Originally posted by: kavya1994
Chapter 1:
Liked the way u started & described the events that took place👍🏼
Loved the mirror scene, her trying to rub it off but in turn spreading it all over which had became her fate❤️Liked the fact that reasons for her rage against him was not only what happened with Chutki but also what Shweta faced.
Overall a very good update😛U write very well👍🏼
Thankyou! maybe because it was just planned for single shot
Chapter 2:
Liked AJ's entry😎with anger, intense wrist pulling scene & their closeness was good
But bohot ghisa pita idea tha
Can't these 3 Dil first knock & come😡 never mind atleast they save her SaasuMaa
No unki issi baat main toh maza hai
Predicted scenes but Nice update.
Yaah but har baar naya kya aur kahaan se laau?
Chapter 3:
Loved Lakshmi's each dialogue that how her SasurJi is desperate for his SR😆
Let him fall in love he won't spare day too
Chapter 4:
Enjoyed reading it😛 Good u added the Flashback scene.
Kaunsa? yaad nahi aa raha actually yeh story full padhni padegi for continuation.
Chapter 5:
Liked Dadi's Aashirwaad giving scene, Akshat's feeling on touching Guddan's hand. Loved their tashan & aankh Mari dialogue.
Very nice update👍🏼
He he thankyou!
Chapter 6:
Superb update👏
Loved their sweet tortures to each other & Dadi understanding it something else😆aur Bahuyon ki acidity
haan unhe kaise chain se jeene de.
Chapter 7:
Awesome update⭐️
Pervy ki dhamakedaar dhulai from Sherni😎🥳AJ also smiling watching her dandarate.😛 AJ protects Guddan from falling & got lost in her😳
Pervy requesting AJ to bachao him from his biwi & that too like a puppy🤣
Haa toh we girls should be capable for our security
Dhulwaana toh use tha hi
Chapter 8:
Lakshmi & Saru's convos were entertaining especially Lakshmi's dialogue- Bacchhon ke peeche bhagne ke umar mein devar aur nanand ke piche bhaagna pade🤣
hey who meri bkwaas thi
Lovely Update😊
Chapter 9:
Liked that you show Vardhaan's dilemma of addressing Guddan & Lakshmi's excitement.
Hai na actually sometimes it happens with me too what to address for which relative samajh hi nahi aata.
Short one but looking forward to bus trip 😛
Chapter 10:
Good & short update
Loved AJ completing the song sung by Guddan. I like this song.
Even I liked this song too.
It depicts that no matter how their journey proceeds aj will make her complete.She is incomplete without him.
Finally commented for all parts. Enjoyed reading😛
Thankyou! and keep enjoying
Plz try to speed up the story and try to show some tashan/arguments in between every scene even if it's very shot.
Har scene main tashan and arguments kahan se laau?
Will try to comment on other stories soon...
Will wait for them