SS ~ Heart on the Line ~ Note page 44 - Page 24

Honestly I never thought I’d like & enjoy a story where Geet has 2 children with another man & Maan her bachelor neighbour!!! This sounded like such a mismatch & I only read it casually here n there until now.. the story has picked up so well and I specially enjoyed the last update!! I mean there is so much chemistry between the 2 & the way ur developing this is mindblowing. I’m really really enjoying it. The way Maan has become so comfortable with Geet & the kids, him being naughty n flirty with her is so cute 🥰 loved it. So eager to see how things move forward between them

Wow wat an update❤❤💕❤❤💕

Chapter 14

I can’t figure out who is cuter nyra or geet’s parents 😆

Geet’s family is absolutely adorable , no wonder geet is such an amazing mom even though she is doing it all single handedly.

And u captured a Mother’s emotions perfectly when they drop off their child to their first day of school.

Love how geet & maan always run into each other ..... the park , the restaurant & now the grocery store . And maan teaching geet his art of flirting was funny.

Argh , the update was going so well until this wretched Rahul showed up & demanding his children w/o any forewarning ....... is this guy for real ...... it seems like he likes in his own selfish world ...... I totally loved how maan stood up for geet & my absolute favourite part of the update was when maan made a tense situation light-hearted when he made the ass comment 😆

Thank you 🤗

Chapter 14

Fantastic Chapter

Geet meets Maan in the grocer and he is busy once again flirting

with a woman

when Nyra calls out as Papa instead of Pepper

oh that was spot on and sweet

Maan frustrated that his Date walked away

but then he could spend the afternoon with Geet and the kids at her place

oh hell no Rahul comes over to Geet's and demands his children now

as his mother is leaving to India

he is such an Ass does not even care about their routines or anything

just busy playing Daddy

Geet dropped Nyra to school it's her first day Geet went to her parents house bit emotional

Maan Geet is good friend they teasing taunting and helping each other

Maan Dade gone bz of Nyra he bit upset geet invite him for dinner

Rahul came to take kids but Geet not ready bz it's not the way without informing to her

Nice update..

Geet is emotional on first day of nyra schooling..

After dropping nyra school she spend her time with her parents..

Geet along with children went to grocery shop there she saw Maan flirting ..

Geet and nyra flopped maan date ..

Rahul came to geet house and asked for children as his mother is going to India and wants to spend time with children, but geet refused..

Waiting for next update..

Nice update. Nice banter between Geet and Maan. Rahul is really a pain Geet should really get rid of him.

HI. Just found this and read it in one go. enjoyed reading it. waiting for the next update

Loved it.

Nyra starting school. Can understand the moms sadness.

Rahul is a jerk.

Maan and Geet share a lovely bond.

Lovely update

Loved it

Nyra going to school and geet started to miss her ...

Omg geet played a prank on maan and his date ran away ....

Maan s truly a friend for geet and geet s also free around him ..both pulling each other leg ...

Rahul s headache for Geet ...

Continue soon

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