Guddan's-REVENGE-OS [FF]{chapter 12 updated on December 16} - Page 16

Originally posted by: Akshananju

Gayuuu😍😍😍

Aww thanks!

Yeh Akshat toh kitna rude hai kahe paar soja huh😢😢😢😢

Hmmm ab what to do?

Aur unhe khudh ab neend nahi aaraha acha hai🤣🤣 kya zaroorat thi bechari chotti se he toh hai thoda sa jagah agar apne room mein de diya hota toh kya jata AJ ka 😂😂😂😂😂

Pehle update ya yeh update dhyaan se read karo he had to share his room with Dadi not guddu as waise bhi they can't stay together till pooja ends and abhi toh aaye hain

Originally posted by: Kammy02

Awsome

thanks as it was for you toh aapko achha lagna jyaada zaroori tha

Finally itne dinon baad iska update mila 😛

That too because of you thankyou!

Jindal sahab bahut rude hote jaa rhe hai pehle bechare vardhan pe phut pare uske baad bechari ko apne room mein ane nhi diya i m sure next part me guddu badla legi iska😈ek min vo khud bhi to nhi so paye guddu ko to kuch krna hi nhi para jindal sahab ke ocd mode jindabad😆

@bold koi shaq? offcourse story ka naam hi revenge hai

Unhe guddu ko jagah deni hi nahi thi unhe toh dadi ko deni thi as they can't be together till the pooja ends

Plz plz plz next part jaldi continue krna plz😒

Aww will surely try for it dear

Originally posted by: Mrihika

Finally u updated

Yeh toh karna hi tha bass koi padh nahi raha tha hence I didn't updated it.

Now plz continue this

😊 Will surely try asap

And nice update

Thankyou I feel good throughout the day after knowing koi padh raha hai

Next part jaldi update krna Will try for it asap

Originally posted by: Chit15

Finally after long time update aaya

Yaa it's actually being 2 long when I posted the last time

Akshat ke song Guddan Ko sochne par majboor kar diya and his OCD prem😆😊Guddu se jyaada safai se pyaar haii Jindal saab ko

Nice update

Thankyou!

Originally posted by: Gayatri9

Finally after so many months this FF got updated.

Chalo Der Aaye par Durast Aaye😁

Loved the Update 😛& it is back on the track.

Now keep updating this & give both Akshan fair chance to increase score on their scoreboard.

Originally posted by: Akshananju

next part keliye waiting

Originally posted by: kavya1994

Finally after so many months this FF got updated.

Yaa

Chalo Der Aaye par Durast Aaye😁

😃

Loved the Update 😛& it is back on the track.

Thank god chalo aapko toh laga revenge waali koi baat hai warna maine hopes hi chood diye the

Now keep updating this & give both Akshan fair chance to increase score on their scoreboard.

I hope next parts will be worth of your expectations

Originally posted by: Kammy02

Continue soon

Chapter 12

It was around half past 2 since sleep was far away from Akshat's sleep.His OCd factor and the sudden sequence of events in his life has not allowed him to do so.He finally could not take it anymore. It was so suffocating for him .He need to breathe He just can't take it anymore.

He finally left his room and went in lawn for some fresh air. Here Guddan too couldn't sleep on floor Sleep was far away from her eyes too. She thought to get out of room and to watch people roaming in hotel from balcony. Thodi der ke liye hi sahi but Mann toh behel jaayegaa.

As she came in lobby,her eyes popped up .She saw Akshat who was leaving the hotel's reception and going towards lawn area.Guddan directly went to balcony to have an overall view what her husband is actually up to.

Guddan-Yeh uncle sathiyaa Gaye hai kyaa? Itni raat Gaye kaun ghumtaa hai bilkul bhiiton ki tarah.Aakhir hai bhi toh shaitaan hi kisi datawne bhoot see Kam thodi naa hai.Khair chodo Hume Kya. But then suddenly an naughty smile captured her lips.

She went in her room and pretended to sleep but couldn't. She was continuously laughing thinking something.Giddan ( mindtalks)- Abb aayegi uncle ki akal thikaane.

Here Akshat came in his room and was shocked.His room was totally messed up.and a little white mice was kissing rather eating his favourite coat.

Ajshat- What the hell? This is my favourite blazer after all it was gifted by my Antara. No I need to do something. This is my Antara s yaad,I need to do something.He did some shushaah to it but mice bhi kahaan Kum jiddi the.With lots of efforts Akshat was just able to shift the mice from his blazer to comforter After running lot behind the mice finally he succeeded in making that mice away from his room. But when he turned he received an mini heart attack 💔

His room was completely a mess. His many of the clothes was lying on floor and bed as he has used them to remove that mice away and he was so exhausted that he hadn't any energy left to clean the mess.Finally he moved in lobby and slept on couch. After few minutes he drive into a deep sleep.

Now here Guddan could not control her excitement much and she decided to peek into Akshat's room. As she peeked she noticed the mess and as she turned so she could return to her own room,she noticed Akshat who was sleeping on couch.He was looking mesmerizingly cute. She couldn't control her feet which took steps near him.

She sat besides him and waved her hands from his hair.She thought - Sorry, bohot pareshaan kiya na humne, I know.....

Flashback-

As Guddan saw Akshat leaving from the hotel room she had an idea of troubling him.Initially she went in his room and messed few things.While she was in lobby she found a new cute friend an little white mice.She named him as chotu.

Guddan- Hey,hi chotu Jerry aapko pata hai,jab hum chote the na,itnuse Tom and Jerry used to be my favorite cartoon.Aapko pata hai Hume toh humare dost bhi chuhiyaa bulaate the.toh kyaa aap humse dosti karenge ?

She took his hands in hers.Toh done fir aajse aap aur hum dost woh bhi pakke waale.Toh chotu humare ek kaam karoge? She took him and placed him inside Akshat's room.

Toh chote now it's completely yours.Aapko Jo karna hai na aap karo.

An feeling of guilt occupied her an lone tear escaped from her eye.She was about to kiss his forehead when an sudden realization struck her.

Kyaa kar rahi hai Guddan ? ISS bholi shakal ke pichhe kitna bada shaitaan hai bhul mat.Apna badla may bhool Guddan focus !!!

Sorry as I know Maine Kal kahaa that but Kal incomplete reh Gaya thaa and short ho to sorry as mobile se updates ho rahi hai....

And bohot mahinoon baad likhaa toh sorry if it's not up to expectations.waise expectations Bata sakte ho taking main unn sab par khari utar Pauu.