Saru's convos were entertaining especially Lakshmi's dialogue- Bacchhon ke peeche bhagne ke umar mein devar aur nanand ke piche bhaagna pade🤣

hey who meri bkwaas thi

Lovely Update😊

Chapter 9:

Liked that you show Vardhaan's dilemma of addressing Guddan & Lakshmi's excitement.

Hai na actually sometimes it happens with me too what to address for which relative samajh hi nahi aata.

Short one but looking forward to bus trip 😛

Chapter 10:

Good & short update

Loved AJ completing the song sung by Guddan. I like this song.

Even I liked this song too.

It depicts that no matter how their journey proceeds aj will make her complete.She is incomplete without him.


Finally commented for all parts. Enjoyed reading😛

Thankyou! and keep enjoying

Plz try to speed up the story and try to show some tashan/arguments in between every scene even if it's very shot.

Har scene main tashan and arguments kahan se laau?

Will try to comment on other stories soon...

Will wait for them

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Posted: 6 years ago

Originally posted by: Gayatri9

Chapter 1:

~Thankyou! maybe because it was just planned for single shot

Oh! I didn't know that.


Chapter 2:

~Yaah but har baar naya kya aur kahaan se laau?

I know but you can try👍🏼

Instead of Guddan running away you can show her giving back to him & in this process they become more close where they can feel each other breaths also AJ hurts her a little but she controlled her tears and don't look down. AJ feels her pain but don't show it but somewhere it pricks his heart.

Them 3 DILs can take entry.


Chapter 3:

~Let him fall in love he won't spare day too

Will love to read that😛☺️


Chapter 4:

~Kaunsa? yaad nahi aa raha actually yeh story full padhni padegi for continuation.

FB where Guddan is getting ready like a newly wed woman but stopped when trying to put sindoor as this marriage has no meaning.


Chapter 6:

~haan unhe kaise chain se jeene de.

Exactly.Give them some more acidic feeling


Chapter 7:

~Dhulwaana toh use tha hi

I am ever ready to read his band bajaoying😈


Chapter 8:

~hey who meri bkwaas thi

Par Humko achhi lagi😛


Chapter 9:

Hai na actually sometimes it happens with me too what to address for which relative samajh hi nahi aata.

With me too. Sometimes it's so confusing


Chapter 10:

~Even I liked this song too.

Hi5👋

~It depicts that no matter how their journey proceeds aj will make her complete.She is incomplete without him.

Indeed


~Thankyou! and keep enjoying

Welcome🤗

~Har scene main tashan and arguments kahan se laau?

You can dear, just take your time, go through some stories like this, you will automatically come with such ideas. There are many revenge stories turning into love. I know it takes a little more effort.

~Will wait for them

Ok & will hit likes where left once I get time.

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Posted: 6 years ago
Ji haa actually I was about to post another story but that was not posting at that time So I tried this OS and yeh single shot ka FF ban gaya.

I could have shown maine dekha bhi tha but if I would have shown it in 2nd part itself,aage kyaa dikhaati😕

Maine chapter padh liya tha phir bhi thanks.

Offcourse for sure

Then get ready as Love flourished main bhi it's soon

Yaah.

Haay same pinch sorry hi fi

Actually I went through but the further chapters were locked and kaun pay karega?Actually as I haven't lived in hostel,I travel from home so my bank account doesn't have e payment facility and parents won't pay for such things.

Aree koi baat nahi aapne padha ye hi bohot hai.

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